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Author: Scottykarrde
Date posted: 6/26/2007 12:48:44 AM
Scottykarrde's Comments:

Awwwww! perfect! Just perfect! And now I'm all twisted up because there - er, spoiler alert so I'm shutting up now...

except to say that this was SO SWEET and lovely. Always know your stuff will be great, GabriJade, but this is really delicious - I tell you I taste salt on my tongue.
Having Luke afraid - er, not, just cautious, of course, ofcourse :-) of the water...brilliant! And Jaina's reaction! Oh!
I miss the kids being young. I miss it all.
Han's smugness! Ooooh. perfect!

Author: Lukesexyass  (signed)
Date posted: 6/26/2007 6:07:23 AM
Lukesexyass's Comments:

Oh I LOVE it! It was brilliant, I've always wanted to know what happened there! You've made my day! It was sooo sweet and romantic!I thought it was brilliant! Well done!

Author: Diane Kovalcin  (signed)
Date posted: 7/1/2007 6:13:37 PM
Diane Kovalcin's Comments:

This was adorable. I love that they told Jaina first.

Author: Madman007
Date posted: 9/3/2007 4:13:59 PM
Madman007's Comments:

Finally, a story in detail on Luke and Mara that shows their lighter side. Loved the bit where she begs him to get in the water with his shoes off. And Jaina is written well as a feisty teen. We need more lighter moments like this in Star Wars writing. Good job.

Author: Anna_Skywalker
Date posted: 11/17/2007 9:01:04 PM
Anna_Skywalker's Comments:

This should become a book.

Author: Atarumaster88  (signed)
Date posted: 2/9/2009 10:40:29 PM
Atarumaster88's Comments:

Wow, the other readers weren't kidding when they say you know how to write L/M. Pleasure to read, nice sweet fic. Cover fit the story well, though I thought the title was off. Thought Jaina's enthusiasm was well captured and Luke and Mara were spot on.

Author: Ziten
Date posted: 4/8/2015 9:58:01 AM
Ziten's Comments:

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