Date posted: 10/25/2006 7:27:20 AM
Very good story. Characters are well written and the plot keeps you interested from the begining to the end.
Date posted: 10/25/2006 11:50:45 AM
This is the Post-NJO story that should've been published. DN is a tragedy compared to this!
Date posted: 11/1/2006 1:43:16 PM
I am so relieved that someone has FINALLY written a story about Jagged Fel. I love this character and the way you portrayed him. It was very realistic! You should try writing a story about Jag's younger days with the Chiss.
Date posted: 11/14/2006 7:30:23 PM
I was up untill three in the morning night before last reading this and still didn't finish it untill yesterday morning. It just wouldn't let me put it down! A very good read!
Date posted: 2/27/2007 2:34:56 PM
"This is the Post-NJO story that should've been published." i definitly agree this has to be one of the best fanfics ever written!!!
Date posted: 3/21/2007 12:28:28 PM
Oh...my....that....was too amazing for words.... I loved it! It really ought to be one of the published books
Date posted: 2/19/2008 9:11:37 PM
This is the best written fic I've read so far, definitely better than DN!
Date posted: 9/3/2008 10:11:17 AM
Simply delightful thing! One of my most favourite fic. I always loved Jag and was for that they with Jaina have got married, and how you all has turned it, have surpassed all my expectations. And my favourite Jacen simply remarkable! And my favourite scene - when Jag and Jacen sit in a bar. Shawnkyr is good. In general, many thanks!!!
Date posted: 12/24/2008 7:39:45 PM
this is my absolute favorite fic I've read DN was horrible and I think this is what should have happened. hopefully it will in the future books after LotF. parts made me want to either cry or laugh, an incredibly well written story
Date posted: 2/11/2009 10:54:19 AM
I dunno, maybe it was just me, but I thought a lot of the mains were OOC. Characterization of Jag, Jaina, and Jacen treated them like they were still teenagers and Mara seemed bipolar. Also, had a hard time buying some of the plot-pirates shouldn't have ISDs in the Unknown Regions and the whole ysalamiri thing was a bit much.
Date posted: 3/30/2009 9:53:00 PM
I love this story. I just read it for the second (or third?) time, and cried and laughed my way through it all over again.
When Jag said "you are so beautiful" at the end I had tears steaming down my cheeks.
You two are such brilliant authors. I think you captured the characters (especially Jaina, Jacen and Jag; but Shawkyr, Mara, Talon, Obi-Wan, etc as well) perfectly, as well as the spirit of SW.
Absolutely perfect. *sigh*
I love this whole series, I hope to see more!!