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Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 7/18/2005 9:15:21 PM
Quiller's Comments:

Dear readers: please note that I have not read the novelization by Matthew Stover, so this story is based only on my viewing of the movie.
Thank you. MTFBWY

Author: max3dguru
Date posted: 7/19/2005 7:24:25 AM
max3dguru's Comments:

Another fantastic story! When I saw you had a new one out I jumped into the read, and as always I was not disapointed.

Author: BooGrl
Date posted: 7/19/2005 10:12:46 AM
BooGrl's Comments:

i loved it! i like how you stated that whenever ben saw luke he thought of anakin killing the younglings.

impressive. most impressive.

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 7/20/2005 11:36:29 AM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

Oh, that had my heart hurting. The ani/luke comparison was great.

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/20/2005 2:24:57 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

It must have hurt Obi-Wan so much to watch Luke growing up, looking so much like his father. I love how seeing the baby reminded him of the younglings, particularly after seeing Luke in danger. I was also intrigued by his reaction to Beru. Yet more evidence that Obi-Wan is the quintessential Jedi. No matter what feelings lie in his heart, he will never act on them if the Jedi Code forbids it.

Author: Jira  (signed)
Date posted: 7/23/2005 7:32:26 PM
Jira's Comments:

I've always felt so sorry for Obi-Wan after Anakin's fall and this story makes me so happy that he has the opportunity, with Qui-Gon's help, to overcome his grief concerning Anakin. Wonderful job!

Author: Jedi Knight Safira Felan
Date posted: 7/25/2005 2:45:12 PM
Jedi Knight Safira Felan's Comments:

Wow. That was pretty awesome. I thought you captured very well how Obi-Wan would be feeling after the betrayal of his Padawan. I also like how most of his grief was centered on the younglings. Very good story! May the Force be with you!

Author: Veloz  (signed)
Date posted: 12/29/2005 5:51:21 PM
Veloz's Comments:

This was so touching!

I think that this fanfic truly touches the struggle Obi Wan went thru after the events of ROTS.. he didnt just sit in the dessert for 20 years.. he struggled to deal with his emotion and his guilt, cause he believes he failed Anakin.

I really enjoyed this one!

Author: Estel
Date posted: 3/5/2006 2:59:17 PM
Estel's Comments:

Well weaved... How can one forget about those fallen younglings?
I like the way you imagined Obi Wan facing this terrible memory.
Good piece!

Author: Jedi Cat Kenobi  (signed)
Date posted: 5/13/2006 11:03:39 PM
Jedi Cat Kenobi's Comments:

oh my. . .this was absolutely amazing!!! I loved the way you were able to weave Obi-Wan's feelings into the whole feel of the story!!!

Author: nightstallion
Date posted: 5/27/2006 12:16:01 PM
nightstallion's Comments:

made me cry

Author: tenshiamanda
Date posted: 9/10/2006 6:43:03 PM
tenshiamanda's Comments:

Beautiful fic and so sad. I don't think anyone could ahve been unaffected by the death of the younglings, personall I was finding it hard to hold back from crying. Very well written on Obi-Wans feeling, and Qui-Gon's appearance at the end was wonderful! Just the pick up needed. ^^

Author: ratna
Date posted: 4/13/2007 8:14:50 PM
ratna's Comments:

wrenching and beautiful

"You can start by acknowledging that you don't know all there is to know about the Force."


Author: Gladys
Date posted: 8/7/2012 9:00:03 PM
Gladys's Comments:

Just read this book last year. Made me want to read more Cather, but have not been able to find the time. Summer is coming and I am loknoig for some great reads, so thank you for jogging my memory about author Willa Cather.

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