Author: Toni
Date posted: 9/1/2009 1:17:30 PM
Toni's Comments:

What a nice look at somwthing that wasn't covered well in AOTC.

Author: Donna
Date posted: 9/2/2009 1:31:36 AM
Donna's Comments:

I like stories of this kind. You deal with a topic that I've thought about a lot myself. How long can one keep such a secret in the world of Jedi and politics? After all Obi Wan would have sensed Anakin's thoughts. I enjoyed this story.

Author: Belle Bayard  (signed)
Date posted: 9/4/2009 12:23:07 PM
Belle Bayard's Comments:

Beautifully done with foreshadowing of the trials they will go through. Nicely done missing scene.

Author: VaderLVR64
Date posted: 10/30/2009 3:08:41 PM
VaderLVR64's Comments:

You know I think this piece is stunning. Absolute perfection, as your work always is. This makes me feel both happy and sad for them. Glad that they got their happiness, brief though it was, and so sad that it could not last. You captured the full tangled complexity of their relationship flawlessly here.