Date posted: 12/15/2003 9:34:43 PM
i noticed something, you must have seen tim burtons version of sleepy hollow. that seen where thrawn meets the seer is like when johnny depp meets the hag woman. good stuff though i liked it.
Date posted: 12/15/2003 9:47:36 PM
I was impressed with this story, the writing was gripping. The only complaint is that this was the story. This could easily begin a much larger story. Short, but still satisifying as a completed story.
Date posted: 12/15/2003 10:51:21 PM
Ah, so I didn't get the first post ;) Glad you liked it. I have seen Sleepy Hollow (once long ago), but I actually was inspired by the scene in Akira Kurosawa's "Rashomon" where they get a witch to conjure up the spirit of a murdered man to testify at the trial of his killer. Thanks to all my betas and the editors! Hope you all enjoyed it!
Author: Andrea Jade
Date posted: 12/16/2003 6:36:20 AM
Andrea Jade's Comments:
Gripping tale, which held my attention. Any plans for developing the story into a longer one?
Author: Rido Jod
Date posted: 12/16/2003 9:46:28 AM
Rido Jod's Comments:
I loved the dark atmosphere in this story. Well done!
Date posted: 12/16/2003 9:53:11 AM
*sneaks in* *glances around* *claps loudly* Wunderbar!!!
Author: Darth Modo
Date posted: 12/16/2003 12:59:19 PM
Darth Modo's Comments:
Boardering on The Exorcist. Kinda had me scared. As far as the one who said 'could be part of a larger story...' I do believe it is. I would suggest that he pin pointed the Nogri (sp) a little to easily. The author should make Thrawn work on the question of the "dark ones".
Author: Jaden Kor
Date posted: 12/18/2003 10:44:02 AM
Jaden Kor's Comments:
Dark and unforgiving.very well put together and quite creative.
Date posted: 12/28/2003 11:57:11 PM
A found this story to be entertaining and talented. I've always loved the character of Thrawn, and wish he had heeded the witch's warning, because his death in the books is a disappointment.
Author: Master Sáwen
Date posted: 1/21/2004 3:21:58 PM
Master Sáwen's Comments:
Woot! It was short...
"But it was so artistically done."
Author: Dex Meridian
Date posted: 1/26/2004 3:26:28 PM
Dex Meridian's Comments:
Great atmosphere. The entire prospect of Thrawn being freaked out makes me shudder. But, as it is in this world, there is a fine line between genius and insanity. Thrawn was flirting with it here. That also had to be the most uncomfortable room I've ever pictured. Very good. Top notch. A+.
Date posted: 2/2/2004 1:32:16 AM
heh. reads like part scene from sleepy hollow, part story of king saul visiting the witch of endor
good job though. too bad i didn't get that part about the noghri until i read the comments...
EDIT: Sorry, but linking is not allowed.
Date posted: 6/26/2010 8:43:17 PM
A terrific idea with pretty solid execution. I enjoyed it. Thrawn's a great character, and it's fun (and creepy) to see him exploring the nature of the Force a bit there.