Author: Gabri_Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 9/20/2005 2:19:27 AM
Gabri_Jade's Comments:

Wonderful as always, darling - and I still love the cover art. ;)

Author: nataraja
Date posted: 9/20/2005 6:34:03 PM
nataraja's Comments:

It's very beautiful. :-) You did an excellent job of conveying depth in simplicity. The only "constructive" comment I can think to make is that you might want to watch out for repeating words too close to one another or too often in the story. Regardless, I really enjoyed this one; keep up wthe good work.

Author: VaderLVR64  (signed)
Date posted: 9/23/2005 4:46:01 PM
VaderLVR64's Comments:

Gorgeous, as usual!

Author: Idrelle Miocovani
Date posted: 9/24/2005 6:34:39 PM
Idrelle Miocovani's Comments:

Beautiful, Oba! I adore second person fics!

Author: TKeira_Lea  (signed)
Date posted: 9/28/2005 7:16:46 AM
TKeira_Lea's Comments:

Oba,

I really liked this. What a different concept, yet very Star Warsy at the same time. Lyrical and beautiful to read.

Keep up the good work.

T'Keira

P.S. - the cover art is amazing as always

Author: Bale  (signed)
Date posted: 10/10/2005 10:48:53 AM
Bale's Comments:

One of the best uses of 2d person POV I've ever seen! This was a very beautiful and poetic piece. Well done!

Author: LLL  (signed)
Date posted: 10/10/2005 9:06:01 PM
LLL's Comments:

I thought this was very original and beautiful. Very pleased to accept it into the archive!

Whoever did the cover art has done a very good job, too!

Author: Nemesis
Date posted: 10/11/2005 10:16:02 AM
Nemesis's Comments:

Beautiful - lyrical and moving. Bravo!

Love the cover art :D

Author: Jedi Knight Quia Lor  (signed)
Date posted: 12/9/2005 9:15:13 PM
Jedi Knight Quia Lor's Comments:

Oba! How pretty! I haven't read anything of yours in a while and it's lovely to know you still write so beautifully!

You make me love fanfiction again!

May the Force be with you,
Quia