Date posted: 7/9/2001 3:41:39 PM
That was one of the greatest "torture" stories I've ever read. It was awesome. You should keep writing. Nice story!
Author: Lau-ra Anu
Date posted: 7/10/2001 8:27:34 AM
Lau-ra Anu's Comments:
Great story! I love Obi-Wan's sense of humour. I thought that it was quite clever. Please write more!
Date posted: 7/10/2001 6:09:52 PM
I like, I like.
Loved the characterisation of 'our little padawan' and the senator.
Date posted: 7/13/2001 9:41:59 PM
This was great, Jane. The senator was so wonderfully annoying -- the perfect foil for Jedi patience.
Date posted: 7/15/2001 10:29:30 PM
Hey, excellent Obi-Wan story...I was actually wishing it were longer. Great job with the characters, and "Yirritating's" change of heart. :)
Date posted: 7/25/2001 3:57:01 PM
Really well done! I loved it! Obi-Wan is usually painted as practically infallible; it's nice to have him human. He's a real teenager. Many a time have I thought of people with names like "Yirritating."
Date posted: 7/28/2001 5:51:50 PM
Of all the fanfic Obi-Wan stories I read before this one is one of the best.
Keep on writing more like these!!!
Date posted: 7/31/2001 8:16:53 PM
Terrific story! And I'm really picky about Obi-Wan stories. I really liked the dialogue between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan. I also appreciated the realism when Qui-Gon put Sentator Yirrit's safety before Obi-Wan's. Great job and please write some more!
Author: Jedi Jenn
Date posted: 9/10/2001 8:24:44 PM
Jedi Jenn's Comments:
Wow, that was an awesome fic! I love Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan stories and this is definitely one of the best!! ; ) Good job!
Author: Indiann Leanna
Date posted: 9/14/2001 3:19:23 PM
Indiann Leanna's Comments:
That was one of the best short stories i have ever read! It was truely amazing!
I loved it! You truely brought the characters to life!
Date posted: 12/18/2001 4:20:55 AM
poor obi-wan!!!! It must have hurt like hell and senator yirrit scolding him for letting jerrup escape. i thought it was very funny when qui-gon called senator yirrit yirritating
Date posted: 5/20/2002 10:48:29 PM
Not much to write but just one little thing- I just loved the "Yirritating" pun. Never though Qui-Gon Jinn, of all people, had a sense of humor. Keep it up!
Date posted: 6/18/2002 11:36:12 AM
i enjoyed this story, thanks.
Date posted: 6/23/2002 2:24:21 PM
Great story! I thought this was really cute!
Date posted: 7/16/2002 9:17:02 PM
Great job! Keep up the good work!
Date posted: 10/28/2002 10:24:55 AM
Fun to read. Great mix of characters. I liked the torture scene where you could really get a feel for what (young) Obi-wan was going through. Hope to read more of your work.
Date posted: 12/30/2002 6:30:58 PM
Great story. You made Obi Wan have a great sense of humor that he probbly would never have. Great job.
Date posted: 8/18/2003 1:21:15 PM
Foot-in-Mouth disease - that's hilarious! I love this story. You handle the shifting between humorous and serious passages very well - good pacing, and very nice style. I love Obi-Wan's sense of humour and his interaction with Qui-Gon. You have the characterization spot-on, at least, in my opinion. All in all, great job. ^_^
-- Majoranka, recovering from a final fit of laughter caused by the Foot-in-Mouth disease
Date posted: 2/13/2005 1:15:34 AM
*nods* i like it.... i like it alot very good i love the whole thing with the senator "our little padawan" and trying to make him eat etc etc etc
i just want to know if there will be a sequel? (i think i'm obbsesed with sequels but these stories are so good!!) maybe one where Obi -Wan has to go stay with the senator...(i dunno i suck at storie ideas)
Date posted: 4/30/2005 6:51:01 AM
That was so cool! I don't know what to say- the last bit was so funny with Qui-Gon calling the Senator 'Senator Yirritating' as well.
Date posted: 10/16/2007 5:33:13 PM
I only just found this story, and I enjoyed it immensely. My favorite humor fics are the ones that are grounded in good characterization!
Date posted: 10/16/2007 6:49:15 PM
--Er, obviously the torture wasn't funny; I cringed over the descriptions and was impressed with the balance (which seemed reasonable for a Jedi) between resistance and pain. But I was certainly snickering again by the time Qui-Gon slipped into the... nickname. (He had a point about Obi-Wan's own experiences and courtesy... but man, that pun was too tempting.)
Date posted: 10/30/2012 12:40:31 PM
that was an awesome fic!
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Date posted: 11/3/2016 11:08:31 PM
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