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Author: kehleyr
Date posted: 7/27/2004 12:36:57 AM
kehleyr's Comments:

Lovely! It's always great to see a story about Luke and Mara, they should come more often. I think you caught both their characters perfectly, and I especially liked the addendums ;)

Author: Gabri_Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 7/27/2004 12:56:08 AM
Gabri_Jade's Comments:

Thank you, kehleyr! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Special thanks to our wonderful beta readers, Jedi-2B and vader_incarnate, and of course thanks also go to oba for starting the whole thing and for (as always) the beautiful cover art. :)

Author: Lady Padme  (signed)
Date posted: 7/27/2004 5:24:09 AM
Lady Padme's Comments:

Lovely work, ladies! Wonderful to see this couplet in the Archives!

Author: Lady Padme  (signed)
Date posted: 7/27/2004 5:24:11 AM
Lady Padme's Comments:

Lovely work, ladies! Wonderful to see this couplet in the Archives!

Author: Lady Padme  (signed)
Date posted: 7/27/2004 5:24:15 AM
Lady Padme's Comments:

Lovely work, ladies! Wonderful to see this couplet in the Archives!

Author: Archangel
Date posted: 7/27/2004 10:17:47 AM
Archangel's Comments:

Beautiful, you two! I've always loved the fics you put out singly, and what a treat to have you work together! Cute idea, lovely writing, and great teamwork! I look forward to more!
Addendum: great cover art, oba! ;)

Author: Birdy
Date posted: 7/27/2004 1:10:12 PM
Birdy's Comments:

this is BEAUTIFUL! i loved it! it sounded just like mara and luke talking. i loved those little throw-ins about the gelatin and the love letter to han. i can completely see that happening, and i liked how they match up perfectly with funny arguments and playful bets that people have when in a relationship. this super, and i hope to see more stories like it. encore!

Author: Jack
Date posted: 7/27/2004 3:02:46 PM
Jack's Comments:

I would love to see a sequel where she actually writes the love letter to Han! LOL!

Author: Jira
Date posted: 7/27/2004 9:21:52 PM
Jira's Comments:

This was such an enjoyable read. I always love Luke and Mara stories. The characterization was perfect and I loved how the bits of humor were added seamlessly into the story. (Who came up with the idea for the dare? I love it, took me a while to stop giggling!) There's not much else I can say--this story definitely deserves to be in the archives! You two are excellent!

Author: Barefoot Contessa  (signed)
Date posted: 7/28/2004 11:23:10 AM
Barefoot Contessa's Comments:

This is wonderful! I really enjoyed reading it! I think you have captured the real Luke and Mara in this piece. I think it would be a great idea if you had Mara write a love letter to Han, it would be funny to see how he and Leia reacted!

Author: Lady_Vader
Date posted: 7/28/2004 6:37:28 PM
Lady_Vader's Comments:

Wonderful story, im not a lovyish person but i still thought it was great.. the best part to me was about the love letter to Han.. Keep up the great writing!


Author: AgronDyrce  (signed)
Date posted: 7/28/2004 9:25:00 PM
AgronDyrce's Comments:

Love this! You captured their personalities PERFECTLY! Beautiful job :) You get a perfect 10 from me :)

Author: Jadestar
Date posted: 8/3/2004 4:07:27 PM
Jadestar's Comments:

This was very good. You two did a wonderful job and stayed true to Luke and Mara's personalities. I'll look for more stories in the future from both of you.

Author: Twilight
Date posted: 8/3/2004 9:47:11 PM
Twilight's Comments:


This is great! your captured their personalities perfectly! i loved it especially the dare to write a love letter to Han. Now /that/ would be an interesting reaction!!! ^^

Author: Acacia Jade
Date posted: 8/4/2004 8:20:47 AM
Acacia Jade's Comments:

OMG!! I loved it!! It showes Maras battle w/ showing her feelings perfectly!! Great job!!!

Author: flowerbee
Date posted: 8/4/2004 10:09:36 PM
flowerbee's Comments:

Hey, that was funny!! Great job!

Author: starwarspaintballer  (signed)
Date posted: 8/6/2004 11:29:36 AM
starwarspaintballer's Comments:

Great job. The only thing wrong is the blue and red text, but other than that it was good.

Author: DV
Date posted: 8/7/2004 8:28:55 PM
DV's Comments:

Impressive...most impressive.

Author: JainaBarrows
Date posted: 8/8/2004 3:18:50 PM
JainaBarrows's Comments:

I love Luke/Mara stories. That's my second favorite SW romance!!!!!!!

Author: Jedi Knight Quia Lor  (signed)
Date posted: 8/10/2004 5:18:33 PM
Jedi Knight Quia Lor's Comments:

Gabri_Jade and obaona, together, writing a fic? Paradise!

obaona, you rock at Mara! That is exactly how I would see Mara writing a love letter.

Gabri_Jade, a very good Luke reply. Our good old Jedi Master personified perfectly!

Thank both of you for this!
May the Force be with you,

((Gelatin? Okay, I can live with that...)) :)

Author: Force-flow_girl  (signed)
Date posted: 8/22/2004 11:56:00 AM
Force-flow_girl's Comments:

Wow!Cool fan fic!I'm still waiting for that secuel,though.What would leia say if she saw the love letter to han?
Good work,as always!

Author: JaeSolana  (signed)
Date posted: 9/6/2004 2:05:33 AM
JaeSolana's Comments:

Wow, the first one I read on this site and I'm am totally impressed. I loved how you showed us the softer side of a realtionship that just isn't explored enough. Just beautiful. Even my girlfriend liked it and she doesn't read SW, it just seemed to sum up our relationship as well.

Date posted: 9/7/2004 6:31:21 PM
MJSLSBS's Comments:

i read this on the boards and loved it. i like it even better now. good job Gabri

Author: Jadzia_Kenobi
Date posted: 9/20/2004 1:34:23 PM
Jadzia_Kenobi's Comments:

This it's so cool!
I had such a great time reading it!

Author: Shada  (signed)
Date posted: 11/18/2004 8:56:36 AM
Shada's Comments:

I love it...I can't even think of what to say, really. I honestly haven't read a lot of Luke/Mara fic, but this captures their characters wonderfully! It was a joy to read. Thank you!

Author: Jedi Knight Lillian Skywalker
Date posted: 11/29/2004 7:37:30 AM
Jedi Knight Lillian Skywalker's Comments:

OMG! That was so sweet! How did you manage to capture Mara so well? That was so like a letter she would write. I really, really liked this story and will return many times to read it for sure.

Author: Anna S.
Date posted: 3/6/2005 5:52:14 PM
Anna S.'s Comments:

Obaona, I love your fanfiction. Both of you did a very good job on this. I especially enjoyed the little gelatin remarks ^_^

Keep on writing.

Author: P.L.O.S.S.
Date posted: 3/30/2005 11:46:35 AM
P.L.O.S.S.'s Comments:

I though it was a really good piece of fan fiction, I would love to read more of your fna fiction!

Author: han solo fan
Date posted: 4/26/2005 5:23:51 AM
han solo fan's Comments:

really great! is there going to be a sequel? i wonder what Han's reaction will be when Mara rites the love letter.(if) well, anyway, would love to read more of your fan fiction, rite on!

Author: AnakinsGirl
Date posted: 6/7/2005 8:22:50 AM
AnakinsGirl's Comments:

I liked it. Very romantic, I think. It was good and even had some humour in it, i suppose.

Author: 1-800-jedigirl
Date posted: 2/3/2006 5:57:19 PM
1-800-jedigirl's Comments:

i'd love to see that letter to han

Author: Shaayla
Date posted: 4/25/2006 12:35:09 AM
Shaayla's Comments:

Agreed, love to see Han's reaction to a letter like that! Haha, great story!

Author: Loki Meridean
Date posted: 5/20/2006 11:03:55 PM
Loki Meridean's Comments:

i laughed so hard! this was really good. you kinda wrote what we all thought Luke and Mara's relationship would be like. they remind me of dating teenagers . . . and lightsabers through jell-o? GENIUS!

Author: Princesz of blood
Date posted: 5/3/2007 7:46:32 PM
Princesz of blood's Comments:

I love this story! I read it a long time ago, and then later I was telling my friend about what the bet was, and she didn't believe me. I was trying to look it up, but couldn't remember what website and none of the Google searches worked. Finally I realized it said gelatin, not jello, and tonight I found it. Good work!

Author: Avitargirl
Date posted: 5/4/2008 6:42:21 PM
Avitargirl's Comments:

This was very sweet. Mara's letter is funny, and Luke's is very loving.
p.s. I would love to have seen Mara's love letter to Han. LOL!!!

Author: Lola
Date posted: 10/17/2011 7:50:32 AM
Lola's Comments:

Wow! Great thniknig! JK

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