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Author: VaderLVR64  (signed)
Date posted: 6/6/2005 7:55:55 PM
VaderLVR64's Comments:

You know how beautiful I think this piece is! I'm so happy to see it in the archives, just where it deserves to be!

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 6/6/2005 9:06:55 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

*sigh* I love the tenderness he demonstrates, the desperation you convey with the words. Well well done.

Author: Blue Yeti
Date posted: 6/7/2005 3:32:57 AM
Blue Yeti's Comments:

Don't you just love it when, while reading a fanfic, you get a burst of inspiration to write your own. Thanks for that inspiration (argh! Why do I have a Studies of Religion assessment tomorrow?), as well as the good read. I especially liked the reminder about Padme and the Angels of Iego - it was a beautiful image.

As a moderate criticism: I don't know how well this structure or format fitted what you wanted to portray - it seemed like... too much the obvious choice. It seems that doing something else with the voice, rather than have Obi-Wan talking to Padme, would have made the story more impactful and emotive, rahter than explanatory. Just something to keep in mind for future stories.

Again, thank you.

~ Yeti

Author: Rhaya  (signed)
Date posted: 6/7/2005 5:11:25 AM
Rhaya's Comments:

Oh my goodness.. this is just so beautiful. Tears are pouring down my face as I type this. You have done a lovely job on this fic. I love the premise of it, Obi-wan's thoughts as he is helping Padme deliver the babies. And when he says he knows it should have been Ani there, I started bawling! I'd like to know if you plan on writing more along this vein? Or anything relating to Ani/Padme, because I'd really like to read it.

Author: darth mitros aka vicky
Date posted: 6/20/2005 2:57:14 PM
darth mitros aka vicky's Comments:

wow that is so beautiful, amazing, i mean.....beautiful is the only way i can even describe it, so beautifully written, 10 out of ten...100 out of ten!

Author: Jedi Knight Safira Felan
Date posted: 6/21/2005 10:53:59 PM
Jedi Knight Safira Felan's Comments:

Very good fic. I liked the connection you created between Obi-Wan and Padme as friends. I also like how you mentioned resentment when he found out about the seems as if Obi-Wan really would feel that way, that perhaps it was this relationship that caused Anakin's downfall. Anyway, very emotion. I enjoyed reading it!

Author: heineken32
Date posted: 7/1/2005 12:19:07 PM
heineken32's Comments:

this is amazing... the best thing that i love about star wars is the great love story of anakin and padme but then there's that undercurrent of padme and obi-wan's friendship as opposed to the inseparable camaderie of obi-wan and anakin. this is quite unique because we all know there is deep love between obi-wan and padme, more of a brotherly affection than anything else... and we've found in this believable and moving piece just how profound. :) hope you come up with more stories. thank you.


Author: DarthSabe  (signed)
Date posted: 8/5/2005 10:17:34 AM
DarthSabe's Comments:

Oh, sad! :( But beautiful, and bittersweet. Skillfully captured emotions. Well done!

Author: Shada  (signed)
Date posted: 8/13/2005 1:11:11 PM
Shada's Comments:


I love it when I read a piece that leaves me with an ache in my heart that matches what I know that character must be feeling. It's the well-written fics that leave that feeling, where you can follow the character in his/her struggle. I believe you accomplished that well.

I enjoyed this. :) Thank you.

Author: t_bombadil
Date posted: 11/20/2005 3:00:13 PM
t_bombadil's Comments:

i loved it! it was great and i was trying not to cry by the end. it showed a great insight on what episode iii could end with!
mtfbwy :)

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