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Author: Nathalie
Date posted: 10/8/2001 11:41:42 AM
Nathalie's Comments:

I had already read this story before and from the first chapter on I knew it would be one of my favorite fics. It's incredibly dark, pure Obi-torture (why???!!!! *cries*) but fascinating. There is great insight, we discover Obi-Wan's thoughts and realise that even if he is a Jedi, he's still human. A great story, and all I can say is "bravo, incroyable"!

Author: Birdie~the Jedi Angel
Date posted: 10/8/2001 6:25:57 PM
Birdie~the Jedi Angel's Comments:

This story is the only multi-parter that I've found to be absolutely impossible to stop reading; I read it straight through in one sitting. *Read this story.* The prose is almost like liquid poetry. As I told Avalon before, this story captures the essence of pure "Obi-thought" and is an excellent Obi UST piece.

Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 10/8/2001 7:36:35 PM
Quiller's Comments:

One of the two Avalon stories that got me hooked on fan fiction. This story should be listed under the definition of 'Obi-torture'. A must-read for fans of that genre.

Author: LittleJedi
Date posted: 10/9/2001 12:03:40 AM
LittleJedi's Comments:

I read this story before too, at Lucy's Obi-Wan or somewhere, and i enjoyed it there too. Very well written, great story - i love stories where Obi's a hero! :D Heh heh.

-Little Jedi-

Author: Saria
Date posted: 10/9/2001 3:41:20 PM
Saria's Comments:

it was perfect.

from his thoughts to the evilness of the aliens to the whatever her name was person who was torn between doing something she knew was wrong and saving her people.

one of the best ever.

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 10/22/2001 2:59:26 AM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

For a while there, I thought the unknown aliens were the Yuuzhan Vong. But nevertheless, a poignant, well-conceived story that dealt with the temptation of the Dark Side very well.

Author: shan
Date posted: 10/24/2001 7:09:33 PM
shan's Comments:

I have also read this story before. This was the first star wars fan fic that i had ever read. I could not stop reading once i started. I think i was up until 2 a.m. finishing it. I absolutely love any obi-wan fics, and this being the first one I read made any others kind of pale by comparison. I've read many fics since this one, and the amount of obi-torture in this fic is just right for my liking.

Author: Yeastman
Date posted: 10/28/2001 10:59:48 PM
Yeastman's Comments:

What can I say.. "WOW"... great, great story. Once I started I couldnt tear myself away and never left the puter chair till I was done. Only problem is, now I want more! :-) Great stuff!

Author: SilverFirexz
Date posted: 10/31/2001 5:13:49 PM
SilverFirexz's Comments:

I have one word to say:


That was incredible! The author captured the human emotions was so real, so human...I've never read a story as awesome as this one! You know...Avalon should really think about publishing. This would be a hit.

Author: Knight_Obi  (signed)
Date posted: 11/21/2001 11:59:32 PM
Knight_Obi's Comments:

Avalon, you've done it once again. This is an excellent fic. THough I've read this somewhere before, reading it through the second time only makes it even better. Please continue to write more for only then will I quench my need for more of your fics.

Author: E-Jinn
Date posted: 11/23/2001 1:02:12 PM
E-Jinn's Comments:

I stumbled across this story while exploring this site and started to read this story. I'd like to say how much I enjoyed this story. It made me cry! It was very descriptive in relating the emotions that Obi-Wan was experiencing throughout the story. It was absoloutly wonderful at the end when Qui-Gon came to Obi-Wan's rescue. I just loved it, all the way through!

Author: Tielana Matrix
Date posted: 12/1/2001 7:53:59 PM
Tielana Matrix's Comments:

Awsome story! There is nothing I love more then pure Obi-wan torture(but don't get me wrong. I think Obi is a complete hottie and so is Ewan.)Qui-gon I know you really weren't in this fic but I still think you are dumb!

Author: Karoline
Date posted: 12/29/2001 2:29:06 PM
Karoline's Comments:

Now this was a good story. I loved the way you told it, the way you potraited each person was very good, and well written in general. Very nice indeed!

Author: Arwen
Date posted: 3/19/2002 4:12:48 PM
Arwen's Comments:

That was sooo cool! Poor Obi-Wan! But it was a very good story, and I couldn't stop reading! I think I was up until midnight with my mom yelling for me to go to bed, and me yelling back "ten more minutes..." Very good!

Author: Argent Jedi  (signed)
Date posted: 6/8/2002 3:51:12 PM
Argent Jedi's Comments:

I don't know if any comment I write can give this fic justice...we need more authors who can write like this!

Author: Obi&Yoda Ruels!!!
Date posted: 7/2/2002 7:54:49 PM
Obi&Yoda Ruels!!!'s Comments:

WWWWWOOOOWWW!!!! That was SO COOOOL!! I stayed up all night to read it!! HEY EVERYONE: READ THAT STORY! {specialy for all the obi wan fans like me!!}

Author: solojones
Date posted: 11/27/2003 10:17:27 AM
solojones's Comments:

Great job portraying the inner struggle Obi-Wan goes through in this story. There were a few things that I didn't think would really be physically possible (sumersaulting) without the Force, especially in that condition, but hey, creative license. Very well done, kept me reading intently.

Author: firewingz  (signed)
Date posted: 8/21/2004 1:20:45 AM
firewingz's Comments:

What an awesome story. You were able to develope all of the characters very well. Each of the two captures were described beautifully. I felt like I understood those characters' motives, intentions and personal conflict. And then Obi-Wan's reactions, self-blame, and personality were portrayed very well. Qui-Gon's last minute arrival topped everything off, ending this beautifully. This is a very well written piece. Will there be a sequel?

Author: SabeWan
Date posted: 12/10/2004 3:09:47 PM
SabeWan's Comments:

Wow, this has to be one of the best fan fictions I have ever read! I loved the way you portrayed Obi-wan's feelings. Great job!

Author: Ani-maniac  (signed)
Date posted: 2/24/2005 5:36:26 PM
Ani-maniac's Comments:

Wow. That was...just.. INCREDIBLE!!!!! I loved it!!!! It really explored Obi-Wan's mind, and his limits. I also think that it hinted at how powerful Obi-Wan really is. I also loved the way you showed how much Qui-Gon cares for Obi-Wan. I think I may be turning to the Dark Side because I enjoyed reading the torture. It was well written and gave you a sense of the pain Obi-Wan felt, and showed he he overcame his limits. It is one of the best fan fictions I have read! I just hope you will continue with it. Who are the creatures? Are they conected with the Sith? I would love to know. Please write more! But enven if you don't, it was an awesome story!!!

Author: Katieelessar
Date posted: 7/19/2005 12:35:11 PM
Katieelessar's Comments:

Wow, this story is absoutely incredible. I'm appalled with myself for not finding it sooner! You captured everything: the bitterness, torture, darkness, relief just everything so wonderfully! Bravo, bravo! I encourage, no demand that you continue writing because you have such a wonderful talent. Wonderful!
Kind Regards,

Author: obibird
Date posted: 8/5/2005 2:34:37 PM
obibird's Comments:

fantastic obi-wan story. it started a whole new search on the net for me

Author: Joon
Date posted: 11/28/2006 2:55:13 PM
Joon's Comments:

Stunningly lovely, well-written, interesting, and a "pade-turner."

What a wonderful story --- Obi-wan's emotions, his Padawan's strength, his stoic determination yet the doubt that could easily suggest itself to him, were all perfect for where his character was in age, maturity, and training. Also his bravery,and tenaciousness! Very well done!

I was so happy at the end, when Qui-Gon showed up, and the other Jedi!! Rest now, young Padawan, they'll make you better!

Author: Stacey
Date posted: 12/27/2006 10:27:58 AM
Stacey's Comments:

This is an amzing read, i really enjoyed it. I can really imagine this as a book on my shelf, and would love to have it there! More Obi-Wan fics please! <3

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