Date posted: 9/1/2007 12:41:17 PM
Love the idea. The way that when everything else ends, some things continue. Brilliantly written too.
Oh and... yay! First comment!
Author: Joe Hella
Date posted: 9/2/2007 9:14:01 PM
Joe Hella's Comments:
Very well done, I'm glad to see others can see that we're very good at killing ourselves. An unfortunate truth of what can happen... even in our world. Kudos!
Author: Phantom Jedi
Date posted: 9/27/2007 7:24:33 PM
Phantom Jedi's Comments:
This is deep and brilliantly written. Good job! You kept me guessing right up until the first words came from the holocron.
Date posted: 10/11/2007 7:58:43 PM
Very profound and enjoyable fic.
Date posted: 10/16/2007 12:51:18 PM
Amasing story, you could base an entirely new sieries off this, and if you don't feel like it, someone should get in touch with Timothy Zahn.
Date posted: 1/20/2008 7:06:45 PM
Extraordinary. All I can say really.
Well done on managing to convey the sheer sense of age and desolation the narrator feels for the dead galaxy. Bravo. Sheer excellence.
Date posted: 11/20/2008 5:37:04 PM
Eloquently written, but I found the story to be too broad and vague. Your foundation is solid, but you fail to build upon it until the final paragraph, where the true story begins. It's like a long first chapter of a book, with an intriguing story yet to be told.
Author: Not Quite a Knight
Date posted: 5/14/2009 1:57:43 PM
Not Quite a Knight's Comments:
Great begging, sounds like a prologue, could become a great book someday! Keep up the good work.