Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 1/22/2007 11:17:30 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

Sweet and interesting.

Author: Persephone_Kore  (signed)
Date posted: 2/4/2007 4:26:34 AM
Persephone_Kore's Comments:

*Ewwwww.* That is one type of food (or, er, many types of food) that I would probably be willing to eat if I lived in its universe, but would rather not think in too much detail about the origin.

You write very vividly, with well-chosen details. I may occasionally wish you wouldn't. ;) But it's an impressive skill. The characterization is interesting, with both parties' fallibility and how it's talked out and remedied.

Author: Kadi-Ahn_Tanye
Date posted: 2/7/2007 10:03:54 PM
Kadi-Ahn_Tanye's Comments:

You have a wonderful talent for writing, you just may want to work on plotting a little. But besides that, it was VERY nicely written.

Author: Kadi-Ahn_Tanye
Date posted: 2/7/2007 10:04:10 PM
Kadi-Ahn_Tanye's Comments:

You have a wonderful talent for writing, you just may want to work on plotting a little. But besides that, it was VERY nicely written.

Author: LuvEwan
Date posted: 2/14/2007 12:02:29 PM
LuvEwan's Comments:

Ah, one of my very favorites of yours. I love how Qui-Gon lets Obi-Wan put him to sleep, and Obi-Wan acting out the commercial with eerie perfection. This story really displays your talent for unique details and straight out great characterization. Lovely lovely lovely. :)

Author: Dreagoddess
Date posted: 2/17/2007 9:13:42 PM
Dreagoddess's Comments:

Okay, this one makes me go "eww" and "aww" at the same time, which is quite the achievement. ;) The relationship between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan was very well done. I loved the bit about not recognizing the love if not for the conflict.

...All that said, I don't know if I could ever eat in the SW universe if this is what they serve!

Author: SugarBant Jinn  (signed)
Date posted: 2/22/2007 12:59:23 AM
SugarBant Jinn's Comments:

very original world! and excellently described! I got a kick out of Obi-Wan's imitation of the commercial - it reminded me so much of myself quoting movie lines! lol! loved it! good job!

Author: ratna
Date posted: 4/20/2007 3:54:20 AM
ratna's Comments:

Your descriptions are so imaginative and realistic. Wow.
I also enjoyed the story and the relationship between Master and Padawan. (I'm kind of a sucker for that.)

Author: jarogue  (signed)
Date posted: 8/18/2008 8:45:49 PM
jarogue's Comments:

Wow! this is one of the best fan fics I've ever read! I don't know who you or why you tied me up in your basement, but I like your story! I like how you tell it because I feel like I really am Qui-Gon, sitting in that bacta tank! Or Obi-WAn. Poor Obi-wan. He lost his hair. :(

Author: Asra
Date posted: 1/30/2009 3:18:28 PM
Asra's Comments:

wow, this is a very nice story you wrote.
really, I love how you worked with the charakter.
This is really one of my favourite fanfics about Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan.

Author: Brightbear
Date posted: 4/6/2011 3:24:51 AM
Brightbear's Comments:

This was very sweet. I love the gentle pace of it, and the two different viewpoints are quite balanced.