Author: Fox  (signed)
Date posted: 8/3/2009 2:12:24 PM
Fox's Comments:

The brilliant capture of the characters emotions was perhaps the strongest enjoyment of the story. I found it very entertaining and also informative during the gap of time between Episode III and IV.

A touching tale. I look forward to seeing future stories written by your exquisite passion you give the characters.

Thank you for the delightful addition to a time we know little about.

Author: Crowbar_420
Date posted: 10/29/2009 3:57:41 PM
Crowbar_420's Comments:

Good story, excellent idea on the plot. Some of the sentence structures could be re-done, however. Some of it seems clumsy. Also, one paragraph ends with Obi-Wan pledging to himself to keep her safe from Tusken Raiders, but when she leaves he continues his meditation instead of following her. Thanks for the story, and again, great plot idea. I can't wait as the canon sources start to fill in the Imperial Era.