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Author: Toni  (signed)
Date posted: 3/24/2008 6:09:36 PM
Toni's Comments:

As one of the reviewers, so glad to see this up. What an in-character look at what could have happened.

Author: Nemesis  (signed)
Date posted: 3/25/2008 3:48:11 PM
Nemesis's Comments:

I just want to say a huge thank you to VaderLVR, to dianethx, and to NYCitygurl, all of whom beta'd this fic at one time or another. I owe you, guys ::hugs::

Toni - glad you enjoyed it! It's a rare honour to have the reviewers commenting on the actual posted story, so many, many thanks :D

Author: ratna
Date posted: 3/30/2008 3:44:52 PM
ratna's Comments:

Beautifully written little vig. Totally chilling ending! Entirely plausible AU path to the Fall. (No doubt the capture and Force-deprived imprisonment were engineered by Palpatine.)


Author: Darth KenObi-Wan  (signed)
Date posted: 4/7/2008 5:30:14 AM
Darth KenObi-Wan's Comments:

I like, very much!

Author: Helen_Taft
Date posted: 5/5/2008 4:08:20 PM
Helen_Taft's Comments:

This fic was great! Angsty, creepy and dark and so well written. Also very thought-provoking. Exellent. Thanks for sharing!

Author: Hangin with the Jedi
Date posted: 5/9/2008 11:44:20 AM
Hangin with the Jedi's Comments:

Hey Nemesis, nice job with this. Only one disappointment...I wanted more!!! Nice work.

I've been enjoying the fan fic for quite some time now. It's great that it is still going with nice pieces like this. Maybe I'll submit something someday.

Author: jarogue
Date posted: 8/21/2008 8:43:43 PM
jarogue's Comments:

hey man. Coooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You really made me feel sorry for anakin. Poor thing.
You could, however, have put more effort into the ending, which is too abrupt. The begginning and ending are important elements of a story.
Way to pull my heartstrings man. Come over to my place sometime. You can show the rest of your stories to me and my roomate, the master chief.
Great story!!
Ps. the master chief says hi.

Author: Only_Noone  (signed)
Date posted: 7/14/2009 6:55:03 PM
Only_Noone's Comments:

Aaaaaaaaaaah! This FREAKED me out! Incredibly well written, and this is a great way to show how Anakin could have been able to kill Padme, but it was still CREEPY.

"When it came time that it was nessisary for her to die, that was grey too." ... soooo creepy.

I just have to say, kudos to you.

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