Date posted: 8/14/2001 1:51:16 PM
I liked this one a lot. I liked that in this alternate universe, there was still some hope for Anakin in the end.
Date posted: 8/14/2001 7:19:31 PM
The little name game had me laughing out loud. Senator Mot Not Rab was named in a similar fashion after a Lucasfilm worker's son.
I also liked the telepathic Jedi Council scene.
Date posted: 8/18/2001 10:25:08 AM
I thought this was excellent. I've not read any fan fic before, but if the rest is up to this quality I'll be reading plenty more.
Author: Padawon So-Var Leet
Date posted: 8/22/2001 11:24:45 AM
Padawon So-Var Leet's Comments:
Stunning. Very well written. A good take on a SW AU.
Date posted: 8/24/2001 4:11:55 PM
I really liked this one. The personalities were well done. Very interesting. This is one of the best fan-fics out there, I think.
Date posted: 8/25/2001 8:54:07 AM
This is one of my favorite AUs and one of my favorite Anakin stories. Great from beginning to end.
Author: Mcily Nochi
Date posted: 8/25/2001 10:37:33 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:
A very good story. Every moment is intriguing -- excellent AU.
Author: Nafsraw Rats
Date posted: 10/9/2001 12:14:36 PM
Nafsraw Rats's Comments:
Very well written and a good story of how Qui Gon might have been saved and what would have happened if he had! :-)
Author: Yodimus Prime
Date posted: 10/29/2001 8:26:30 AM
Yodimus Prime's Comments:
I thought this story was great. I'd love to see a sequal once episode 2 comes out.
Date posted: 12/5/2001 9:48:19 AM
This was a COOL story! It took me over a few hours to read it but it was worth it!
Date posted: 12/9/2001 1:57:41 AM
I really liked this story, and I left it with the feeling that in this universe, Anikin will not turn.
Author: Argent Jedi
Date posted: 12/14/2001 6:15:50 PM
Argent Jedi's Comments:
This was great! I always enjoy "what if" stories, and this one was exceptional! I'm just about to read the sequel- can't wait.
Author: Jedi Knight Leia
Date posted: 9/21/2002 8:24:33 AM
Jedi Knight Leia's Comments:
I really liked this story. I can't wait to read the sequels.
Date posted: 11/3/2002 1:48:52 PM
Superb! Really one of the best fan-fics I have ever read. A great alternative storyline and one which opened up a lot of different ideas.
I'd love a sequel. Will Anakin still turn dark? If not, what will happen with the empire?
Date posted: 1/1/2003 4:30:23 AM
Great! I truly enjoyed reading this. While rading it I started to think that this would have been a great story for episode 1.
Date posted: 1/2/2003 1:00:02 PM
I think i've read this somewhere before. Or rather I know that I have read it before and I just had the pleasure of re-reading it! :) I must tell you that I loved it. I like how you portray all the characters and it's a fun story to read! :) If you ever were to decide to make a sequel to this i'd definatly read it! :)
Date posted: 1/11/2003 11:46:46 AM
i read this story awhile ago and never commented on it-so i am now! this story is probably one of the, if not THE, best stories I have ever read--I really enjoy qui-gon-lives ones--the sequels are just as good!!! right now I am considering re-reading it because I loved it so much!!! (and since I read it awhile ago, and i mean AWHILE ago it will be even better!!)GOOD JOB!!!!
Date posted: 2/10/2003 5:27:04 AM
Well done - I couldn't put it "down"! Great alternate story - with ongoing possibilites!
Date posted: 2/3/2004 10:37:00 PM
It is now 1:32 AM and I have school tomorrow but I dont care! Excellent story, I cant wait to read the sequels but, maybe tomorrow... Anyway, I love the AU-but-still-fits-with-the-story thing. Everyone's character was greatly portrayed as well, Obi-Wan's uncomfortableness in taking a padawan reflets on how he actually probably wouldn't have, if not for Qui-Gon dying. Wonderfully Force-Inspired story!
aka. Zax-Ryn Kenobi
Date posted: 3/22/2004 5:19:26 PM
"Tola Hgual" LOL (for those of you who still haven't figured it out, it's backwards)
Great fanfic, biggest what-if question of Ep 1 is "What if Qui-Gon survived?" and yet I've only seen two stories about that, this being by far the better of the two.
Date posted: 6/18/2005 5:14:46 PM
Very interesting idea, seems quite well-written.
However, I'm sorry but I just couldn't get through all of it because I got fed up with Anakin. You captured all of his annoyingness from the movies waaay too well. "I'll try spinning! That's a good trick!" "Yippee!" That kind of thing, you know? It just doesn't sound like a real person. And it's endlessly irritating. And I know he acts like that sometimes (ok, a lot) in the movies, but did you have to copy it so well?
Author: Darth Slaya
Date posted: 8/27/2005 6:45:48 PM
Darth Slaya's Comments:
This was a great story and i have siad it before and will say it agin i nomaly only read stories abuot Vader, Luke, Leia, and the Emporor but i have read previeous stories fromthis writer/s and i must say that they have a natural talent for writing and i shall now read the seqils to this story!
Author: SugarBant Jinn
Date posted: 2/12/2007 10:39:07 PM
SugarBant Jinn's Comments:
absolutly wonderful! I love everything about it. Anakins' situation is very intreguiing, and I can't wait to read the two sequels! I immediatly fell in love with K-LE1, or 'Kaely' - I want a 'Kaely-droid'! :P
um, I noticed the AN at the beggining, and, no, I didn't see a name game. what were you referring to?
Author: SugarBant Jinn
Date posted: 2/12/2007 10:47:34 PM
SugarBant Jinn's Comments:
ok, about my not understanding the name-game thing, I just figured it out. Very clever! I never would have thought to do that! I always have trouble comeing up with good Star Wars names!
Date posted: 11/2/2007 9:11:42 PM
THIS IS THE BEST! This was the first thing I read on this website and it was by far the absolute BEST!!! You should write more sequels about how Ani ended up destroying the Sith(since he STILL is the Chosen One) I haven't figured out the name game yet though...
Date posted: 12/13/2007 11:19:56 PM
How come Drah Seirt has a golden lightsaber? I looked it up, and golden lightsabers are only awarded to Dark Jedi Grand Masters.
Author: Aliit Vodeson
Date posted: 2/1/2012 9:36:40 AM
Aliit Vodeson's Comments:
Throughly enjoyed it. A very possible AU and not one that many other people have done. I've seen plenty where Qoi Gon survives, but never one done where Ani doesn't become a padawan right off. A bit long for my tastes, I felt the chase scenes dragged on, but overall, a very well written story.
Date posted: 1/16/2016 1:41:29 AM
That's really thninkig of the highest order