Date posted: 3/21/2007 7:24:28 PM
This is a really great fic. I love the light angst that's present throughout the entire story. I've never read a fanfic where Mara died and Luke lived on afterward. They are always the other way around.
Date posted: 3/22/2007 4:39:13 AM
oh i'm crying.
Date posted: 3/22/2007 8:50:48 AM
I love how you got inside Luke's head, and the (very Luke-ish) way he carries on with life but can't quite shake off the feeling that something's missing. And it's wonderful, the way that the story never slips quite into tragedy; achingly sad, yes, but never dark.
A superb fic. Well done.
Author: Jedi X-Man Serena Kenobi
Date posted: 3/22/2007 3:33:16 PM
Jedi X-Man Serena Kenobi's Comments:
Beautiful. It was fantastic. Loved it! You really portrayed Luke's feelings. Well done!
Date posted: 3/22/2007 4:45:21 PM
Date posted: 3/24/2007 9:25:33 PM
A wonderful depiction of the unspoken connection between the alive and dead, even when no earthly connection was present. Fantastic! I hope to hear more from you!
Date posted: 4/2/2007 10:43:27 PM
its cool, but
Date posted: 4/8/2007 6:34:33 PM
That really pulled on the heart strings. Seems such a sad ife to feel that constant sense of something missing.
Author: Jedi Trace
Date posted: 4/18/2007 10:14:48 PM
Jedi Trace's Comments:
Ah, you know my feelings on this, Gabri. Absolutely exquisite!
Date posted: 5/7/2007 2:16:00 PM
The best first line ever, is what I thought when I read this for the first time. Best first line, and it only gets better, more heartwrenching, more poignant.
You are an incredible writer, and very few people have a better grasp on the Luke Mara dynamic. Bravo!
Date posted: 6/21/2007 10:07:02 PM
That was great. I started off thinking that I wasn't going to enjoy it, but then boom! halfway through the first paragraph, I was hooked. it's good that there are gutsy authors like this so we can have great stories like this.
Author: Arwen Skywalker
Date posted: 8/20/2007 10:03:21 PM
Arwen Skywalker's Comments:
*sniff* I loved this...I'm crying..the ending as sooo perfect!!! That something missing sense of something not right...great job!!!
Date posted: 3/21/2011 4:30:32 PM
Awesome job!!! I've always liked the pairing of Mara and Luke and never once had thought about what would happen if she had died at Mount Tantiss.