Author: Jade_PIlot
Date posted: 3/24/2008 8:01:09 PM
Jade_PIlot's Comments:

I love this story so much. I always like works that weave OC characters into the canon characters story line.

You've shown us Mara as a wise and respected Jedi master like no one else has.

Bravo!

JP

Author: Jedi Trace  (signed)
Date posted: 3/24/2008 8:43:14 PM
Jedi Trace's Comments:

This is a beautiful story, ginchy! Your unique and thought-provoking take on an elderly Mara coupled with a fun and feisty OC add up to a tale that I know I'll want to read again and again. :)

~Trace

Author: ratna
Date posted: 3/30/2008 3:35:36 PM
ratna's Comments:

Wow, that packed quite an emotional punch at the end!

The veil and the rip in time -- beautiful metaphors that worked perfectly together.

Lovely story.

Author: divapilot
Date posted: 4/1/2008 3:34:50 PM
divapilot's Comments:

Wonderful story! One of my favorites. What a pleasure to see it archived. I love this look at Mara as a wise teacher, still with a lot to offer. Beautifully written.

Author: Perigrine  (signed)
Date posted: 4/17/2008 10:33:19 AM
Perigrine's Comments:

This is a VERY nicely put together story! You captured the spirit of Mara Jade very well and turned it into a very heartwarming and compelling tale!