Date posted: 7/28/2008 1:41:49 PM
This is REALLY good! I want to read more by this author. Keep it coming!
Author: Rahalin Toral
Date posted: 7/30/2008 12:23:29 PM
Rahalin Toral's Comments:
Interesting Kotor story, but shouldn't this be classified under an alternative universe title as Lucas Arts has decisively classified Revan has been branded as male?
Otherwise, as an explanation as to why Rand was there on the station, this is a good first try.
Author: Aegis Nyte
Date posted: 8/14/2008 6:37:55 PM
Aegis Nyte's Comments:
A good story, just a little confused with the flashbacks. For some reason I got confused about which Jedi you were talking about and I couldn't figure out if Atton was a former Jedi or soldier, but I eventually deduced he was a soldier. So just a little constructive criticism, otherwise good story!
Author: General San_3
Date posted: 8/14/2008 7:34:57 PM
General San_3's Comments:
Thanks so much, you guys! Constructive criticism is actually the main reason I submitted to this site, and it's really helpful.
Date posted: 8/16/2008 6:41:06 PM
I really enjoyed this. I became a little lost in the names, I'll be honest, but when it all came together with Rand meeting Revan, I quite enjoyed it.
The ending, imaging Rand meeting her again, was well done. I'd love to read more!
Date posted: 8/17/2008 1:42:06 PM
You have a great way with words, and I always loved the dynamic between Atton and the last Jedi when played as a female. I liked the open ending, too. Really, really good.
Date posted: 1/14/2009 12:28:06 AM
Heartwarming without straying into sentimentality. I knew much of the back story from playing the game, but it was presented in an engaging and entertaining way. Excellent work!
PS: I loved the part about his "one conversation" with Symare ;)
Date posted: 4/3/2009 10:12:23 PM
great story, I really liked how you explained Atton getting himself locked up, and how he knew the exile
"how come everywhere we go I end up in a force cage?"
Date posted: 4/15/2010 4:10:10 PM
Atton is one of my favorite KOTOR characters and I think you did a wonderful job with this.