Date posted: 6/1/2004 9:39:07 AM
Oh, boy!!! That was something!!! The two of them together, and Luke in first person! I just hope that in the Post New Jedi Order, nothing like that happens, exept for the teamwork and the banter.
Date posted: 6/1/2004 11:12:07 AM
Wow! That was really good. I cried, it was so sad! Luke and Leia fighting together again...really great story!
Author: Barefoot Contessa
Date posted: 6/1/2004 12:36:42 PM
Barefoot Contessa's Comments:
I really like this story! This is one of the best pieces I have read about Luke and Leia; they seemed to be in perfect character and I could really imagine this happening in a Star Wars novel. Keep writing!
Date posted: 6/1/2004 4:57:34 PM
That was beautiful, RebelMom. I really enjoyed reading it. Leia's death scene was written so honorably, and I love the fact that Luke named his daughter Leia. This was touching and eloquent- I loved it! Thanks so much for sharing your work with us.
Date posted: 6/2/2004 5:55:57 AM
Nice to see another Rebel Mom story here. There aren't enough stories where the focus is on Luke and Leia's connection. :)
Date posted: 6/2/2004 2:39:21 PM
How could you kill Leia, Mom?!
It was a wonderful story, anyway. I love the Luke/Leia twin relationship, and even when one half of it is gone, it's beautiful to see how much they are to each other. Thanks for sharing.
Author: Lord Maul
Date posted: 6/3/2004 5:18:38 AM
Lord Maul's Comments:
Very nice, mom. I gave it a 10/10. You did a great job of capturing two of my favorite characters!
Author: I am Mara
Date posted: 6/4/2004 2:00:03 PM
I am Mara's Comments:
OH that was so sweet. I feel so bad for Luke the one thing I do hope I see in the comming books is that Luke & Mara do have a nother kind. That would be really cool. This is a really good story I really liked it.
Date posted: 6/5/2004 4:44:09 AM
Finally Luke and Leia manage to kick some butt together again! Shame about Leia dying though. And what niece... shouldn't it be nephew?
Date posted: 6/6/2004 2:41:35 PM
When I read that last line, I started to cry!
Beautiful, funny, and touching. I loved the banter, and their characterizations were dead on.
Great job, ~M
Date posted: 6/8/2004 12:08:53 PM
One of the few stories that gets me teary-eyed everytime I read it. Wonderful job, RM.
Date posted: 6/8/2004 8:58:36 PM
it was all good until leia died even her getting shot was good but it wasnt good when she died thats all other than that great job
Author: Sgt J-dawg
Date posted: 6/9/2004 10:31:26 AM
Sgt J-dawg's Comments:
Sibling love....you got to love it. There is no greater love than laying down your life for the one you love.
Author: jimmy the van
Date posted: 6/9/2004 12:15:18 PM
jimmy the van's Comments:
EDIT: No flaming allowed.
Author: Jacen Hearne
Date posted: 6/9/2004 6:03:22 PM
Jacen Hearne's Comments:
it wasn't bad, but the whole dying thing left shivers.
Date posted: 6/15/2004 8:04:22 AM
Nicely written. Good dialogue, decent action description. Excellent character work. And not to mention the surprising death of Leia. As I was reading, I felt sure it was the boy who would be the "tragedy happening".
The only weakness in your writing might be a lack of 'fleshing out'. I felt this was written overnight: it's in need of more vividness and elaborate displays. Still, above average.
Date posted: 6/19/2004 8:48:56 PM
Wow. I'm still sniffling. I've been looking around for fics revolving around Luke and Leia. This is an exceptional one. I really enjoyed it. I'm a sap for death scenes and everlasting love, so this was the perfect story for me to read. Very well done.
Date posted: 6/21/2004 8:19:58 AM
Woow. Very impressive. I loved this story.
I also loved the way you wrote Luke and Leia, especially Leia. (Sorry, I'm a huge Leia fan, and I couldn't resist.) Besides, I love reading a Jedi Leia story!
It was pretty sad but you made my day! :)
Date posted: 6/25/2004 8:43:57 AM
OOOHHH That was soooo good!!!! So sad though, poor Solo/Skywalker family. *cries*
Date posted: 8/12/2004 9:59:09 PM
Absolute magnificent. I'd been searching for a long time to find a Luke and Leia story like this, the banter, love and tragedy flowing through this story was wonderful.
Wild appluse and brava, brava, brava!
Author: Lt. Tara Farrago
Date posted: 3/9/2005 8:06:39 PM
Lt. Tara Farrago's Comments:
I actually enjoyed this fic, though it was upsetting to see Leia die. I thought you captured Luke's voice very well, especially while they were relaxing the cafe together and when they fought together in the ambush. I didn't quite feel Luke's anguish at losing Leia, though. Of course, it's a tough decision - to go minimalist or overboard in terms of details during those kinds of potentially very sappy scenes, so at least you avoided unnecessary sap. The tag at the end was very nice - very short and sweet and to the point. And your dialogue was dead-on throughout. Good job!
Date posted: 3/25/2005 1:52:51 PM
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Tears are going down my face as I am typing this now! Very good work. I love how you showed the bond between Luke and Leia so strongly. It is very sweet. I dont't have a twin, but me and my older brother (By only two years) are just like that. We truly care about each other. I would feel how Luke did after my brother dies. Anyway, very good work. I believe you really should write one were it shows Luke's feelings after Anakin(his father Anakin, not Anakin Solo) died. It should be very entertaining and sad. In my opinion, in that story, you should have Luke find the neclace(I forgot what it's called) that Anakin gave to Padme in episode one. I'm looking forward to other stories that you will write! By the way, do you not like Leia or something? WHY MAKE HER DIE! WWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!
Date posted: 10/26/2009 10:25:06 PM
Awww, this was sad. :( Poor Leia.
Author: Master Liz
Date posted: 8/13/2010 11:06:52 AM
Master Liz's Comments:
WOW!!! I actually cried and I NEVER cry for fanfiction.
Very good thank you
Date posted: 12/27/2011 10:58:26 PM
wow!!! I am a new member of this site and this was the fist fan fiction I read. It is very impressive. It's so sad that you kill Leia off after all she went through. It's so cute how you have the two twins fighting. This story was very emotional for me because I am a girl and I have a twin bro and I don't know what I would do without him...so this story is excellent but has also depressed me so...thanks for the great writing and thanks for depressing me; I always wanted to be depressed after reading stories.(just kidding)
I'll be sure to read more of your wonderful stories!
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