Date posted: 12/13/2005 8:07:46 PM
Well writen, and a departure from the norm. Very good job!
The communications were a cool touch!
Much more can be done with this...
a sequel perhaps?
Date posted: 12/18/2005 10:48:58 AM
Wow this is really quite good not to mention refreshing! I only wish there was more!!
Date posted: 12/18/2005 10:55:48 AM
Well, since you ask!!
There are actually 7 (at last count) stories that feature this family... they can be found on the foce net fan fiction boards! :)
Date posted: 1/11/2006 9:31:32 PM
Though I'm wondering at your choice of names for the Canaille family. Not exactly complimentary to call a family "rabble", or a man "villain".
Author: Colin Pemberton
Date posted: 1/17/2006 3:04:16 PM
Colin Pemberton's Comments:
Who is the lady on the front? To me she looks a bit like Biggs, is she any relation?