Author: Star Traveler  (signed)
Date posted: 10/14/2005 5:21:41 PM
Star Traveler's Comments:

Great story. I really got a sense of the emotional turmoil Obi-Wan had to deal with after his Master's death. It was also nice to see that same commitment paralleled between two generations of the Skywalker family. Well done!

Author: Spin Cycle
Date posted: 10/14/2005 6:10:31 PM
Spin Cycle's Comments:

Too cool. I love philosophical/introspective pieces that really get into the character's head, and I enjoyed this one even more than most. Naturally, with both the type of story, and my favorite character.. How could I not?

^^

Really though, I love the idea, and what you did with it. Very cool.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 10/14/2005 7:12:49 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

I can't say enough nice things about this story. I nearly cried but my Jedi restraint wouldn't let me.

MTFBWY

Author: Renka
Date posted: 10/22/2005 9:09:22 PM
Renka's Comments:

Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it. I could really sense Obi-Wan's grief and his will to do the right thing. I loved the end, how you showed the same thing going through his head when he began to instruct Luke. Really well written. I hope to read even more by you.

Author: LVB  (signed)
Date posted: 10/24/2005 5:51:49 AM
LVB's Comments:

This was a great introspective piece. I felt that the Jedi would not approve of Obi-Wan mourning his Master and seeing his turmoil cemented this idea.

You linked the two sections of the story which was a great technique. The repetition was also effective. Overall a great job.

Author: thebleetingnichodmeus
Date posted: 12/2/2005 2:35:27 PM
thebleetingnichodmeus's Comments:

Not bad. I often felt that Old Ben discovering Luke unconscious would set of a torrent of his own memories. You could see it in his face when Luke asked about Anakin in Episode IV.

Author: Estel
Date posted: 3/5/2006 2:38:58 PM
Estel's Comments:

Poor Obi Wan: what sadness he must have endured...
You described beautifully what he must have felt.

Author: Jedi Cat Kenobi  (signed)
Date posted: 5/14/2006 6:46:25 PM
Jedi Cat Kenobi's Comments:

oh I love this!!! Thank you for posting it!!!

Author: Gabri_Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 6/17/2006 9:44:00 PM
Gabri_Jade's Comments:

Such a wonderful and genuine look at Obi-Wan's outlook and emotional state throughout. You really captured the essence of who Obi-Wan is with this story. Great job. :)

Author: SugarBant Jinn  (signed)
Date posted: 2/9/2007 7:01:53 PM
SugarBant Jinn's Comments:

*sniff* so sad! but very well written! great job!

Author: ratna
Date posted: 3/21/2007 7:12:09 AM
ratna's Comments:

Beautiful development of both character and emotion.

Author: Nia Naberrie
Date posted: 2/2/2010 1:40:31 PM
Nia Naberrie's Comments:

TT-TT wonderfull fanfic, really, I cry all the time

I dont have words to describe how I fell, but I constantly think "no, Qui Gon wont be there when Obi Wan take part in the Knigthood ceremony... he wont be there to cut his braid" and I star crying again.... TT-TT

rally, magnific and amazing fanfic, one of my favorites