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Author: Toni
Date posted: 10/23/2006 7:44:10 PM
Toni's Comments:

How nice to see this one up!
I love your characterization of little Obi-Wan and little Siri. Siri is so stubborn and has such a strong personality I think you would see that at only 3. As for Obi-Wan, isn't "girls are yucky" such a 5 year old boy thought?

Author: LuvEwan
Date posted: 10/25/2006 7:50:46 PM
LuvEwan's Comments:

I love this story. You always write children so well--so realistically. They're never too cute, or too smart for their own age. They're just real and endearing. I liked that you showed some of the history between Obi-Wan and Bruck, keeping Obi-Wan the same person despite his young age. And the interactions with Siri were so funny.

Author: JazzFox
Date posted: 10/29/2006 1:58:17 AM
JazzFox's Comments:

Great story Diane! I enjoy reading the fan fics about Obi-wan's childhood, and this is my favorite so far! It was very well written. Also, I really liked the way you portrayed Siri... you wrote her exactly like my three year old cousin Emmeline, which made me laugh, because it was so realistic. :) Again, great job, and thanks for posting the story!

Author: VaderLVR64  (signed)
Date posted: 10/29/2006 8:55:58 AM
VaderLVR64's Comments:

This was absolutely wonderful! It's nice to see where "The Negotiator" got his start!


Author: Obi-Kenobi-Devotee
Date posted: 10/31/2006 2:45:24 PM
Obi-Kenobi-Devotee's Comments:

Loved it then, love it now. Its such a great story. I love Obi's thoughts. So typical.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 11/1/2006 6:16:03 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

Lil Siri...that's just too cute. Loved it. Really great. :]


Author: SWpants666  (signed)
Date posted: 11/10/2006 11:40:17 AM
SWpants666's Comments:

oh, this was so great!! So adorable. I loved it :)

Author: jedigirl
Date posted: 10/25/2007 12:22:20 AM
jedigirl's Comments:

Now that was just too cute. Wonder how "obi" got himself outta that one w/ Bruck and all. Really funny. I love it.:)

Author: Wolf Kenobi
Date posted: 11/2/2007 10:36:15 PM
Wolf Kenobi's Comments:

This was hilarious!! You wrote a five year old obi-wan very one. poodoo head- that is such a five year old boy thing!

Author: jarogue
Date posted: 8/24/2008 6:07:47 PM
jarogue's Comments:

I love it! It helps me imagine what it would be like to be a padawan. And bruck deserved what he got!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!A very sweet story that leaves me with a warm feeling afterwards.

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