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Author: JainaSoloFel
Date posted: 2/16/2004 3:43:13 PM
JainaSoloFel's Comments:

That was AWSOME! I wish it really had gone that Way! Fun.

Author: MutantJediBouer  (signed)
Date posted: 2/16/2004 9:52:31 PM
MutantJediBouer's Comments:

That was funny. Such a very fore-inspired story... Very cool.

Author: Jedi_Riggs
Date posted: 2/16/2004 10:38:21 PM
Jedi_Riggs's Comments:

Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. Well done!

Author: Darth Solo
Date posted: 2/17/2004 12:27:07 AM
Darth Solo's Comments:

Shame it wasn't Kyp Duroon and Jaina! They would make the story even more awesome. No offence but Jag Fel is such an annoying and pointless character! The Jacen & Tahiri thing was awesome though. One more thing how could I bring back Anakin Solo? Resurrect him with the force or something??? Comments please

Author: Master Keralys
Date posted: 2/19/2004 8:19:38 AM
Master Keralys's Comments:

Amusing, but... Jaina dropped over that??? She's been way too affected by her hormones.

Oh - and the Jacen/Tahiri thing: blech!!! I liked how you pulled it off, but I personally can't stand that pairing. Given that, the fact that I could stand it in this means excellent work.

Author: AdamSolo
Date posted: 2/19/2004 9:27:56 AM
AdamSolo's Comments:

That was pretty good, but Jacen and Tahiri?! That is just gross.

Author: Lord_Malice  (signed)
Date posted: 2/19/2004 1:51:43 PM
Lord_Malice's Comments:

GREAT story!!! I laughed my Bantha off at the end! Well written and very true to character form. Great job!

Author: jedi girl solo
Date posted: 2/19/2004 4:21:53 PM
jedi girl solo's Comments:


haha that was great!!!

i had the shock of my life when i read that the blonde girl was tahiri and not danni. :)

Author: JediDad
Date posted: 2/19/2004 6:25:28 PM
JediDad's Comments:

Great Job !!! A masterful piece of writting. Keep up the good work .

Author: Dark_Lighter
Date posted: 2/19/2004 7:01:25 PM
Dark_Lighter's Comments:

Wonderfuly done, Lex. Much better than the offical ending.

Author: Naboos_Princess  (signed)
Date posted: 2/19/2004 7:38:30 PM
Naboos_Princess's Comments:

That was a very cute story. I especially liked the scene at the end. :)

I thought Jacen was with Danni, too, at first...happy to see he wasn't!

Author: leia__naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 2/19/2004 11:47:17 PM
leia__naberrie's Comments:

Congratulations Lex on getting this archived!

I read this on the JC Boards but being non-EU compliant, I had only broad ideas of the main players and Iím sure I didnít review it.

Well, let me say now that I enjoyed it very much. Despite my ignorance, I could relate to this story because it is filled with the universal themes of seasonal family drama with all the subtle undercurrents that will run beneath the holiday cheer. Apart from the Ďsecretsí being kept, there are the feuds: Han and Soontir, the recalled memories of lost ones: Chewbacca and Anakin, and, of course, late-night nookie!

And the cover art is wonderful. My compliments to the artist.

Author: Jedi_Master_Jinzler
Date posted: 2/20/2004 5:35:07 AM
Jedi_Master_Jinzler's Comments:

Great story, the only thing I really didn't like was the pairing of Jacen and Tahiri. I hope Del Rey and the Star Wars authors eventually marry Danni and Jacen together!

Author: TahiriSoloFan
Date posted: 2/20/2004 8:08:16 AM
TahiriSoloFan's Comments:

Lex, you know that I loved this on the boards and I still do. Your sense of humour and love of family shines through. You have a knack for making relationships very believable. Great work!

Author: tickled pink fan
Date posted: 2/20/2004 12:28:22 PM
tickled pink fan's Comments:

that was absolutely terrific. The dialog was right on target! I hope these pairings are exactly what comes about post NJO. This needs to get into the official story line.

Author: Julie
Date posted: 2/20/2004 9:00:16 PM
Julie's Comments:

Excellent story...a bit heavy on dialogue, but an intriguing plot line as well. Good size too.
Tahiri and Jace huh....good thought...fitting I think...twins for Jaina, hmmmm where have I heard that plot line before:-)?

Author: Lord Maul
Date posted: 2/22/2004 12:47:22 PM
Lord Maul's Comments:

Very, very good. I rated 10/10. Everything was cool, but Jacen and Tahiri? what's up with thatt? Good story anyway. :)

Author: Lady_Vader
Date posted: 2/22/2004 9:13:59 PM
Lady_Vader's Comments:

Awsome story and very well written, I wish i could right like that. I'm not strong on the Tahiri and Jacen pair, because I don't think that Jacen would do that even if Anakins gone, but it made the story interesting to me because I don't no that much about Danni :) Keep writing cause your good.

Author: Mara_Jade
Date posted: 2/23/2004 7:01:12 PM
Mara_Jade's Comments:

very good story I love how you captured Jaina and Jag but jacen and Tahiri? What ever happend to Jacen and Danni? I mean isent Tahiri like 7 years younger than Jace? and Im not sure I like the idea of Jacen dateing his late brothers Girlfriend

Author: Yodiss
Date posted: 2/25/2004 3:54:11 PM
Yodiss's Comments:

hey, that was really good! i hope jaina's kids weren't hurt in the fall...

Author: The Stormtrooper Shrink  (signed)
Date posted: 2/27/2004 4:03:16 PM
The Stormtrooper Shrink's Comments:

Nah, I think that Jacen and Tahiri together is a good idea. I don't like Danni, and I don't like Tenel Ka. I've been rooting for this sort of answer ever since Anakin bit the dust.

Author: patricia_lauren
Date posted: 3/1/2004 12:49:14 PM
patricia_lauren's Comments:

Very good work. I'm not sure how much I like a Jacen/Tahiri pairing, but anyone is better than Danni. I love the family relationships.

Author: Darth Fx3
Date posted: 3/2/2004 9:05:27 AM
Darth Fx3's Comments:

I have always shide away from fan fic for all the obvious reasons. This is the first one I have read. This is everything I hope they will do in the post NJO era. Charecter development makes star wars. Oh and Jana was pregnate so the fainting is understandable.

Author: Darth Fx3
Date posted: 3/2/2004 9:19:56 AM
Darth Fx3's Comments:

almost forgot, love the cover

Author: benskycrawler
Date posted: 3/3/2004 6:33:47 AM
benskycrawler's Comments:

cool story, destined for greatness, this one is...

Author: Carol
Date posted: 3/3/2004 3:28:06 PM
Carol's Comments:

Great story. I laughed so much. The Jacen/Tahari thing was weird though. The reaction between Han and Soonthir was great.

Author: Clutch D'Rofab
Date posted: 3/9/2004 10:15:05 AM
Clutch D'Rofab's Comments:

Fell outta my chair laughing. Thanks.

Author: winot  (signed)
Date posted: 3/15/2004 1:11:16 PM
winot's Comments:

It was a cute story please continue.

Author: Jacen21
Date posted: 3/16/2004 9:44:42 PM
Jacen21's Comments:

I loved it...
Definitly needs a sequel.

Author: JediSolo13  (signed)
Date posted: 3/19/2004 4:44:20 PM
JediSolo13's Comments:

OMG! This is the best story I've read since I've been here. Very nice work. Keep it up!

Author: rstj_fan  (signed)
Date posted: 3/25/2004 8:10:53 PM
rstj_fan's Comments:

Looks like Jacen took Anakin's last words about kissing Tahiri TOO seriously...

Author: Mara Jade
Date posted: 3/26/2004 2:57:49 PM
Mara Jade's Comments:

Sequel Sequel NEEDS a sequel I want to see Jainas kids born

Author: Jedi Kyp Durron  (signed)
Date posted: 4/15/2004 7:14:57 PM
Jedi Kyp Durron's Comments:

This was really good! I actually liked the Jacen/Tahiri combo...any thoughts for a sequel?

Author: Jedi Kyp Durron  (signed)
Date posted: 4/15/2004 7:37:45 PM
Jedi Kyp Durron's Comments:

Sorry Not a drops off too HAVE TO put more

Author: angel_gidget
Date posted: 4/19/2004 9:01:41 AM
angel_gidget's Comments:

Very funny! I'm not much of an Expanded Universe person, and I don't know a thing about Jag, but I still found it profoundly entertaining! I especially liked it when Jacen began berating himself for not noticing that his twin sis had fainted dead away barely 10 meters away from him! :P

Author: Saber-of-Light  (signed)
Date posted: 4/22/2004 12:50:19 PM
Saber-of-Light's Comments:

Lex! You bloody evil AWESOME writer- I simply loved it! Of course, the J/J didn't hurt, but I wuved it anyhow....I'll shut up from my fangirl rant now. ^^

Author: jaynasolofel
Date posted: 4/26/2004 8:28:03 PM
jaynasolofel's Comments:

Good Job! I liked the whole "But there will never be a perfect moment" speech -- let's hope ThePowersThatBe read this! And I thought the nod to Han's idea of 'courtship' was great. Ahh, the desperation true love can provoke...

Author: Jacen Azzameen
Date posted: 5/2/2004 12:04:52 PM
Jacen Azzameen's Comments:

that was a suprise with jacen and tahiri!!!!

Author: Gabri_Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 5/4/2004 4:40:15 PM
Gabri_Jade's Comments:

Great job, Lex. I loved the characterization all around, and you even made me think kindly of a possible Jacen/Tahiri ship. ;) Very entertaining read. :)

Author: Guns
Date posted: 6/5/2004 2:48:23 PM
Guns's Comments:

DUDE! Your writing kicks bothan butt! Tahiri and Jacen is weird though. They screwed up big time with killing Anakin and I always liked Jacen and Danni together. Anakin will always be Tahiri's man though. They need to kill her and let her join him or somthing. They just cant let her hook up with another guy.

I enjoyed your writing though! I wish the NJO authers had focused more on character development and less on the endless waves of sicko Vong. I was hating it up after Star by Star.

Keep it up! Sequel?

Author: marajaded
Date posted: 6/16/2004 11:57:33 AM
marajaded's Comments:

that was bloody brilliant!!!!
it was sooo funny! jacen and tahiri was a little weird but it was still an awesome story!!!!
you are an awesome author!!!please keep writing!!!!!!

Author: marajaded
Date posted: 6/17/2004 11:09:44 AM
marajaded's Comments:

read it again...still loved it!!!!!!!
and now that i think a/b it tahiri is way better than danni for jacen...i dont like danni....
and tenel ka is too aloof and royal....
you so need to do a sequel!!!! and another and another.....etc.....
i loved the way you captured everyones was great (again!!!!!!!!!!!!)

Author: Chelsea
Date posted: 7/19/2004 3:29:30 AM
Chelsea's Comments:

This is some of the best fanfics I ever read

Author: Jaya Solo
Date posted: 7/23/2004 9:23:11 PM
Jaya Solo's Comments:

Aw, that was cute. :)

Author: Arren Terrilon
Date posted: 8/3/2004 12:26:22 PM
Arren Terrilon's Comments:

nice story, but i didnt really like the play with jacen and tahiri, cuz tahiri is too yuuzhan vong, and jacen...well jacen is just jacen i think he would be better with tenel ka, but IT WAS A GREAT STORY keep writing!

Author: can't say
Date posted: 8/6/2004 1:37:57 PM
can't say's Comments:

i really enjoy his and i will encourage you to write a sequal

Author: can't say
Date posted: 8/6/2004 1:38:12 PM
can't say's Comments:

i really enjoy his and i will encourage you to write a sequal

Author: jainabarrows
Date posted: 8/7/2004 6:44:09 PM
jainabarrows's Comments:

Very well done. I don't like Jacen and Tahiri too much, but you did it well. Great romance.

Author: Martyn Antilles
Date posted: 11/23/2004 11:11:42 AM
Martyn Antilles's Comments:

Cute...especially Han and Soontir going at each other like that. I don't know much about them together, but I think it was funny.

Author: General_Iblis
Date posted: 11/27/2004 2:53:31 PM
General_Iblis's Comments:

First off....bloody brilliant and funny!

Secondly...I am sorta in between the pro-Jacen/Tahiri and anti-Jacen Tahiri commentators. On the one hand the age difference (only 4 years, cuz if I remember by EU stories right, Anakin was one year younger than Jacen & Jaina, and Anakin was 3 years older than Tahiri at the start of the Junior Jedi Knights series) can cause some problem. But last time I checked, if the timeline for the OT is correct, Han is about a decade older than quasi-craddle robbing has some precedence (wink, wink).

Thirdly...the whole twins thing was great. But you have to wonder about the law of declining returns-the kids will only have had two Force-sensitive in the past two generation.

Author: PrincessSkywalkerOrgana
Date posted: 12/30/2004 12:36:00 PM
PrincessSkywalkerOrgana's Comments:

Great fic. I am not entirely happy with Tahiri/Jacen. But the Jag/Jaina was cute as was Han's reaction. I like Leia's reaction as well.

Author: PrincessSkywalkerOrgana
Date posted: 12/30/2004 12:36:01 PM
PrincessSkywalkerOrgana's Comments:

Great fic. I am not entirely happy with Tahiri/Jacen. But the Jag/Jaina was cute as was Han's reaction. I like Leia's reaction as well.

Author: Sword_of _the_Jedi
Date posted: 1/22/2005 10:43:02 AM
Sword_of _the_Jedi's Comments:

That was great! I thought it was Danni as well. You have to write more.

Author: JediJainaSoloFel
Date posted: 1/31/2005 1:53:58 PM
JediJainaSoloFel's Comments:

Simply Fabulous Lex! You know this is one of my all time Favorites! I'm so excited for CoJF!

Author: AvenKiel
Date posted: 9/7/2005 6:14:44 PM
AvenKiel's Comments:

Muy Muy Bien!!

Author: TenelkaSolo
Date posted: 6/30/2006 1:09:20 AM
TenelkaSolo's Comments:

I have to admit it's an awesome story,I prefer the idea of Jacen and Tenel Ka better.Besides Tahiri belongs to Anakin.

Author: jaina fan
Date posted: 2/18/2007 1:16:07 PM
jaina fan's Comments:

nice story. definitely need more jag/jaina stories.

Author: Sharisjonina  (signed)
Date posted: 2/19/2007 4:20:46 PM
Sharisjonina's Comments:

I loved this story. I have read it twice now, once before I was a member on TFN FanFiction Archive. This is a great write!

Author: Shuro  (signed)
Date posted: 2/26/2007 10:52:34 PM
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Author: mikals_girl
Date posted: 8/8/2007 10:11:45 AM
mikals_girl's Comments:

i always imaginedit that way i wasn't sure anyone else did. especially about tahiri and jacen. it was so cool!!!!!!!!!!! i wish it were real

Author: DarthBellumSolo
Date posted: 9/3/2008 10:49:07 AM
DarthBellumSolo's Comments:

Fic shaking! Certainly a little wild the idea to connect Jacen and Tahiri at first seemed to me, but all has turned out fine. ». It would be desirable continuation... Well, about children of Jaga and Jaina, about wedding of Jacen and Tahiri...


Author: darthmatrix101
Date posted: 10/20/2008 12:57:06 AM
darthmatrix101's Comments:

that was wonderful!!
i can'y stop laughing!!

Author: JainaSolo  (signed)
Date posted: 12/25/2008 12:36:28 PM
JainaSolo's Comments:

really great I think it needs a sequel

Author: JainaSolo  (signed)
Date posted: 12/25/2008 12:39:47 PM
JainaSolo's Comments:

hilarious really good you should do more like this 10/10

Author: JainaSolo  (signed)
Date posted: 12/29/2008 2:13:39 PM
JainaSolo's Comments:

this one almost ends up with a prequel in The Courtship of Jagged Fel love it

Author: Jayasolo2  (signed)
Date posted: 3/12/2010 6:29:56 PM
Jayasolo2's Comments:

This is so funny XD I loved it!

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