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Author: freddy
Date posted: 8/2/2005 11:53:07 PM
freddy's Comments:

You are an awesome writer. i read this and enjoyed it- it seemed exactley like Anakin. There are NO flaws, it was perfect. You chose a perfect scene for Anakin to reflect on his past and his love for her. it was jut amazing. i could write words of praise (honestly). I loved it.

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 8/3/2005 7:24:09 AM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

I truly enjoyed this introspective because it showed the progression of his love so accurately.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 8/3/2005 6:15:18 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

Very sweet. You portrayed Anakin perfectly.


Author: DarthSabe  (signed)
Date posted: 8/4/2005 9:27:00 AM
DarthSabe's Comments:

Hey, thanks for your comments! I'd also like to thank my betas: Misti Whitesun Dawn and I think there was someone else whose name I have shamefully forgotton. Special thanks has to go to Misti, who helped me through the many early rewrites. Also to rhonderoo who created the awesome artwork. Thanks guys!

Author: Heidi
Date posted: 8/5/2005 3:28:57 PM
Heidi's Comments:

Awwww I loved it so much. Honestly that was incredibly sweet!

Author: Dietcokeani
Date posted: 8/7/2005 6:09:51 AM
Dietcokeani's Comments:

How very sweet and nice to read Anakin's inner thoughts and feelings of love. I like the confidence in his voice about knowing his love for her is a good thing, and he won't let others get in the way. I also like your portrayal of him as more intelligent than in ROTS.

Author: Koon  (signed)
Date posted: 8/7/2005 7:08:26 PM
Koon's Comments:

A truly enjoyable fic.
The feelings shown here are believable, sincere, and well written, but I wonder at the portrayal of Anikin as a gushing romantic....

Author: Rachel
Date posted: 8/10/2005 1:20:32 PM
Rachel's Comments:

This was truly one of the best Anakin POV's I've read to date. You captured the emotion of the moment perfectly. Keep up the good work!

Author: bloodraven
Date posted: 8/10/2005 9:46:54 PM
bloodraven's Comments:

Oh this is such a touching tale! I love the underlying determination in his thoughts and the undying need to be by her side how even the simplest of things about her brings him such pleasure! beautifully done!

Author: Kat
Date posted: 11/2/2005 5:08:56 PM
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