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Author: VaderLVR64  (signed)
Date posted: 6/29/2004 7:52:48 AM
VaderLVR64's Comments:

This was simply stunning! Beautifully written and so much like Obi-Wan to make this sacrifice. Wonderful work!

Author: Shaindl
Date posted: 6/29/2004 8:01:52 AM
Shaindl's Comments:

Beautiful, haunting work, but you know (in, I'm sure, painful detail) what I think. :p Loved it the first, second, and tenth times, and loved it more now. Great job!


Author: Miss Rainstorm
Date posted: 6/29/2004 8:23:03 AM
Miss Rainstorm's Comments:

**sniff** That was a beautiful piece of work, and so sad! Keep writing! **reaches for a box of tissues**

Author: Barefoot Contessa
Date posted: 6/29/2004 5:08:12 PM
Barefoot Contessa's Comments:

Oh my goodness! That was a wonderful story! It made me cry, it was so emotional. I would encourage you to follow this up with another; explaining if Obi-wan's sacrifice makes Anakin stay with the light or fall to the darkness faster. Thank you for writing this wonderfully moving story. It is one that I think I will return to read many more times.

Author: Kehj-Et Boiken
Date posted: 6/29/2004 5:55:38 PM
Kehj-Et Boiken's Comments:

Oh my goodness...I can't breathe. That was so sad. I can't breath. Congratulations on a wonderful job. You brought out the emotions so beautifully. It is so alive. The must be the saddest story I have ever read, and I have read a good many. Beautifully written.

Author: Jedi Knight Safira Felan
Date posted: 6/29/2004 6:54:25 PM
Jedi Knight Safira Felan's Comments:

Great story! Oh my gosh that was so incredibly sad! Very well written. So so sad!

Author: MutantJediBouer  (signed)
Date posted: 6/29/2004 8:07:14 PM
MutantJediBouer's Comments:

Woah. God, that was brilliant! I loved it, absolutely. Nothing I didn't like. Do write again, that's excellent.

MutantJediBauer (My s/n's a typo...)
aka. Zax-Ryn Kenobi

Author: ChaosJedi  (signed)
Date posted: 6/30/2004 5:54:36 AM
ChaosJedi's Comments:

Although this fan fic has to do with Ben's death, I'm not totally against it. You laid this plot out very beautifully, and for that, my deepest congragulations to you. :)

Author: Endurwen Kenobi
Date posted: 6/30/2004 8:19:13 PM
Endurwen Kenobi's Comments:

That was so sad! Great job!

Author: Valiowk  (signed)
Date posted: 7/1/2004 8:48:37 AM
Valiowk's Comments:

That was an incredible AU! When I read it, I imagined it as though there was a point in time when it split into 2 parallel universes, and Obi-Wan's different decisions in the 2 universes led to such contrasting endings. I think this contrast would have been a tremendously interesting idea to play upon.

Author: CMJade  (signed)
Date posted: 7/1/2004 9:59:28 AM
CMJade's Comments:

This was a very well written story. I liked it a lot. I kind of enjoy the irony in it though the most. I don't know if this was what you were after or not, but I found it interesting that Anakin STILL was to blame for his death. Because of the vision Obi Wan had of his padawan turning to the darkside, he let himself die. Just my train of thought while reading your fanfic. Very cool. ;)

Author: Nemesis
Date posted: 7/2/2004 3:04:40 AM
Nemesis's Comments:

Very nice . . . hauntingly beautiful. Good work. :)

Author: Chil
Date posted: 7/3/2004 11:32:55 PM
Chil's Comments:

Nice work-its so sad..n pretty cool. N its reall well writtedn too! But one thing though, i'm not sure if its just me, but i was sorta lost at the beginning bit where like..darth vadar was talkin about sacrifce and stuff. At first i couldn't tell that it was a vision of Obi Wan's or wasn't it. I'm sort of confused at the moment.

Author: obi- wan's victim
Date posted: 7/4/2004 6:51:10 AM
obi- wan's victim's Comments:

This story broke my heart... as all the stoires that tell the timeless tale of a friend loved and lost(anakin) The stroy was huanting and shone with brillance among a galaxy of dull stars. Please write another one!!!

Author: The Answer is 42
Date posted: 7/5/2004 12:16:43 PM
The Answer is 42's Comments:

I hate to be the only one making a negative comment but...
I think that it was a touch overdone, and slightly "girly". You made a little bit too much of a big deal about the physical contact, and the "I love you" thing.

But I still loved it! It's very good, the other stuff nonwithstanding.

Author: durhelediel
Date posted: 7/5/2004 11:25:14 PM
durhelediel's Comments:

Wow. ::sniffs:: Wow....absolutely wow. So like him... Very well written. Nice details. Nice work.

Author: Onardem Evad
Date posted: 7/6/2004 6:27:56 AM
Onardem Evad's Comments:

Although I am not the kind to like "mushy" moments, your story is horrifyingly amazing. Beautifully written. You should write books my friend! Congratulations!

Author: NaomiOrgana
Date posted: 7/6/2004 7:08:00 AM
NaomiOrgana's Comments:

I really liked this. I got the impression that Anakin would still turn to the dark and that Obi-Wan couldn't bear to see it.

Author: Archangel
Date posted: 7/20/2004 7:51:06 PM
Archangel's Comments:

Oooooh, lovely lovely. Great twist, and the title (if I may say so) is perfect. Very hauntingly beautiful. I'll have to read it again sometime;)

Author: Ivy
Date posted: 8/12/2004 1:29:54 PM
Ivy's Comments:

Very like Obi Wan to make that sacrifice- btu I hate to watch him die! I wonder how that affects the outcome of events, if it changes anything.

Author: Jedi Knight Nol Tel Sete
Date posted: 8/16/2004 8:37:57 PM
Jedi Knight Nol Tel Sete's Comments:

I loved it It was very moving to read the last moments of a great jedi that would sacrifice him self for the love of his padawan. I beleive that you have caught Master Obi Wan's thought and feelings to tee. Keep writting and I do encourage you to write a sequal to this one about weather or not anikin fell to the dark side or if he remained in the light. And if luke and liegh are born.

May the Force be With You Always

Author: Ani-maniac  (signed)
Date posted: 11/23/2004 10:00:37 PM
Ani-maniac's Comments:

This story was awsome!!!!! I loved it!!!! I ask, PLEASE write a conclution to it. I t was beautifully written, and very enjoyable.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 3/13/2005 12:47:08 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

waterfall of tears...


Author: isola-jedi-padawan  (signed)
Date posted: 3/19/2005 2:15:38 AM
isola-jedi-padawan's Comments:

Fantasic- even though I can't stop the tears even now. The best story like that I have ever read.

Author: Rhaya  (signed)
Date posted: 6/6/2005 7:35:22 AM
Rhaya's Comments:

It was very well written except that it didn't make clear whether the first part with Ani killing Obi was a vision or reality and cut away from that part too quickly. It made me have to go back several times to establish where exactly reality began and the events were no longer a vision of what "could have happened" But other than that a beautifully descriptive work. I would just make it a bit more apparent that Anakin killing him in the beginning was a premanition, not an actuall event in your story.

Author: UltimateObi-Wan_987
Date posted: 6/19/2005 12:29:30 AM
UltimateObi-Wan_987's Comments:

WOW! I can't believe what a wonderful story you have written here. What can I say - you set it up wonderfully, made Obi-Wan's distress believeable, and justified his choice. And the scene between Obi-Wan and Anakin...that is the only time so far a Fanfic has made me tear up. Beautiful.

Author: Alley Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 9/4/2005 7:19:50 PM
Alley Skywalker's Comments:

Oh! That was so sad! I can't believe Obi-Wan had thought that his death would stop Anakin from turning!

Author: Morningcrest Ferret
Date posted: 9/18/2005 3:47:32 AM
Morningcrest Ferret's Comments:

OMG This has to be the best fan fic ive read!!! it is so great i love the way u portray anakin and obiwan and yeah this is great i love it great jopb!!

Author: cristy
Date posted: 2/24/2006 10:56:48 PM
cristy's Comments:

i loved your fic! it almost made me cry i liked how you wrote it, that he saved Anakin from the dark side =)

Author: Dustin
Date posted: 3/27/2006 3:48:04 PM
Dustin's Comments:

A beautiful picture. I also liked the inclusion of Bant; one of the few extended universe characters that I know from the Jedi Apprentice Series.

Author: Shaayla
Date posted: 4/25/2006 12:40:45 AM
Shaayla's Comments:

I read this fic when I was 12, kinda didn't get it, I saw it and I thought I'd read it for real this time around... I seriously was bawling at this. Best story I've ever read. Wonderful! And seriously, I mean it.

Author: Brightbear
Date posted: 5/19/2008 9:18:34 PM
Brightbear's Comments:

This was beautiful. Obi-Wan has always made Anakin the focus of his life and this came across really well.

It's very in character and I'm left just desperately hoping that it will be enough to save Anakin.

Author: jenni
Date posted: 8/17/2008 8:44:17 PM
jenni's Comments:

DOn't leave me... Hey, what's the matter with you? Why'd you kill obi-wan with your inmagination? He was my friend, and now he's dead.... boo hoo... Seriously, that tore my heart in two. Heartbreaking but mesemerizing!!!
.....Oh, OBI-WAn!!!! {drinks bottle of whiskey}

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