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Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 4/21/2008 9:14:26 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

I liked the surreal but brutal quality of this. Especially the murder of the one with no name. This seemed like a very real possibility and is one of the better interpretations of that scene that I have ever seen. Well done.

Author: thel ost force user
Date posted: 4/22/2008 9:05:30 AM
thel ost force user's Comments:

i really like it. it was so sad and the younglins are so weakness i realy felt sad

Author: Master Senya Analandi  (signed)
Date posted: 4/22/2008 3:01:38 PM
Master Senya Analandi's Comments:

hi! It's me! I'm so glad that this incredible piece got on the Archives! I remember the time you asked me to edit it and I couldn't believe how wonderful you are! Great job and congradulations!

Author: Aethersprite_2534  (signed)
Date posted: 4/23/2008 10:32:21 PM
Aethersprite_2534's Comments:

Wow...that was amazing! Those three words were startling, in a way...Anakin is dead. I didn't see that coming! Great job!

Author: miralys
Date posted: 4/24/2008 6:01:19 PM
miralys's Comments:

Wonderful! I am so happy to see this up. It is just as chilling as I remember it. The cover art matches the story perfectly.

Author: Lukehasasexyass
Date posted: 4/28/2008 11:05:22 AM
Lukehasasexyass's Comments:

Awwww, I am soooo glad it is finally up, such a great fic. Just as touching as the first time I read it, it will never die in mu heart.

Author: PimpJedi  (signed)
Date posted: 4/28/2008 12:56:12 PM
PimpJedi's Comments:

Woah, way cool dramatic and just my type of story.

Author: Arwen Skywalker
Date posted: 4/28/2008 6:26:28 PM
Arwen Skywalker's Comments:

So so, sad! But a wonderful ROTS fic, I'm going to fave this. Amazing writing, with a perfect ending. Great job. *sniff*

Author: Star Traveler  (signed)
Date posted: 4/29/2008 1:49:32 PM
Star Traveler's Comments:

I'm more amazed that someone was willing to write out such a poignant scene. Well done!

Author: Nemesis  (signed)
Date posted: 5/2/2008 3:44:21 PM
Nemesis's Comments:

A superb idea brilliantly executed.

I'm not going to forget this one for quite a while . . .

Author: Brightbear
Date posted: 5/19/2008 6:23:10 AM
Brightbear's Comments:

Oh, this was touching. Not just angst from the kids but the individuality of each child and Anakin's understanding and justification for his actions.

Very good.

Author: jarogue
Date posted: 8/27/2008 5:40:34 PM
jarogue's Comments:

Whoa that was cool how you like used the symbolicness of him to symbloize the old Anakin was dead. It's cool.

Author: darthmatrix101
Date posted: 10/10/2008 11:24:22 PM
darthmatrix101's Comments:

absolutely BRILLIANT!

Author: Ki-Aaron-Mundi  (signed)
Date posted: 4/18/2009 11:12:17 PM
Ki-Aaron-Mundi's Comments:

Wow, that was chilling. An uncomfortable read... and I mean that in the best possible way. Very well written. This scene is obviously a tough subject to take on, and you've written in a way that gives it real meaning.

Author: Bluejedi
Date posted: 6/25/2009 8:40:24 PM
Bluejedi's Comments:

Oh my goodness...that was so, so sad!!! Poor kids!!!Interesting story, though, w/ Anakin and the mirror...

Author: Lady_Ivra  (signed)
Date posted: 10/4/2009 8:05:27 PM
Lady_Ivra's Comments:

I loved the angst side of this story and the bitter truth of what Anakin did. Thank you!

Author: Lykaon Fang
Date posted: 8/3/2012 9:41:15 PM
Lykaon Fang's Comments:

Very good story. i loved it, but did anyone else notes that the name Mikal was used in the first old republic video game? just sayin.

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