Author: Belle Bayard
Date posted: 11/21/2001 11:00:54 PM
Belle Bayard's Comments:
Very well written and compelling, even though I'm not normally a murder mystery fan. Believable characters, original and canon. Excellent first person story with enough suspense to go around and a very sympathetic main character. Of course, I always enjoy Qui-Gon stories, too. :)
Date posted: 11/22/2001 12:07:00 AM
Pretty good mystery, I'm a fan of mysteries and of course of SW. :)
I'm a little disconcerted about the fact that I'm a microbiologist, and I don't happen to have
any personal items at my desk, hmm, disturbing thoughts there...
Overall, not necessarily the strongest story here, but a good read none the less.
Date posted: 12/12/2001 6:55:29 PM
Ari is a very well-rounded main character. She made for a fun read. I also found your characterization of the young knight, Jinn, to be realistic and a nice counter-balance for Ari's attitudes.
Date posted: 12/13/2001 2:38:28 PM
Great story! I teared up in Chapter 8 - and though I had suspicions that Jace might be a former Jedi trainee, I didn't connect his ability to grow things with the Master-less Jedi apprentices becoming farmers. I can see the influence of the Jedi Apprentice books! ;-)
Overall, a great story - my interest was kept the whole way through - question about the the Sullust riots - is that "Canon", or did you make those up?
Date posted: 1/10/2002 7:58:04 AM
A very good read!! I'd like to see more from this unlikely pairing. If there is more please direct me.
Date posted: 3/23/2002 11:39:30 PM
ooh, good story. I'm hoping to see a sequal...
Date posted: 8/16/2002 7:54:29 AM
I love Good Qui-Gon stories and this was a good one.
Date posted: 11/29/2002 2:23:01 PM
I just read this great mystery. I loved the whole story starit from the begining. I especialy loved the compastion that was demistrated by Knight Jinn. I bileve that this is the way a real Jedi Knight would act. I would recomend this one to all of my freinds.
Date posted: 4/29/2004 10:36:49 AM
Very good murder mystery. :) Great work!
Author: Naga Shadow
Date posted: 6/7/2006 5:24:03 PM
Naga Shadow's Comments:
This story combines two of my most favorite reading genres: mystery and sci-fi. It will always be saved in my favorites. I hope to see a sequel.
Date posted: 3/6/2007 12:33:59 AM
Good setup and resolution.