Date posted: 9/2/2003 5:33:17 AM
Yay! Im first to comment! First of all, Great Story!! I love the way u think. Amazing idea with how Luke doesnt even recognize her! You r obviously a very talented writer. I hope to see more work from u soon!
Date posted: 9/2/2003 1:38:38 PM
I think it is neat how they all ended up in the same place but nothing came of it.
Date posted: 9/2/2003 1:54:28 PM
This was a good story about what could have happened to Callista. It was sad, but good. Congrats on getting archived!
Date posted: 9/3/2003 9:28:33 AM
Wonderful introspection into one possibility of what became of Callista. I think it was best that Luke and Mara didn't recognize her. There would've been too much guilt felt on their parts otherwise, especially by Luke.
Date posted: 9/4/2003 1:36:04 PM
Ahhhhhh!!!! :D It got in! Congrats!!!
You already know how much I love this, but I'll just say it again - I LOVE IT! :)
Congrats on your first archived fic! :D
Author: Jedi Knight Safira Felan
Date posted: 9/4/2003 3:40:04 PM
Jedi Knight Safira Felan's Comments:
Great fanfic! Really well written! It was so sad, but I can see how that could happen. Good job! I look forward to reading more of your fanfics!
Date posted: 9/5/2003 12:43:16 AM
This is a lovely fic, LianaMara. I don't generally like Callista, but this story was so beautiful that I found myself changing my opinion about her. Good job!
Date posted: 9/5/2003 1:24:21 AM
Beautiful extended metaphor, and lovely vision of Callista. :)
Date posted: 9/8/2003 6:03:13 PM
I love Callista (ok now I'm just inviting flames from Mara Jaders!) and this is an excellent characterization of her. Awww, I'm gonna cry ... =). Just one thing: Mara's a redhead, not a brunette ;)
Date posted: 9/9/2003 6:00:24 AM
Wow, I can't believe I didn't leave this earlier. ;)
First of all, I'd like to thank everyone who left comments on this vig; your feedback is very much appreciated.
And now, thank you to my two main betas, obaona and JediDajuan. You guys helped a lot, and oba, thanks for reading through ALL of my drafts and always being so sweet. I'd also like to thank my TFN betas (TenelKaJedi, and the others I can't remember at this time): you gals are great.
And double thanks to oba, for her wonderful cover art; it's so beautiful, and the author's name is a good idea. ;)
This story was written as a chance for me to explore some possiblem ideas into Callista's future, and I hope everyone enjoyed it. :)
Date posted: 9/12/2003 7:01:53 PM
Geeze... you're making me like Callista... ACH!!!!
Great story, ;-)
Date posted: 10/4/2003 3:21:55 PM
Wow. Yay for Liana! You should join up with John and me in our literary magazine beginnings... we got Dixon to sponsor!!
Author: Jedi of Imladris
Date posted: 10/20/2004 8:15:48 PM
Jedi of Imladris's Comments:
This is a lovely and very touching piece. I truly enjoyed reading it. The analogies and references to the ocean and water were delightful and well handled. Though I have never really liked Callista, this fic made me feel a bit more empathetic towards her and her situation. Great job!
Date posted: 3/22/2009 8:50:43 PM
Thanks for a sad, yet heartwarming story.
Date posted: 12/13/2009 7:31:29 AM
I love this story, keep writing please
Date posted: 9/3/2011 8:34:31 PM
This arctile is a home run, pure and simple!
Date posted: 4/24/2016 8:21:19 PM
Good job mankig it appear easy.