Date posted: 7/1/2008 4:15:47 PM
Oh, bravo! I am so glad to see this up here. You really did a fantastic job capturing Han's character.
Date posted: 7/2/2008 8:25:19 AM
Excellent story! I'm a sucker for these AU stories where Vader has a more clear shot at redemption than the movies. Any chance you'll be continuing it?
Author: Phantom Jedi
Date posted: 7/3/2008 4:54:31 PM
Phantom Jedi's Comments:
Wahoo! I'm glad to see your story made it into this archive. It definitely deserves it.
Way to go!
Date posted: 7/4/2008 8:01:54 AM
You captured han and vader very well, Luke was close but I think he swore too much not really in charachter but pretty close. Really good descriptions and i thought the medical details (like the marrow transplant) were excellent.
Date posted: 7/7/2008 5:48:29 PM
First, let me say that this is a wonderfully written fanfiction. It was so well written, that I was compelled to read the entire thing in one sitting.
I love the story-- it's different, fresh and new. Your descriptions and characterizations were right on-- especially Han. I can practically hear him saying everything you had him saying in the fic.
I also really loved the way you used AgraCorps. Honestly, I had no idea where anything was going until I came right up on it. I'm usually pretty good at anticipating a story, so this was a nice change. Everything was very logical, there were no plot holes... all in all, very, very nice.
Please tell me there will be a sequel!
Date posted: 7/14/2008 2:43:19 PM
Very nice! I liked the echoes of Empire and Jedi interwoven in the narrative... also the mystery. Sounds like the could be room for a sequel... yes? :)
Date posted: 7/20/2008 1:12:25 AM
Yes! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
This is so well written, and so engrossing from start to finish. Nice title, too, btw. Please say there is more!
Date posted: 8/6/2008 8:28:57 PM
OMG!!! I love it! i was actually laughing out loud at some points! i loved the Han/Vader reletionship.
Date posted: 9/14/2008 12:36:18 AM
I loved this - not that I read that much Star Wars fanfic, but it certainly was one of the best fics in that fandom I've ever seen.
The plot is extremely clever, and I think what I adored most was the interaction between Vader and Han - the growing sort of grudging respect borne out at the end. And that Han 'figured out' the Skywalker thing was brilliant.
Characterisation was great too. Again, Han and Vader were extremely in character, and Luke too, the poor creature.
Loved it to bits!
Date posted: 7/14/2009 6:19:59 PM
Woah. That was AMAZING. You captured Han perfectly, and not only that, but most of the time, I couldn't tell whether I was rooting for Han or Vader. Simply AMAZING.
And like most other commentators, I would love for you to make a sequel! This was SO COOL!
Date posted: 10/6/2010 8:51:39 AM
All I can say is, WOW!!!
You captured the character's personalities perfectly, and I loved how Vader seemed to soften throughout the story, but still remained dangerous to everyone else. You made him more ... human.
The Force is giving me reason to believe that there is a sequel in the future, he he!
Awesome job! This is one of the best AU fics that I've read!