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Author: JadeTakashi  (signed)
Date posted: 3/21/2007 7:31:11 PM
JadeTakashi's Comments:

This is absolutely beautiful. You had me going there for a second, I couldn't figure out what was going on.

So at what point did Mara die? Or was she dead the whole time and I just missed it?
Anyway, this like so many others you have written, is a great fic.

Author: Scotty karrde
Date posted: 3/25/2007 12:20:19 AM
Scotty karrde's Comments:

Totally speechless.
It was only when I was three quarters through that I realized what was really happening - and I gasped aloud. I reread it and felt my throat go all choked up.
I LOVED the line about Qui Gon's comment about Luke penetrating the plane - so beautifully in character, in universe, not heavy handed, so perfect.
what makes it hurt so much is that I could actually see it happenign. This is absolute perfection!!!

Author: Zonoma  (signed)
Date posted: 3/27/2007 9:26:45 PM
Zonoma's Comments:

This was, is, and I think will forever be one of my favorite pieces on these boards. I'm thrilled that you had it archived!

The way the inevitable and bitter truth sneaks up on you, much like Mara herself, is nothing short of Art.

Beautifully and wonderfully rendered, divapilot!

Author: Shuro
Date posted: 3/31/2007 4:39:53 PM
Shuro's Comments:

wow.....dang......i dont know what to say.....i dont think i caught on till the last one!

Author: Jade Pilot
Date posted: 4/2/2007 6:21:51 PM
Jade Pilot's Comments:

This is brilliant! Thank you so much for writing this unique and powerful story.

Author: marajader2d2
Date posted: 4/2/2007 10:38:43 PM
marajader2d2's Comments:

the BEST fan fic ive EVER read.... im actually in tears!!!!!!

Author: shephardbk
Date posted: 4/11/2007 1:25:32 PM
shephardbk's Comments:

this story is amazing i was taken aback. the author is quite talented and the plot exposition was dramatic and smooth. i think this is great.

Author: Beta_Commando  (signed)
Date posted: 4/13/2007 12:06:24 PM
Beta_Commando's Comments:

Wow... Absolutely wow. Beautiful, and I'm usually taken to that genre of writing. Excellent. Wow... I'm just speechless.

Author: Jedi Trace  (signed)
Date posted: 4/18/2007 10:12:00 PM
Jedi Trace's Comments:

This vig is one of my all-time favorites, diva, and I'm so proud and excited to see it here!

You are amazing, my friend! :)

Author: furrylittlebantha
Date posted: 5/7/2007 2:11:31 PM
furrylittlebantha's Comments:

What can I really say about a piece like this? Nothing that will tell how passionately I admire the simple grandeur of your prose. Nothing that will convey how deeply it touches me. Nothing I say can really express that peculiar mix of emotional pain and artistic joy I get every time--every single time I read Disengage.

All I can say, then, is thank you!

Author: farmgirl117
Date posted: 8/7/2007 11:01:34 AM
farmgirl117's Comments:

I LOVED it! It was first I couldn't figure out why she was there but wasn't- but when it talked about Qui-gon I really understood it....I almost cried!

Author: darthmatrix101
Date posted: 10/10/2008 11:34:15 PM
darthmatrix101's Comments:

she DIED! i just got that @ the end
beautiful peice!

Author: Linz
Date posted: 5/23/2009 6:32:59 PM
Linz's Comments:

This is wonderful.
It's so heartwarming when you realize what's going on... no, actually it's heartwarming throughout, even when you think she's divorcing him (although, to be honest, I was like "why the @&*# she keep saying 'I'm leavin' for if she keep showing up at his place! leave then!").

Great stuff-- I'm glad I go through the archives!

Author: JediLuminaraUnduli
Date posted: 8/23/2009 5:27:00 AM
JediLuminaraUnduli's Comments:

Beautiful.. I'm speechless.

I didn't catch on that Mara was dead until the very last part. I thought her actions were a bit peculiar at first, but knowing Luke and Mara, nothing was really normal.

When I finally finished reading, the shock just slammed into me - I went back and reread it, and suddenly it made perfect sense.

Wonderful, excellent job here. *applaud*

:'( Left me in tears.

Author: jfreake2004  (signed)
Date posted: 3/21/2011 2:53:46 PM
jfreake2004's Comments:

Wonderfully written, Diva! I had a feeling about Mara when I got about to the middle with the way she kept on popping in and out, but I didn't really know until they were watching Ben chase the insect. Then, I re-read it and cried.

Bravo! More please!

Author: TheLiberator
Date posted: 6/19/2012 8:19:31 PM
TheLiberator's Comments:

Beautiful. Just beautiful. I only want to know: is this post-LotF: Sacrifice or before in a weird way?

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