Author: princess-sari  (signed)
Date posted: 8/28/2001 8:17:55 AM
princess-sari's Comments:

Yay!! It's finally up here! This has really made my day, especially since I get to be the first to comment. :)
You already know how much I love this story, Jairen, but I'll say it again: I love this story!!! I enjoy it more each time I read it; there's always something new to capture my attention and imagination.
It's just wonderful!!

Author: Saria
Date posted: 8/28/2001 4:17:51 PM
Saria's Comments:

this was a great story! i LOVED all the subtle implacations, the ties into several different books and video games, and how it all made perfect sense! it was AWESOME!

Author: Jeff 42  (signed)
Date posted: 8/30/2001 5:52:00 PM
Jeff 42's Comments:

An excellent concept, and a wonderful story. There were several moments that gave me chills. The writing itself was good overall, but could have used some improvement, especially in the earlier parts of the story. I think more proofreading would have helped. Still, you clearly have a lot of talent, and this was a great read.

Author: sandy11188
Date posted: 9/20/2001 12:14:15 AM
sandy11188's Comments:

Nice ties to the EU. Lot's of good plot ties and cameos. Good Job.

Author: Nate
Date posted: 11/11/2001 5:04:48 PM
Nate's Comments:

An incredibly well-done story with a well thought out plot. Very gripping. Chilling, yet it keeps your attention. This one needs to be continued!

Author: Nightmare_anarchy
Date posted: 5/31/2002 7:37:25 AM
Nightmare_anarchy's Comments:

Great..few to be said, its just a masterpiece in its kind, however i regret the last phrase of the Novel could have been more lucrative..i give it a 9

Author: Dan-Candor
Date posted: 6/19/2005 9:51:47 PM
Dan-Candor's Comments:

A very good story. Very well written.

Author: Blackwolf Morrow
Date posted: 7/11/2005 4:10:21 PM
Blackwolf Morrow's Comments:

Great story except for one thing: there's no way some Imperial Commander could take a teenage Jedi Padawan; she would have seen his attack coming and been ready.