Date posted: 9/20/2005 2:45:54 PM
Hey this was a really good story. It's evident that you know the characters very well and I liked how you used Vergere to start off the story and the Vong cult was a neet idea. One thing you might want to think about though is that Jacen seemed more like he did in the Young Jedi Knight series rather than he did at the end of "The Unifying Force." Just a thought. Anyway, overall this was a great story and I hope you continue writing.
Date posted: 9/21/2005 6:12:26 PM
I loved it. Very sweet. I also liked how you worked Vergere into the story. Nicely Done.
Author: Tasia Solo of Dathomir
Date posted: 10/5/2005 4:06:33 PM
Tasia Solo of Dathomir's Comments:
YAY!!! Congrats on getting this archived; I love this wonderful story!
Awesome action and brilliant characterization! Your J/TK writing rocks.
Author: Jedi Halcyon
Date posted: 10/14/2005 10:15:24 AM
Jedi Halcyon's Comments:
brill! i'd love to hear more about these characters, like when jacen returns and Ta'a Chume's revenge on him for doing so.
Date posted: 12/1/2005 5:22:05 AM
First off, awesome story, very well thought out. The Vong cult was a nice twist, something unpredictable, and made for an interesting "bad guy" if you will.
However, I have one question, and I just might be out of the loop; didn't Tenel have her arm severed in a lightsaber accident? That kept tugging at me as you made references in scense where she had both arms and hands.
Anyways, keep up the great work!
Date posted: 6/30/2006 1:20:29 AM
AWESOME STORY!!! I love the idea of Tenel Ka and Jacen together.I wonder if one day they'll have a kid.
Date posted: 10/24/2008 10:35:22 PM
haha good ending
Date posted: 1/16/2016 3:07:45 AM
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