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Author: Lord Bane Kronos
Date posted: 8/11/2003 7:22:40 PM
Lord Bane Kronos's Comments:

that was cute having nephewes the same age as the solos I can relate to the horrors the rougues had to go through good job

Author: Barissa
Date posted: 8/12/2003 8:10:42 AM
Barissa's Comments:

well, that was fun! I really laughed! Great job, I think I spent a goog 45 mins reading it, but that was cool! :)


Author: Jaina
Date posted: 8/12/2003 10:27:03 AM
Jaina's Comments:

this was so funny. it was realy good. i fell so bad for the rouges though.

Author: Crash Test Mommy
Date posted: 8/12/2003 11:03:22 AM
Crash Test Mommy's Comments:

Awesome! I haven't laughed that hard in months! You really hit the Solo kids personalities dead on. It's REALLY a nice change of pace to read something about them in which they DON'T manage to get kidnapped somehow. PLEASE write more!

Author: NarundiJedi
Date posted: 8/12/2003 12:12:49 PM
NarundiJedi's Comments:

That was hilarious, Yub yub! :D I had a fun time reading it through! Congrats on your first story in the archive!

Author: Jedi_Dajuan
Date posted: 8/12/2003 1:05:07 PM
Jedi_Dajuan's Comments:

That was the funniest story I have read in a LONG time!!!

Author: jaina64
Date posted: 8/12/2003 1:58:40 PM
jaina64's Comments:

I loved the story.I'm at work trying not to laugh out loud reading it.

Author: *@#%*@#$
Date posted: 8/12/2003 4:53:53 PM
*@#%*@#$'s Comments:

i can relate to this so much because i work as a counselor of 4 year olds at a camp. i pity the babysitters so much. it was a really funny well written story!!

Author: Jedi_Alea
Date posted: 8/12/2003 6:02:05 PM
Jedi_Alea's Comments:

This is probably the most funniest fanfic I have ever read! You've got the kids down perfectly! I've not read much about the Rogues other than Wedge and Corran, and it was hilarious to see how childish Wes could be! I laughed out loud too many times to count! Excellent writing! Please, do more!

Author: Naboos_Princess  (signed)
Date posted: 8/12/2003 8:39:06 PM
Naboos_Princess's Comments:

This is a very cute story. Nice job!

Author: jedishellyskywalker
Date posted: 8/13/2003 5:33:43 AM
jedishellyskywalker's Comments:

YUB YUB!!! This has to be the funniest story I've ever read!!!

Author: DarthyVader
Date posted: 8/13/2003 3:05:42 PM
DarthyVader's Comments:

this has got to be the funniest fanfic EVER! it sounds like what i do when i babysit, bending on hand and knees to the kids, asking them to stop. I LOVED IT AND AM OUT OF MY SEAT LAUGHING!

Author: Darth_Pepsi  (signed)
Date posted: 8/13/2003 4:25:58 PM
Darth_Pepsi's Comments:

Shavit... that was GOOD!!!!!!!!!!
Geeze... *glances at pathetic paragraph of her own X-W fic* THAT IS DING DANG DONG GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!
Long live Giltella.

Author: Isbeth
Date posted: 8/15/2003 12:49:47 PM
Isbeth's Comments:

Great Story!

Author: Hallafeniel
Date posted: 8/15/2003 1:51:22 PM
Hallafeniel's Comments:

Geez, what a funny story, the funniest fanfic I've
read so far. Just keep up writing fics like that.
Can't wait to read more from you

Author: 5176
Date posted: 8/15/2003 5:36:21 PM
5176's Comments:

Great Story; It's the best laugh that i have had in the longest time. I really enjoyed it alot. Please continue to right more stories. Thanks

Author: Aayla
Date posted: 8/15/2003 5:50:23 PM
Aayla's Comments:

I loved this, I babysit three kids, the same ages as the solos, and I can definetly relate! Like somebody else said, I'm glad there's a story about the solos where they actually don't get kidnappped.

Author: LadyElaine
Date posted: 8/15/2003 6:07:57 PM
LadyElaine's Comments:


Okay, Jaina needs to be grounded till she's twenty, Jacen till he's thirty, and Anakin till he's forty.

And Wes and Hobbie should be grounded for life! ; )

Author: Ysanne_Isard
Date posted: 8/15/2003 8:10:12 PM
Ysanne_Isard's Comments:

Yub! You got a story in the archive! :D *showers with timbits*

Author: Penquin
Date posted: 8/15/2003 11:21:04 PM
Penquin's Comments:

that was great. wes is one of my favorite characters

Author: Zetura Dracos
Date posted: 8/16/2003 11:08:37 AM
Zetura Dracos's Comments:

So good I skipped lunch to finish reading it. This is quite possibly the funniest story I've read since that Dragonlance book "Conundrum". Great work!

Author: Lieutenant Reylen
Date posted: 8/16/2003 11:16:27 AM
Lieutenant Reylen's Comments:

An excellent story - well-written, a pleasure to read, and best of all - hugely enjoyable! Keep up the great work :)

Author: jedi girl solo
Date posted: 8/16/2003 11:20:51 AM
jedi girl solo's Comments:

this was a really funny story! ialmost died laughing. the solo kids are my favorite you humiliated rogue squadron is freakin' awesome.i'm beggingyou, please write more!!!!!!

Author: LordNyax89
Date posted: 8/16/2003 12:49:59 PM
LordNyax89's Comments:

Hilarious story!
It's appropriate, considering Jaina WILL eventually become a starfighter pilot (in NJO), and that Jacen will become a great Jedi.

Author: TenelKa YoungJedi
Date posted: 8/17/2003 2:20:56 PM
TenelKa YoungJedi's Comments:

this was fantastic
i read it late in the night and couldn`t stop until i was finished
it the funniest story i ever read

Author: ColePierce  (signed)
Date posted: 8/17/2003 7:11:51 PM
ColePierce's Comments:

WOW. This is truly the best-written piece I've read so far on this site. Very entertaining scenarios, and amazingly developed characters. I had a blast seeing how the adult soldiers at times were as immature as the children! Wes was by far my favorite, and the lecture Wedge received from Ackbar at the end was hilarious. I think the kids acted too far beyond their respective ages to be realistic, but it was very fun nonetheless.

Author: Rono
Date posted: 8/18/2003 6:32:30 AM
Rono's Comments:

I really, really liked it. It has the feel of a fan-film, something the makers really had a lot of fun making. My one criticism would be that it was a little too long. Keep up the good work!

Author: Siri Ruane
Date posted: 8/18/2003 7:03:40 AM
Siri Ruane's Comments:

I remember reading this at the forums. *evil grin*

Once again, great story!!! It's absolutely hillarious!

Author: Chewi333
Date posted: 8/18/2003 5:28:49 PM
Chewi333's Comments:

LOL.Great Story.I ve read most of the X-WING books and you captured the pilots personalits perfect.And you had the kifds personalities down to a science.YUB YUB COMANDER!

Author: DarthyVader
Date posted: 8/18/2003 6:21:39 PM
DarthyVader's Comments:

I can not stop reading and laughing! but i've been thinking that a better title would have been 'Not the Galaxy's Greatest Sitters'

But it is a great job any way

(still giggiling:))

Author: Child_of_Serenity
Date posted: 8/18/2003 7:11:54 PM
Child_of_Serenity's Comments:

This is officially the funniest story I have ever read!!!!!!! I nearly died laughing! ! ! ! ! You should, so, write a sequel.

Author: sheepdogg p.
Date posted: 8/22/2003 6:48:42 AM
sheepdogg p.'s Comments:

Yo! That was hilarious! It made my fanfic i'm working on right now (about yoda) look like a peice of crap! Write some more!

Author: sologirl
Date posted: 8/23/2003 12:13:33 AM
sologirl's Comments:

that was the best fanfic i'v ever read. you have got to wright more soon.

Author: Safire Ranmako  (signed)
Date posted: 8/23/2003 1:34:50 PM
Safire Ranmako's Comments:

Tis was soooooo Good, Keep up the giid wirk And write a Sequal.

Author: Safire Ranmako  (signed)
Date posted: 8/23/2003 1:34:56 PM
Safire Ranmako's Comments:

This was soooooo Good, Keep up the giid wirk And write a Sequal.

Author: Julie
Date posted: 8/26/2003 7:43:25 PM
Julie's Comments:

Interesting story. I wrote a 3 page babysitting story, but this was much much better....I liked the flashes of humor.
I don't usually have time to read these things....but I very much liked it.

Date posted: 8/27/2003 7:13:13 PM
MJSLSBS's Comments:

Loved it! I had a free study period because our teacher wasn't their so I read this and everybody wanted to know why I was laughing so much! I couldn't help it. It's sooo Hilerious!

Keep Writing. It would be great if you wrote a sequel to it.


Author: Dark_Jedi_Kam
Date posted: 8/28/2003 2:08:24 PM
Dark_Jedi_Kam's Comments:

That was one of the best FanFics I've ever read. I got into trouble from laughing too loud at work, but it was well worth it. Great job, can't wait to read your next one

Author: Vice Chancellor Griffin  (signed)
Date posted: 8/31/2003 3:17:30 PM
Vice Chancellor Griffin's Comments:

Firstley, I liked It. so don`t have a mardie becase im going to be critical of the story for no readaly aprant reason.
I dident like It becase I felt it was too frantic too much going on at once. (this isn`t verry constructive is in. Sorry. Ill stop now.)

Author: Fox McLeod  (signed)
Date posted: 10/2/2003 10:07:13 PM
Fox McLeod's Comments:

Great job on a really humorous fanfic!! The personalities of the pilots and the Solo children were very accurate. I'll forever think of Wedge now as General Sillyface, especially since Wedge is really known for sticking out like a sore thumb in a crowd. Pacing of the fanfic was awesome which is key for great comic timing. Keep up the great work.

Author: puppyglo
Date posted: 10/8/2003 1:45:35 AM
puppyglo's Comments:

I love this! It's hilarious! The best line (if there is one; all of them are so great and funny!) is:

"What are you doing here?"

"Looking for Trouble," Face explained.

"And Mischief!" Jacen added.

Amazing! lol

Author: Thuku  (signed)
Date posted: 10/13/2003 9:34:28 PM
Thuku's Comments:

Great work. It's nice to see a really funny piece of fan fiction. Of course, it also involved Wedge and Janson, which makes it a winning combination in my book anyway.

Author: Rishi
Date posted: 10/19/2003 8:39:18 PM
Rishi's Comments:

WOW!! That stoy was absolutely hilarious!! I laughed so hard I cried!

Author: Vader
Date posted: 10/25/2003 5:17:56 PM
Vader's Comments:


Author: JagSeal
Date posted: 10/27/2003 2:04:20 PM
JagSeal's Comments:

That was great...i havn't laughed so much since I finished Starfighters of Adumar...

Author: mara atrieadies
Date posted: 11/26/2003 12:42:01 PM
mara atrieadies's Comments:

i have never laughed so hard, you ought to write another babysitter adventure with this crowd again.

Author: Mistah Mugie Badaboom Badaboom
Date posted: 11/28/2003 3:23:32 AM
Mistah Mugie Badaboom Badaboom's Comments:

GAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! if you're trying to kill me with laughter, i'm sippin' vodka with the dodos', baby! damn that was good. good? freakin' funny, more like. WRITE MOHOHOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep this up and i think i just might marry you. if you're female. and yes, i'm kidding.

Author: Brightbear
Date posted: 12/1/2003 9:02:43 PM
Brightbear's Comments:

Hee... Hee...
That was very funny. I laughed so much my brother started reading over my shoulder. I think sometimes the kids were a little too deliberate in their attempts to create mischief... but you did Janson so well! Really made my day :)

Author: Tenniru
Date posted: 12/15/2003 4:42:49 PM
Tenniru's Comments:

I died laughing. After playing games like Rouge Squadron and the X-Wing series, it's great to see those guys out of the cockpit. The way you infuriated Ackbar and Fey'la was hilarious.

Author: MutantJediBouer
Date posted: 1/26/2004 10:17:17 PM
MutantJediBouer's Comments:

This story was so funny! It was great to see the Solo kids before the Young Jedi Knights series, the toddlers are like concentrated life-forms. The way you had them cheese off almost everyone was hilarious. Great Story.

Author: Hisan
Date posted: 1/29/2004 8:29:53 PM
Hisan's Comments:

"And try to remember that the existence of our Ewok forces is supposed to be classified."
Sequel?? :D :D

Author: The Stormtrooper Shrink  (signed)
Date posted: 2/15/2004 5:54:14 PM
The Stormtrooper Shrink's Comments:

Ha! Ha! Ha!

*clutch at my side and fall off my chair*

*gasp* G-great story!

Author: Pedro_the_Great
Date posted: 3/3/2004 5:46:39 PM
Pedro_the_Great's Comments:

That was awesome! I loved it. It took me a while to read and it was AMAZING! Man You have to write more like this!

Author: Shira
Date posted: 4/3/2004 8:57:09 AM
Shira's Comments:

ROFL That was good.. and so funny.

Author: Martyn, Jedi and X-Wing Pilot
Date posted: 4/9/2004 5:16:57 PM
Martyn, Jedi and X-Wing Pilot's Comments:

That was really really good. I enjoyed it very much, as Rogue Squadron is one of my favorite topics. The characters are believable, which is one of the most important things that I look for in Science Fiction of any sort. This makes my humor about Rogue Squadron look lame. I've worked with children of this age, and I TOTALLY feel for Wedge and Corran. (Corran unable to telekinetically get his lightsaber back was one of my favorite parts.)

My one comment is this: Although I have read very little where Janson is a major character (Starfighters of Adumar by Aaron Allston only), I do think that he was a little too childish at times. Like I said, though, I don't know that much about him when he's "in the Spotlight".

Keep up the good work.

Author: jedihobbit
Date posted: 6/5/2004 1:46:38 PM
jedihobbit's Comments:


Author: Lost Jedi
Date posted: 9/6/2004 2:25:33 PM
Lost Jedi's Comments:

Oh, that was sooooooo blasting funny! My favorite part was when Wedge had to explian about the confeity and when Wes, Hobbie, and Jaina made the cookies for Wedge.

Author: jenco
Date posted: 9/21/2004 8:14:20 PM
jenco's Comments:

That was wicked awesome. I have never laughed so hard with a fanfic. That was too funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author: TheMacisBack
Date posted: 9/25/2004 3:54:50 PM
TheMacisBack's Comments:

Very good. realistic portail of the characters

Author: Tasia Solo of Dathomir  (signed)
Date posted: 10/22/2004 12:39:44 PM
Tasia Solo of Dathomir's Comments:

Awesome! I love stories with Jaina and Jacen when they were little. This one reminds me of the Jedi Academy Trilogy. Very humorous. It's amazing how successful you were with the humor. I'd like to read more from you. In the meantime, may the Force be with you!

Author: SWpants666
Date posted: 12/13/2004 7:36:08 PM
SWpants666's Comments:

Last time I laughed that hard at something Star Wars was when I read one of Allston's X-Wings. You've captured the characters PERFECTLY!!!! No doubt about it, you should definitely be writing regular SW fiction. That was the greatest fanfic I have ever read. i don't think I could ever get bored of reading it. Absolutely wonderful, infinity 10s

Author: Lost Jedi
Date posted: 2/7/2005 11:03:35 AM
Lost Jedi's Comments:

This story will never get old!
"Yes it does"
"No it doesn't"
"I'm not having this aguement with you"
"Yes you are"
I love that part! This is the best story ever! Great job!

Author: Kyp'sLover
Date posted: 4/17/2005 12:24:05 PM
Kyp'sLover's Comments:

*howls insanely with laughter*

this was wonderful! *applause*

Author: Renka
Date posted: 4/28/2005 4:02:14 PM
Renka's Comments:

I laughed so hard I fell off my chair!!
Wonderful job!
Please, please write more, I beg you. :D

Author: Icegirl
Date posted: 5/20/2005 7:02:03 PM
Icegirl's Comments:

that was probably the best fanfiction i have ever read (and trust me...i have read many)

Author: djcati
Date posted: 6/19/2005 9:38:01 AM
djcati's Comments:

Just found this fic...Heee..... I haven't laughed that much in a loooong time.


Author: Tenel Ka
Date posted: 11/14/2005 5:13:15 PM
Tenel Ka's Comments:

That was just FANTASTIC! I think the people at the library want to killl me. That is just great though. I love Anakin and Jaina. Absolutely perfect.

Author: Commander5052  (signed)
Date posted: 11/19/2005 7:18:54 PM
Commander5052's Comments:

Yub yub, daughter of the aforementioned words.
Excellent fic, I really loved it.

Author: 1-800-jedigirl
Date posted: 2/6/2006 3:58:19 PM
1-800-jedigirl's Comments:

im going to kill myself if i read this fic again exspecially with veggie

Author: Spyman
Date posted: 5/29/2006 1:14:54 PM
Spyman's Comments:

I love it plain hellarius

"Phase One of Operation Fey'lya's a Big Meanie."

my favriote part

Author: Kisoli Oiprisa
Date posted: 6/12/2006 10:03:02 AM
Kisoli Oiprisa's Comments:

Lol! wickedly funny! Now how bout a part two :b

Author: Grace
Date posted: 10/7/2006 8:58:10 AM
Grace's Comments:


Author: thechief
Date posted: 12/17/2006 10:56:46 PM
thechief's Comments:

Fantastic story. I normally do not read fan fiction, but this story was amazing, well-written, and incredibly funny. You got the personalities of the characters spot-on. Wedge, Tycho, Wes, Hobbie and the rest of the Rogues and Wraiths are some of the best characters to ever come out of the Star Wars universe, and you have done them justice here. Quality, quality fan fiction. Thank you. And keep writing, please.

Author: arianna
Date posted: 5/8/2007 3:48:08 PM
arianna's Comments:

this is freaking hilarious! seriously one of the funniest things i have ever read!

Author: Xira the Bimm
Date posted: 9/1/2007 12:51:41 AM
Xira the Bimm's Comments:

Loved it, so funny I almosted cryed by the end. Great job!

Author: Firebird
Date posted: 9/20/2007 10:14:43 AM
Firebird's Comments:


You had me laughing my head off at this!

Author: jedigirl
Date posted: 11/4/2007 2:44:23 PM
jedigirl's Comments:

We're looking for Trouble! And Mischief! Loved that . ;) THE ENDING WAS HILARIOUS! I can just imagine them all falling in there at the same time. And then, enter Admiral Ackbar! ;)

Author: Gerarra Flur
Date posted: 1/30/2008 8:19:46 AM
Gerarra Flur's Comments:

I absolutely loved the odd refrence to the fact that thses were the "Solo" kids. As though that made their babysitting jobs that more arduous. And it would, considering what kind of blood they come from: Han (a quite and risky-to-the-point-of-insane and hot-headed corillian) and Leia (the daughter of "The Chosen One"). So yes, being a Solo would have quite a bit to do with their heritage.
I can now understand how Jacen turned to the dark side....
Overall, I thought it was a histerical story and a wonderfull addition to the fan fiction world.
10.5 out of 10!

Author: Jaina
Date posted: 12/25/2008 2:49:25 PM
Jaina's Comments:

one word perfect. Laughed so hard, understand the situation as well due to babysitting cousins. You got everyone's personalities just right! 10/10

Author: Eloisa
Date posted: 12/6/2012 5:54:08 AM
Eloisa's Comments:

You're a real deep thinker. Thanks for shraing.

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