Date posted: 3/22/2007 2:00:39 AM
Oh, wow. You say a lot with a little here, sketched out this AU in such a believable way with so few words. Really powerful writing - hit me with an emotional punch, and I love the code as it's used in the story, because it's so cold, but by that you let the implications speak for themselves, in the reader's mind. Very skillful.
Date posted: 3/22/2007 4:16:15 AM
The Death Star and Vader are still kicking around, but the Empire was defeated.
And Luke has half a mind. The compassionate half.
I liked the use of code (computer ... DNA ... it's all code ....), too.
Date posted: 3/22/2007 4:46:25 PM
You know how much I love this. It packs an emotional punch every time I read it.
Date posted: 3/25/2007 12:27:06 AM
This is probably the most original of any fan fiction that I have ever read anywhere. Congrats on creating a very good something out of literally nothing. I never would have thought of an alternate ending to A New Hope! You've successfully made a virtually impossible work, INCLUDING depth, character, and above all else, style.
Author: Diane Kovalcin
Date posted: 3/26/2007 5:51:28 AM
Diane Kovalcin's Comments:
Nem, you know how much I love this story. It's brilliant both in the way it's told and the sheer horror/despair of the story. Wonderfully done. Bravo.
Date posted: 4/5/2007 2:28:49 PM
Oh my. That was incredible. I have the highest admiration for writers who employ this style, minimalistic, almost bare. You are a master of it.
I feel all emotionally torn up, now.
Date posted: 4/5/2007 4:59:47 PM
Author checking in :)
Thanks so much Diane and VaderLVR for beta'ing this for me - it means a lot - and to everyone who's read this, on the boards as well as here. :)
Happy writing, all.
Author: Roger Memb. .
Date posted: 6/24/2007 2:47:52 PM
Roger Memb. .'s Comments:
No. I am afraid this did not satisfy. The prose was awkward, making the reading a chore.
Date posted: 3/6/2008 11:18:23 PM
Wow. That was really intense. I stared at the computer screen for a couple seconds before completely registering what I read and I loved it. Wonderful interpretation for what might of been. Good writing. Keep up the great work.
Date posted: 6/17/2011 12:52:36 PM
And I thuoght I was the sensible one. Thanks for setting me straight.
Date posted: 12/4/2012 2:31:18 AM
You've got it in one. Couldn't have put it btteer.
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