Date posted: 7/18/2005 10:40:37 PM
Simply Beautiful, Gine. Beautiful. I am a lover of irony and such, and it was pulled off most wonderfully here. The final stab at Palpatine helping Anakin out just did it for me. I loved this fic.
Date posted: 7/19/2005 11:11:45 AM
*beams* Positively gorgeous! Loooved the name of the flowers... "wisleia," hmm? *winks* Hinting at anything, m'dear? You capture Padme's character so well, and I'm continually amazed at the poignancy of your brilliant viggies. Can't wait for the next!
Date posted: 7/20/2005 6:16:19 AM
I thought this was amazing the first time I've read it, and repeated readings have not lessened that impression. A lovely, lovely piece of work!
Date posted: 7/20/2005 11:40:58 AM
Nice tie-in between the legend and the experience.
Date posted: 7/23/2005 8:15:50 PM
Aww! this is such an endearing tale! The ending was so sweet but still carried a tinge of darkness of what is to come thank you for sharing this with us!
Author: Darth Angel
Date posted: 7/23/2005 11:18:18 PM
Darth Angel's Comments:
very nicely put.just if things were really like that,how wonderful life would be.nice job.
Date posted: 7/24/2005 3:04:02 PM
This genre is my particular flavor, so it is a great credit to you that I rather enjoyed it. Nice work.
Date posted: 7/27/2005 6:23:17 PM
It sounded so real to me...I could see it all perfectly in my mind. Very stunningly and beautifully done.
Date posted: 8/5/2005 12:50:54 AM
Wow! Not bad keep it up.
Date posted: 8/5/2005 3:03:50 PM
The interlude...was beautiful! I love this type of story!
Date posted: 8/12/2005 8:52:30 PM
Awwww...this was wonderful! I loved the little surprise there with Anakin showing up. The story about the two lovers was sweet....it fits perfeclty with Anakin and Padme's love. It's too bad they can't show their feelings for each other, but at least they get to dance under the stars together for this one magical night. Wonderful mush!!! :)
Date posted: 10/3/2005 6:07:47 PM
The story was very interesting.
You seem to have captured the moment and given it life. Short stories have effects on certain people. The effect you have it done well.
A small tip. When writing any type of star wars story, listen to the music. It will help you write the perfect words.
Date posted: 10/19/2005 11:41:30 PM
Sweet story. i love stories like these. i'm all about the mushy romantic stuff!!!!
Author: Roger Memb.
Date posted: 1/2/2006 7:54:35 PM
Roger Memb.'s Comments:
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Author: Hapless Tears
Date posted: 9/4/2006 5:43:56 AM
Hapless Tears's Comments:
Looks as tho Palpatine has finally helped rather then destroyed somehing 4 once
it's a romantic tale that of the princess and her 'unfitting love'
Date posted: 9/9/2006 9:57:16 PM
Aww, that was SOOO sweet!!!
Date posted: 2/12/2007 1:18:29 PM
AWwwww.........Simply beautiful.....and I thing that is originall, exept that I didn't like the part: when Ani told her that Palpatine knew their fellings. It's like sad.
Good Job, but it could be better.
Author: SugarBant Jinn
Date posted: 2/12/2007 11:34:48 PM
SugarBant Jinn's Comments:
beautiful! sweet, and well, just very good!
I'm usually not into Ani/Ami, but this was very much an exception. :)
Date posted: 10/30/2007 8:34:08 PM
Really sweet. Sorta shows you that Palpatine was kinda setting them up so that everything would happen the way it did.(if ya know what I mean, with Ani turning cuz he thought Padme was going to die.)