Date posted: 4/21/2008 6:19:19 PM
First things first: thank you SO MUCH to VaderLVR, Diane, and NYCitygurl, all of whom beta'd this fic at least once at some point. Muchas gracias, guys!
Date posted: 4/21/2008 8:47:17 PM
Holy cow this is good!! One of the best I've read here. Bravo!
Date posted: 4/21/2008 9:15:30 PM
Great parallelism between the two and a good representation of the conflict.
Date posted: 4/22/2008 5:48:27 AM
Adds a whole new meaning to "He betrayed and murdered your father". WOW.
Date posted: 4/22/2008 11:32:55 AM
Good story! Keeps to Palpatine's character very well with the Anakin clone. The clone Anakin's disgust of what Vader has done is very well handled. I enjoyed it!
Date posted: 4/23/2008 10:13:35 PM
Wow. Very haunting and very enjoyable :D Great job!
Author: Master Senya Analandi
Date posted: 4/26/2008 3:18:19 PM
Master Senya Analandi's Comments:
creepy! But it's a good creepy! Great job.
Author: Star Traveler
Date posted: 4/29/2008 1:42:28 PM
Star Traveler's Comments:
Terrifying. Mesmerizing. Perfect.
This second Anakin reminded me of that "spark" Vader had even up to the events of ROTJ. Just can't seem to keep that little voice quiet...
Author: Trevor/ rangerkom
Date posted: 4/30/2008 11:26:11 AM
Trevor/ rangerkom's Comments:
It's almost a sequel to the story(written around the same time) "does not want to die"
Author: Darth Maverick
Date posted: 5/2/2008 10:35:30 AM
Darth Maverick's Comments:
I agree with rangerkom...it is almost a sequel to "Does Not Want To Die".
This story is awesome...makes you think about Vader's inner thoughts.
Date posted: 10/19/2008 11:19:03 PM
"let it be his tomb.'
luv that line!!
Date posted: 9/3/2011 7:57:32 PM
This ariltce achieved exactly what I wanted it to achieve.