Date posted: 4/18/2005 7:38:46 PM
Hey, glad to see this up! It was a great fic; such a creative plot! Congratulations!
Date posted: 4/18/2005 7:41:14 PM
Thanks go to hayden, bobill, and Wilhelmina for all of their help. Special thanks to obaona for beta-reading (more than once!) and doing the cover art!
Date posted: 4/24/2005 5:05:08 PM
I think this was Great story, It shows a new level to the Sith beyond Just The Master and The Apperentice
Author: Darth Ravenous
Date posted: 4/25/2005 7:40:51 AM
Darth Ravenous's Comments:
WOW! This was a GREAT story! One of the best I've ever read. I'm a big fan of Sith stories and this was... wow. I love the way you show the arrogance of the master and former apprentice, and how the Shadow Sith just takes away the illusion of them being all powerful. Once again, great job and can't wait to read more from you!
Date posted: 4/25/2005 3:17:38 PM
Incredible! I love this topic and you did an amazing job with it. Bravo!
Date posted: 4/25/2005 4:18:57 PM
One of my favorites of your works. Interesting view of Sith philosophy and tradition, and your depth of characterization only continues to increase. :)
Date posted: 4/26/2005 12:48:37 PM
Hey dude this story was perfect. I felt like i was reading a real book. I hope we can expect more from you in the fututre.
Author: Darth Brandon
Date posted: 4/26/2005 4:43:23 PM
Darth Brandon's Comments:
This story was excellent. It is as if YOU were a sith yourself...
Date posted: 5/2/2005 5:54:44 PM
An enjoyable read that touches on the ill-explored Star Wars history during the Old Republic (even though the Republic had nothing to do with it :p). Very nice how Girion's strenght turned out to be his weakness.
Author: Dark Sith Ragnarok
Date posted: 5/8/2005 5:10:13 PM
Dark Sith Ragnarok's Comments:
wow, this story was so easy to visualize. it was almost like i was reading a full scale novel. i really liked how the 2nd apprentice won, and kicked the other sith's butt. from one sith lord to another "brovo, and keep those stories coming".
Author: Andrea Jade
Date posted: 5/11/2005 11:50:00 AM
Andrea Jade's Comments:
Good answer to what makes a Sith. Interesting insight to their world.
Author: Darth Carious
Date posted: 5/12/2005 5:02:17 PM
Darth Carious's Comments:
Finally, a comprehensive fic about the Sith that doesn't have the word "Sidious" in it. Loved the story as well as the characters. Please someone turn this into a fanfilm.
Author: Nerin Elfhammer
Date posted: 5/12/2005 5:56:19 PM
Nerin Elfhammer's Comments:
I didn't even read this fanfic and I liked it. I will read it when I have time, and I hope I don't regret putting this comment in. I probably won't!
Date posted: 5/16/2005 9:51:22 AM
This was extremely entertaining. The choreography was very well done, as were the characters.
Date posted: 5/16/2005 2:56:15 PM
You created such a vivid, alluring world there especially the mystique of the Sith Monument and the relationship it has with Zeraii. A compelling story that I just couldn't tear my eyes away from.
Five thumbs up.
Date posted: 5/18/2005 9:48:03 AM
Whoa! This is probably the tightest fanfic I've ever read anywhere. I wanna read MORE!!!!!!!
Author: Ithorian Guy
Date posted: 5/18/2005 12:49:48 PM
Ithorian Guy's Comments:
Very good, one of the best Fanfics I've EVER read
Date posted: 5/23/2005 7:44:40 PM
Great story. I really enjoyed it.
Date posted: 5/24/2005 2:47:33 AM
great story. i particularly like how the nature of the sith and they're connection and relationship with the force were explored
Date posted: 6/2/2005 11:04:09 AM
great story.keep it up
Date posted: 6/5/2005 1:09:34 PM
this story is the best ive read on this site so far. its got such a intense plot i couldnt leave it without finishing it. ah the dark side...
Author: Darth Quietus
Date posted: 7/31/2005 3:47:45 PM
Darth Quietus's Comments:
I thought it was a great bit of backstory to the enigmatic Sith tradition. I myself am currently working on a fairly long fanfic involving the first Dark Jedi (WAAAYYY long time ago!) and I must say, I'm jealous. You have created a backstory which is believable in the context, entertaining to read, and unobtrusive in the Star Wars storyline
Author: Darth Rassok
Date posted: 8/21/2005 4:10:28 PM
Darth Rassok's Comments:
Uber-goodness, I just might print off a copy of the sith code and tape it on my bedroom door:D. Very nice job, as I almost expected the SS to lose. Your description was perfect, it felt like I was RIGHT THERE! Yay for more depth for roleplaying! Now I can use a Sith Code!
Author: Gee Red
Date posted: 10/10/2005 11:41:32 AM
Gee Red's Comments:
All to often, the Sith are portrayed as being melodramatically evil, almost like a pantomime villain. You have done credit to yourself by avoiding this stereotype, and as such you have created an engrossing and interesting piece.
This character has potential because he is more than your standard cardboard cut out, boo hiss, bad guy. Instead he is intelligent, dangerous and unique.
The fight sequences were also exceedingly well paced and fluid, and the descriptive depth created a breathless, almost suffocating atmosphere.
It's superb, congratulations!
Author: Wayne and Darth
Date posted: 11/8/2005 10:19:47 AM
Wayne and Darth's Comments:
Great story, it gave amazing insight to the workings of the Dark Side. Darth Zeraii is f*ucking great character too.
Author: Darth Fenrir
Date posted: 11/14/2005 8:31:07 PM
Darth Fenrir's Comments:
An excellent story one of the best things I have ever read. The characterization is awesome, and it adds a completely new dimension to the Sith. In the movies and books, the Sith, more or less, are Evil, there to be destroyed by the good guy. Here, they're more or less 'human'.
Date posted: 12/1/2005 5:57:53 PM
Great story... In the future, I would like to see some background on Zaraii's five years of training on the jungle planet.
Date posted: 1/15/2006 1:51:37 PM
Wow... just-- wow. I've been working on some fanfic myself, and I now fully appreciate how diffifult it must have been to write all that. It was so amazing!
Author: Darth Sith
Date posted: 3/6/2006 6:34:09 AM
Darth Sith's Comments:
Man! That was one of the best fanfic. stories i have ever read. You discribe things like if you were there. Amazing! simply amazing =)
Date posted: 4/29/2006 2:01:24 AM
Truly amazing!You should become a writter at LucasBooks. For all we know you could already be.
Date posted: 7/20/2006 3:01:30 PM
That was a very entertaining story. Sometimes when authors expand the mythology of a world, it is not always for the better. But I really enjoyed the whole idea of a bastard child apprentice, whose sole purpose is a final test for the favored apprentice. Very Sith like. I enjoyed your story very much. Thanks for posting it.
Author: Ajunta Paul
Date posted: 9/21/2006 9:18:35 PM
Ajunta Paul's Comments:
man this story was the best ive ever read (and ive read alot) i hope to see more from you in the future..... keep it up
Author: Darth Vullisan
Date posted: 9/28/2006 10:11:49 PM
Darth Vullisan's Comments:
My first fanfic read. . .Pretty impressive. I hope other works are equally addictive. You have a talent.
Author: Darth Sangrius
Date posted: 11/25/2006 2:42:37 AM
Darth Sangrius's Comments:
Wow, this was the first time I read a fanfict on this site...that was great, I loved it. I could really see the cast as I read it. Please write more works.
Date posted: 12/15/2006 3:10:28 PM
this is a great story. You have to continue this please!!!!!!!! and i loved your Description of Dark side and how it calls to the sith very good!
Date posted: 2/21/2007 7:23:51 AM
That...was...amazing! Reading that was SUPERIOR in so many ways to some of the official publications out there - the way you created the setting and managed to give the characters depth and gripping interest was simply stunning, especially given the relative length of your work! More stories in this vein are eagerly awaited!!
Author: Darth Ninja
Date posted: 5/17/2007 2:08:16 PM
Darth Ninja's Comments:
Very good. (Like enough peaople haven't said that already). Honestly, I think the Sith have the right idea as far as warfare and combat goes, as opposed to the Jedi, who are downright wusses at times. I loved the story, it was very thought -provoking and intelligent
Author: Loves Anakin
Date posted: 8/8/2007 12:52:35 PM
Loves Anakin's Comments:
This was some pretty cool fan fic . Soemtimes I like the Sith more than the Jedi, and this was one of those times.
Date posted: 9/17/2007 10:11:35 AM
This was nice, but... all wierd with the shrine.
It just reminded me a charger for a cellphone.
Written well anyway, I loved the main idea of the shadow Sith and thestupidness of Girion, it was clear that he relied too much on the foresight.
Author: Darth Maverick
Date posted: 5/2/2008 10:04:58 AM
Darth Maverick's Comments:
Like I said: I love your stories, I hope you write more...feels like I'm reading a real book. You've made it where I see myself as the main character and experiencing it while I read it...good job! I love your work
Author: darth damain
Date posted: 9/5/2008 6:34:31 AM
darth damain's Comments:
excellent, simply excellent. i read the summary and was irrevocably hooked. WEL DONE!!!!!
Date posted: 6/27/2010 1:23:45 AM
That was a very enjoyable, engrossing, fast-paced read. I particularly liked the way you differentiated the strengths and weaknesses of the two apprentices to help bring out their differences in personality.
My only complaint is that I don't share your vision of the Dark Side--from what I can gather, Light Side users let the Force use them, while Dark Side users treat it as something to be wielded. (Or maybe I'm too locked into Girion's and Terannor's mindset.)
In the end, it's just a difference of opinion, and I'm more than happy to give this a 10. I look forward to reading the sequel!