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Author: Dreagoddess
Date posted: 2/19/2007 9:41:38 PM
Dreagoddess's Comments:

*gigglefits* I absolutely adore Han here. And Anakin. He comes across so well, even just with Luke translating things. I can so picture him coming back as a ghost and the thing he wants most to do is be solid so he can tinker!

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 2/19/2007 10:23:36 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

This definitely made me laugh. Luke...I'm not sure how to describe that bit...

Author: VaderLVR64  (signed)
Date posted: 2/20/2007 9:53:18 AM
VaderLVR64's Comments:

"And third," Han said, ignoring this and sticking his head briefly back out, "tell him, I've met Threepio. I've spent a lot of time with Threepio. And if he's presenting Threepio as an example of his mechanical skills...." He took a deep breath. "Then that is NOT A RECOMMENDATION!"

Can't say I blame him there! Loved it!!!

Author: JediClaire
Date posted: 2/22/2007 8:37:38 AM
JediClaire's Comments:

Brillant! I just wish the story was a bit longer, then I could have giggled longer as well!

Author: LLL
Date posted: 2/22/2007 7:18:33 PM
LLL's Comments:

Isn't this a GAS?? I love this story!!

Author: Kadi-Ahn_Tanye
Date posted: 2/23/2007 11:49:29 AM
Kadi-Ahn_Tanye's Comments:

There is only one word I can think of to describe this story.


Author: Padema
Date posted: 2/23/2007 3:14:40 PM
Padema's Comments:


Author: Arwen Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 2/23/2007 10:18:10 PM
Arwen Skywalker's Comments:

LOL!!! I love Han yelling "that is not a recomendation!". I LOLed so hard! Great Fic. Poor ANi, nothing to fix. :D

Author: Nienna Narmolanya  (signed)
Date posted: 2/27/2007 7:08:24 PM
Nienna Narmolanya's Comments:

*falls off chair laughing*
That was amazing, Persephone, and just what I needed after a stressful day at school. The last line was my favorite - a great clincher - but the whole story was excellent. :-)

Nice job!

Author: Zonoma  (signed)
Date posted: 3/6/2007 7:06:53 PM
Zonoma's Comments:

This was the first thing I read after an unexpected hiatus from SW fanfic and it left such a smile on my face! I loved poor Han in this. Great characterization! Thanks for the pick me up.!!!

Author: SugarBant Jinn  (signed)
Date posted: 3/8/2007 11:14:48 PM
SugarBant Jinn's Comments:

LOL! I can sympathize with Han here - those are my sentiments exactly!

I loved it! very well written, and the characterization was good!

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 3/30/2007 6:02:40 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

I gotta agree w/Zonama...for a first fanfic after an accidental break from Star Wars, I am IMPRESSED!!!!

i fell out of my chair, honestly.


Author: marajader2d2
Date posted: 4/2/2007 10:55:35 PM
marajader2d2's Comments:

thats rofl HILARIOUS!!!!! a true work of art, everybody comes together and the characters are GREAT!!!!!

Author: Jturtle  (signed)
Date posted: 4/9/2007 7:43:45 PM
Jturtle's Comments:


Last line was my absolute favorite.

Author: Aiel
Date posted: 4/12/2007 1:28:11 AM
Aiel's Comments:

Absolutely wonderful, funny, short sharp and shiny.

Well done!

Author: Jewelle
Date posted: 5/25/2007 4:41:35 PM
Jewelle's Comments:

this is flippin funny! I love it! this is by far my favorite fanfiction that I've read.

Author: Master Senya Analandi  (signed)
Date posted: 6/7/2007 7:29:15 PM
Master Senya Analandi's Comments:

Perfect!!!!! This was one of the first fan fics I've read and I fell of my chair laughing!!! :D Love the last line!!!!!

Author: leia's_sister  (signed)
Date posted: 8/13/2007 8:00:16 AM
leia's_sister's Comments:

i roflmao'd so much i needed the toilet afterwards!!! loved the last line!!!!!!

Author: jedigirl
Date posted: 11/3/2007 12:27:48 AM
jedigirl's Comments:

THAT WAS HILARIOUS! I can just imagine the look on Han's face when he heaard that bt 'bout Ani building 3PO. That was completely the wrong thing for Ani to say. ;)

Author: Gerarra Flur
Date posted: 1/17/2008 11:48:07 AM
Gerarra Flur's Comments:

*splitting her sides*
HA Solo! Now YOU have to get your teeth shocked out of your head by the Falcon's evil fuses!
Oops.... Ahem.
Well to say the least, I loved it! You've got Han's character down to the final egotistic note. I applaud you on this. I only wish there were more, my fine fan-ficing friend. (say that ten times fast)

the G'sy and ex-Jedi,
Gerarra Flur

Author: wover30  (signed)
Date posted: 3/4/2008 10:03:19 AM
wover30's Comments:

I can just imagine Anakin pouting after Han's speech to Luke. Grins. My theory is that Han hasn't felt the power of the force and will give in eventually to Anakin. Muahahaha.
Hem. Now that my insane moment is over, great job, great writing and great humor!


Author: jfreake2004  (signed)
Date posted: 3/21/2011 4:45:29 PM
jfreake2004's Comments:

*wipes tears from eyes*

Oh, you got Han down to the tee!! I loved this fic! Great job!

I really needed this after a hectic day at work!

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