Date posted: 1/1/2008 1:25:17 AM
Thanks to Amanda, markcrazysith, and jmann06405 for beta-reading, as well as the reviewers and editors for helping tighten things up at the end. Special thanks also go to rhonderoo for her usual excellence in cover art!
Author: Scholar Gordon
Date posted: 1/7/2008 1:44:49 PM
Scholar Gordon's Comments:
This was a really imaginative and well-done story. I liked the added dimension it gave to the inner workings of a Sith. Watch those dangling participles! (His fingers were screaming like a Bantha on fire?) :-)
Best of luck - looking forward to reading more.
Author: Chip Currin
Date posted: 1/9/2008 3:44:19 PM
Chip Currin's Comments:
This was AWESOME! The character of Darth Zeraii is one of the best Fan Fiction creations ever!
Author: Kalak Ragnose
Date posted: 1/16/2008 1:14:41 PM
Kalak Ragnose's Comments:
That was fantastically marvelous. You really must write another one of these, perhaps delving into zeraii getting an apprentice?
Your Fan Kalak Ragnose of the Dark Jedi Brotherhood
Date posted: 1/18/2008 9:05:58 PM
you have to write more, i loved both stories so far so even if (for some silly reason)you're maybe thinking its not worth writing a third as no one will appreciate it, well thats simply not true. more, more, more, more.
Date posted: 1/26/2008 6:29:18 AM
I often find fan fiction stilted and poorly written. This story reads (flows) well - it feels like Star Wars. A well written sith story...keep writing!
Date posted: 1/29/2008 4:05:14 PM
I loved your first story of the Sith Shadow, this only improves upon it!
Keep up the great work.
Date posted: 2/17/2008 5:32:06 PM
you mus make more!!!Please Please Please!!!!!!
Date posted: 4/18/2008 9:39:28 PM
Gotta say, as a writer unaffiliated with the star wars stuff, you've inspired me. THIS has risen above the typical fandom nature of... well, anything I've read before. Amazing work, I'd love to read more of it!
Author: Darth Maverick
Date posted: 5/2/2008 6:31:40 AM
Darth Maverick's Comments:
I just joined and read your stories...they are AWESOME!! Hopefully, when I start writing mine they will be good as yours. I liked your character Darth Zeraii very much, can't wait to read more of them
Date posted: 5/29/2008 1:54:26 PM
Just wanted to say that I love these stories and I hope you will write and post more of them.
Date posted: 4/16/2010 4:23:56 PM
I'm fairly new to reading and writing Fanfic, but I totally loved this. Makes me wonder what'd happen if Darth Zeraii took on an apprentice. This is my 4th story to read, so I'm going to check out all your other stories tied to Darth Zeraii... Again, job well done. ;)
Date posted: 6/27/2010 6:36:42 PM
Wow, great ending!
I've got to say, you have to be one of the best fanfic writers (and maybe even writers!) that I've read when it comes to keeping the story moving.
I also really like the way you tweak the Star Wars mythos--with the Shadow Sith in the last story, and now with the Ar'krai, another great invention.
However, I do feel that there is one significant flaw in this story: to defeat his opponent, Zeraii must learn the [i]exact same lesson[/i] he had to learn to defeat the Sith apprentice in the last story (even if he goes on to learn a new lesson after his victory). Rather than grow as a character, he retreads old ground.
But overall, very well written and enjoyable! Keep up the good work!
Date posted: 11/14/2010 9:05:26 AM
Great writing, it left me craving for more.
Author: Lord Exitium
Date posted: 4/27/2011 8:29:55 AM
Lord Exitium's Comments:
good story, just one thing Ar'Krai is a bothan genocidal war thing that they declare against an enemy such as the Vong