Author: Morian Miner  (signed)
Date posted: 10/20/2003 10:33:13 PM
Morian Miner's Comments:

A quick Thank You to all the readers and reviews who helped get this story finished.

Author: Gorvash
Date posted: 10/21/2003 5:00:10 PM
Gorvash's Comments:

This was awsome! What a wonderful and vivid description of the "Ascension" of the dark side.

Author: Darth Minus  (signed)
Date posted: 10/22/2003 3:20:19 AM
Darth Minus's Comments:

Great to see some fic outside safe boundaries! (i.e. not in the classic trilogy.) Good job. I really enjoyed the hint of Exar Kun. I personally feel he was under-appreciated in the expanded universe. Sure he lived four-thousand years ago and was the baddest sith to haunt the galaxy, but if you're gonna bring him back... do it right! That is what I would say to Kevin J. Anderson, or whoever wrote the Jedi Academy Trilogy. Oh! Great cover art too! Good stuff. =)

Author: Ancarai
Date posted: 10/23/2003 10:04:55 AM
Ancarai's Comments:

I loved the definate Dark Side influence, very different from other fics I've read. Good writing, great discriptions.

Author: darth carious
Date posted: 11/4/2003 11:02:28 PM
darth carious's Comments:

impressive, most impressive. excellent story,as well as believable characters. keep the fics coming.

Author: Skywalk272
Date posted: 11/12/2003 8:00:23 AM
Skywalk272's Comments:

Really Really very awsome. I truely enjoyed a story from a Sith point of view. What deep characheters as well. I almost feel like Cyra was almost too powerful for her time in training, In fact she seemed to even rival Vader's skill, but hey what the heck.

Author: Zal Taur
Date posted: 11/27/2003 5:17:42 PM
Zal Taur's Comments:

Inspiring.

I haven't read much fan fiction. But this was as good as any of the official novels.

I can only hope to write as good.

Author: Ry
Date posted: 12/30/2003 8:30:58 AM
Ry's Comments:

Very well done. Nice to see somebody writing stories about the Sith and not just the Jedi.

Author: ungwendil  (signed)
Date posted: 12/31/2003 2:02:55 AM
ungwendil's Comments:

Because of its length, it took me a while to get to read this. Now that I have I am very happy I did.
Even though I personally deem it unlikely the racistic Sith would recruit a woman in their ranks, I found this story utterly convincing.

Very, very good. I was especially touched by Cyra's mother pleading for her daughter to return to the Light Side.

Author: Ungerlion Foe
Date posted: 1/9/2004 6:16:51 PM
Ungerlion Foe's Comments:

Great fan-fic! Enjoyed the dark atmosphere a lot! Can't wait who the next apprentice, Sidious's master, will be! :)

Author: Darth Raven
Date posted: 1/19/2004 3:52:42 PM
Darth Raven's Comments:

Great Story about the Dark Side of The Force

Author: Darth Raven
Date posted: 1/19/2004 3:52:48 PM
Darth Raven's Comments:

Great Story about the Dark Side of The Force

Author: mind_drivel
Date posted: 12/5/2004 3:30:46 PM
mind_drivel's Comments:

This story was..ahem..about a Sith girl who was way roo, well, nice. it makes me sad that people havent yet realized that evil is evil, no just "kinda bad".... it makes me want to cry

Author: Sidi
Date posted: 5/10/2010 2:53:21 PM
Sidi's Comments:

This story was tiring, really. Very predictable and strange. There are some very positive comments on this fic, but I, personately, was not swept away in emotion and anticipation.
By the way, there are some typing or grammar mistakes i stumbled upon...
But as a HUGE Sith fan, thank darkness not everyone writes about Han.

Author: Ki-Aaron-Mundi  (signed)
Date posted: 6/26/2010 5:37:22 PM
Ki-Aaron-Mundi's Comments:

A very enjoyable read. I liked the way you interweaved flashbacks with the main story, and I thought it was great that you told a story in a heretofore unexplored period of the Sith's development. It's nice to see what they were up to between Darths Bane and Sidious.