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Author: Tycalibur  (signed)
Date posted: 9/29/2003 9:01:05 PM
Tycalibur's Comments:

Woohoo! You did it, LP and Gabri. Congratulations on getting these wonderful fics archived!


Author: Lady Padme  (signed)
Date posted: 9/29/2003 9:07:20 PM
Lady Padme's Comments:

I'd like to thank Tycalibur and Jedi-2B for their wonderful beta work on this fic, as well as cosmic for her hard work in creating such lovely cover art. I'd also like to thank obaona, KatarnLead and CalaisKenobi who did the original beta work on my version of He Made My Bed.

A tribute also to obaona, whose lovely Obi/Siri trilogy inspired the Bed Making fics...and to all the handmaidens of Empress Amidala's court who contributed to the madness, thank you all!

And to my evil twin, Gabri_Jade...Woohoo! We made it in! :)

Author: Gabri_Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 9/29/2003 10:12:17 PM
Gabri_Jade's Comments:

I'm really going to have to comment before LadyPadme next time - she's already said it all! :) I'd also like to thank Tycalibur and Jedi-2B for their insightful beta work. It's greatly appreciated, both of you. The cover is beautiful, cosmic; thank you so much. Thanks also to the handmaidens who kept the madness alive - you're the best, girls. And of course, hugs to my wonderful evil twin, LadyPadme. :)

Author: Twin Suns 4  (signed)
Date posted: 9/30/2003 12:56:27 AM
Twin Suns 4's Comments:

This is sooooo funny!! I laughed all the way through. Are you going to write a sequel? I think it needs one as I thought it would have more to do with Luke and Mara as well.
On the whole, it is a really well writen peice. I really enjoyed it.

Author: Solaé  (signed)
Date posted: 10/1/2003 12:52:42 PM
Solaé's Comments:

Still just as funny now as the day they were posted. Ah, memories.

:::giggles madly:::

I just love these, I really do. Such fun wonderful snippets into the lives of these couples. They're so simple, but they're so dead on.

Trés cool, ladies. ;)

Author: Emmi
Date posted: 10/1/2003 1:29:35 PM
Emmi's Comments:

Lovely, Jiehs 1 and 2! Both are great. Gabri, Mara's personality is *perfect* in your HMMB story. Not ready to show her emotions, and all that. And LP-Jieh! How funny! I especially love the snoring bit at the beginning. Great job, girls!

Author: Sunshine  (signed)
Date posted: 10/1/2003 2:13:39 PM
Sunshine's Comments:

*giggles* This fic was so cute. UST is a wonderful thing. The final line was perfect, Gabri and LP. Great job!

Author: padme
Date posted: 10/1/2003 2:22:03 PM
padme's Comments:

I missed the wit and fustration of Han and Leia sometimes. Thank You for bringing it back. I like how you catch the essence of how Mara felt when she saw Luke in her room sound asleep and he did not know she was there.

Author: padme
Date posted: 10/1/2003 2:22:05 PM
padme's Comments:

I missed the wit and fustration of Han and Leia sometimes. Thank You for bringing it back. I like how you catch the essence of how Mara felt when she saw Luke in her room sound asleep and he did not know she was there.

Author: little_jedi  (signed)
Date posted: 10/2/2003 4:59:50 PM
little_jedi's Comments:

Thank you so much for this wonderful fanfic! It reminded me of the fun of The Empire Strikes Back, the best Han/Leia fun around. Congratulations, though I wish you had explored the Mara/Luke one a little more.

Author: LadyElaine
Date posted: 10/3/2003 5:14:09 AM
LadyElaine's Comments:

He made my bed.

And now I have to lie in it.

What a perfect ending! Delightful pair of stories, and you did an excellent job on showing the characters and personalities. : )

Author: Jedi-2B  (signed)
Date posted: 10/3/2003 10:52:32 AM
Jedi-2B's Comments:

These are both such excellent stories, that there was hardly anything to beta! Han and Leia were at their best. You nailed them perfectly, LP. And Gabri, you are at a par with Zahn at getting Mara's character just right. Just too bad Luke slept through the whole thing!

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 10/4/2003 7:47:03 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

This one made me laugh aloud . . . to strange looks from my roommate! Great job. Han and Leia are perfectly in character, as are Mara and Luke in the beginning. I love how Mara is falling for Luke and won't even let herself acknowledge it-- and Leia's exactly the same way. Why can't there be any hopeless romantics in Star Wars? ;)

Author: Moebius  (signed)
Date posted: 10/13/2003 9:16:06 PM
Moebius's Comments:

Although everyone is saying that the L/M story should have been longer, I think it was perfect. Nice insight into a complicated character, Gabri. Loved the conflict she has between herself.

Padme, great job on the H/L story. Funny and sarcastic on one side, but still sad on another.

The best part of this whole thing, though, is the way the writing style and length of each story fits its couple. Good contrast between the two, as well.

Well done. :D

Author: Quiller
Date posted: 10/31/2003 12:06:15 PM
Quiller's Comments:

A fun read. So glad I finally got around to checking it out. You nailed Han and Leia (personality-wise, I mean).

Author: hazardmagnet
Date posted: 11/24/2003 3:54:04 PM
hazardmagnet's Comments:

very good, the first part was just like the conflicted mara and the second was just to damn funny

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 11/24/2003 7:26:08 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

Very clever and thoroughly enjoyable!!

Author: Mika
Date posted: 12/21/2003 7:41:26 PM
Mika's Comments:

wow! that's really amazing! it's captured han and leia's separate senses of humor down to last scathing remark! could have used a bit more luke and mara-- what happened to them? but otherwise, excellent and i hope to read more of your work!

Author: Aquarius
Date posted: 1/15/2004 10:16:36 AM
Aquarius's Comments:

I commend you for the way you have gotten inside Han and Leia's heads. You are one of precious few authors who have actually *listened* to what the characters are telling you. This has been a delightful read, and I hope to see more of your work in the future.

Author: Valiowk  (signed)
Date posted: 4/9/2004 7:50:03 AM
Valiowk's Comments:

That was a very amusing read. I like the way you've managed to bring out Mara, Han and Leia's personalities in a humourous work like this. :) Nicely done!

Author: Jedi Knight Quia Lor  (signed)
Date posted: 4/12/2004 7:44:18 PM
Jedi Knight Quia Lor's Comments:

Can I giggle madly, yet?

I LOVE this! The Luke/Mara and Han/Leia stuff is definitely the best. So, of course, the authors of this piece are the best, too. I think I can get some more senators to vote for that one. :)

The Force will be with you...always!

Author: Lost Jedi
Date posted: 9/5/2004 10:28:41 PM
Lost Jedi's Comments:

That was so funny! I loved it! You guys did a great job in bringing out Leia and Han's attitudes! I absalutly loved it! Keep it up!

Author: jade_eyes
Date posted: 11/6/2004 3:50:22 PM
jade_eyes's Comments:

Good work! I kept hoping Luke would wake up or say something and Mara realizes he's known she was there all along, and then what would they say? :) And Han and Leia!! Priceless! I love how the relationships are just on the edge of becoming! :-,

Author: Murgatroyd
Date posted: 9/14/2005 5:10:59 PM
Murgatroyd's Comments:

I haven't been reading these fics for too long, but I tell you this has easily been the best so far. You've captured the characters perfectly, all of them. Classic reading!

Author: Shuro  (signed)
Date posted: 2/26/2007 9:07:51 PM
Shuro's Comments:

well done and funny too!

Author: Stephanie
Date posted: 3/1/2017 8:50:58 PM
Stephanie's Comments:

I liked that a lot! Well written both of you!

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