Author: Nemesis  (signed)
Date posted: 4/21/2008 6:19:19 PM
Nemesis's Comments:

First things first: thank you SO MUCH to VaderLVR, Diane, and NYCitygurl, all of whom beta'd this fic at least once at some point. Muchas gracias, guys!

Author: ratna
Date posted: 4/21/2008 8:47:17 PM
ratna's Comments:

Holy cow this is good!! One of the best I've read here. Bravo!

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 4/21/2008 9:15:30 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

Great parallelism between the two and a good representation of the conflict.

Author: Rogue3
Date posted: 4/22/2008 5:48:27 AM
Rogue3's Comments:

Adds a whole new meaning to "He betrayed and murdered your father". WOW.

Author: Perigrine  (signed)
Date posted: 4/22/2008 11:32:55 AM
Perigrine's Comments:

Good story! Keeps to Palpatine's character very well with the Anakin clone. The clone Anakin's disgust of what Vader has done is very well handled. I enjoyed it!

Author: Aethersprite_2534  (signed)
Date posted: 4/23/2008 10:13:35 PM
Aethersprite_2534's Comments:

Wow. Very haunting and very enjoyable :D Great job!
MTFBWY

Author: Master Senya Analandi  (signed)
Date posted: 4/26/2008 3:18:19 PM
Master Senya Analandi's Comments:

creepy! But it's a good creepy! Great job.

Author: Star Traveler  (signed)
Date posted: 4/29/2008 1:42:28 PM
Star Traveler's Comments:

Terrifying. Mesmerizing. Perfect.

This second Anakin reminded me of that "spark" Vader had even up to the events of ROTJ. Just can't seem to keep that little voice quiet...

Author: Trevor/ rangerkom
Date posted: 4/30/2008 11:26:11 AM
Trevor/ rangerkom's Comments:

It's almost a sequel to the story(written around the same time) "does not want to die"

Author: Darth Maverick  (signed)
Date posted: 5/2/2008 10:35:30 AM
Darth Maverick's Comments:

I agree with rangerkom...it is almost a sequel to "Does Not Want To Die".
This story is awesome...makes you think about Vader's inner thoughts.

Author: darthmatrix101
Date posted: 10/19/2008 11:19:03 PM
darthmatrix101's Comments:

"let it be his tomb.'
luv that line!!
great job

Author: Reno
Date posted: 9/3/2011 7:57:32 PM
Reno's Comments:

This ariltce achieved exactly what I wanted it to achieve.