Author: Jedi Princess
Date posted: 1/13/2004 8:08:01 PM
Jedi Princess's Comments:
Good story.My favorite stories are with Padme' and Anakin.-and their life adventure.
Date posted: 1/14/2004 6:05:10 AM
A big thank you to everyone that read this on the JC Boards and liked it so much that I got the confidence to submit here. A big thank you to my numerous betas especially hardowrking, dedicated Dally. And a special thank you to all my dear friends on the Boards especially Knight-Ander and geo3 who continue to inspire/intimidate and encourage me.
Date posted: 1/15/2004 5:34:33 PM
Terrific! Awesome! Incredibly great I love Padme and Anakin stroies, I get sucked in the story. I love, hope you have more for us......still waiting....still here.......
Date posted: 1/15/2004 5:37:11 PM
I loved this. Too bad this wasn't conveyed in the film. You should have written the novelization. You managed to convey what the whole book really didn't. Just because it's not practical to fall in love with someone, doesn't mean you won't.
Author: Lady Starra
Date posted: 1/15/2004 6:59:25 PM
Lady Starra's Comments:
I thought this story was beautiful! You absolutely caught me up in the happiness and excitement of falling in love and having your love returned. Written so elegantly and very true to character. I wish it had been conveyed like this in the film, very innocent and beautiful instead of awkward and lustful. Terrific job!
Date posted: 1/16/2004 3:26:21 PM
This was so touching. You have such a gift of description for writing. I loved it! Can't wait to see more.
Date posted: 1/21/2004 5:30:25 AM
Not my favourite Star Wars moment, but decent enough retold by you. Enjoyed it.
Author: Greenleaf from LakeRetreat
Date posted: 2/5/2004 1:32:47 AM
Greenleaf from LakeRetreat's Comments:
WOW! That's great! Sweet, deep, exciting.
Also because I was there when this scene was shot, and "I 'll remember that day for the rest of my life" too.
Author: Amidala Skywalker
Date posted: 8/29/2004 12:25:20 PM
Amidala Skywalker's Comments:
Wow! This is my second time reading this and i just love it! You wrote it perfectly! I could totally see this scene in the movie! Even though some of it was...Anyway it was a fantastic peice and you should definetly write more Padme and Anakin stories!
Date posted: 11/10/2004 9:13:55 PM
I really liked your story! You did an awsome job expressig how Padme' felt about Anakin. It was one of the most desriptive stories I've read! I think it would be interesting to write about it from Anakin's perspective. Keep writing such great stories!
Date posted: 6/30/2005 3:16:31 PM
Oh this is so touchign and so sweet! Ilove the internal struggles she feels and how in the end she finally gives into her heart and just enjoys this rare moment of joy.
Date posted: 4/8/2006 7:30:01 PM
This was a beautifully written story. You wrote it like it was in the book, but you added what wasn't in the movie. I love how this story is. It's like a breath of fresh air. Wonderfully written and wonderfully told. Excellent work. I wish all fanfiction was this good.