Date posted: 12/14/2001 3:48:20 PM
bravo! great work! i was captivated throughout the whole story! my only question is, if anakin has vision of both of his children in the future, then wouldnt he know he also has a daughter when he becomes vader? EXCELLENT read though, id give it a 12 if i could :)
Date posted: 12/16/2001 12:09:58 PM
Wow, I thought that this was excellent and I really like the way that you show glimpses of how Anakin's future does in fact unfold. I also much prefer how Qui Gonn does not die in your version. I very much hope that you produce many sequals to this.
Date posted: 12/17/2001 12:41:59 PM
Wonderful story ! It's really well written... that's impressive !
I especially liked the little stories about the other Padawans, the lessons, how is everyday life in the Jedi temple... etc.
I sure hope you plan to write another sequel !
Date posted: 12/17/2001 5:01:46 PM
this was great. there should be a whole set of sequels to these. it was just... awesome! another masterpiece that words cannot describe.
Date posted: 12/19/2001 7:04:31 PM
very good but I would like it to be longer
Date posted: 12/23/2001 10:26:52 PM
This story series has been absolutely excellent! It easily ranks up there with the published novels (except for the minor issue of not being canon, or consistent with the films.) In a perfect world, this alternate universe would be expanded on until an alternate version of the entire film and novel timeline has been created -- I'm intensely curious to see how the Star Wars universe would have unfolded had Anakin not gone over to the dark side.
I hope there are many more sequels to come!!
Date posted: 1/3/2002 2:21:02 PM
I simply LOVE this series. I am currently
working on a fanfic where Anakin does not turn
to the Dark Side. It's going to be hard to come
up to this level. Btw, where's your fanfic
Date posted: 1/9/2002 1:05:46 PM
Excellent story. At first I was a little dismayed with Qui-Gon in the story, but you have managed to successfully allow me to kill several hours of boredom while at work.
Author: Mcily Nochi
Date posted: 1/10/2002 2:53:32 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:
Yet another amazing fic! I'm so impressed. It took me a long time to read, with fiteen minutes here and there, but it was well worth it.
Seems to have been left wide open for a sequel, too . . . *hopeful look*
Author: Jedi Master Swelstad
Date posted: 1/16/2002 12:19:09 PM
Jedi Master Swelstad's Comments:
well written. a little disapointed by the ending, tho.
Date posted: 1/22/2002 8:01:21 PM
it is great pleaaaaaaaaaassse give us a sequel *gives a very hopeful look
Date posted: 1/22/2002 8:04:07 PM
you should write books
Date posted: 1/23/2002 10:24:44 AM
I loved this story and you should probably write a sequel *hopeful look* i am very intrested in knowing what will happen to Lavir and the Elites
Author: Valeda Kor
Date posted: 2/9/2002 7:11:10 PM
Valeda Kor's Comments:
An intriguing "what if" story. Julie knows I like these!
I'm surprised no one has mentioned the illustrations. They really do help bring the story to life.
I hope to see further adventures in this AU universe.
Date posted: 2/21/2002 9:30:45 AM
I worked last weekend for 12 hours Sat and Sun. I had gone to work planning on sleeping for maybe an hour or two, but when I started reading your first story, there was no chance of that. I especially liked the interludes from the Phantom Menace into the first story. Also, when Anakin told Obi and Qui that he killed the pirates, Seriously, my jaw dropped! There were several times through the 2 stories that I got goosebumps. Altogether, 2 very enjoyable stories, and I commend the author, and can't wait to read more from her.
Date posted: 6/14/2002 4:38:34 PM
I loved this story! I think I liked it better then Episode II. I hope there will be a sequel.
Author: thrawn's lackey
Date posted: 7/7/2002 3:06:59 AM
thrawn's lackey's Comments:
I am particularly intrigued with the different force abilities you describe in your works thus far. Anakin's glow is the most fascinating. I haven't read your latest installment yet, and I hope it goes into a little more insight. I think the only negative comment I have is the similarity of Anakin to another character that advances in his school, surpassing the expectations of teachers and fellow students: one Ender Wiggin. Otherwise, an enjoyable read!!
Date posted: 7/8/2002 3:34:11 AM
This is my favorite series. The pacing is just right, the AU is exciting, and the name game is the coolest. I would rather read these stories than most official books; they are more enlightening and more fun. The best of fanfic. Hope for more sequels in the same style. Thanks!
Date posted: 7/30/2002 2:26:30 PM
I really enjoyed the art work although I was disapointed that you concetrated mostly on humans. I also think it would be wise to consider revising to reflect the things we now know from Ep II such as Qui-Gonn formely being an apprentice to Count Dooku and the fact that Jedi are not allowed to love. You have potentila to become a really good writer.
Date posted: 12/10/2002 2:20:03 PM
Wow! You did great on all of the character's parts. Keep it up. May the Force be with you.
Date posted: 1/1/2003 4:35:01 AM
Great sequel to your first piece. Cant wait to read the third one. That is if there will be one but it cant just end there. Great job!
Date posted: 1/11/2003 11:49:39 AM
you know my deal so i wont write it again...anyway-JUST AS GOOD AS THE FIRST ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date posted: 3/22/2004 2:59:32 AM
Very Good. It achieves the meaning of"Star Wars" in every sense of the term. One question still remains, will their be a fourth? I very much hope so. Along with the rest of the people who read this story.
Date posted: 3/26/2005 5:39:14 PM
once again, a wonderful story, i do believe my favorite part was the two female padawan twist. very good, very good.
Date posted: 5/28/2005 1:29:14 PM
PLEASE write a sequel... it's a fantastic univers and a really good story!
Author: SugarBant Jinn
Date posted: 4/15/2007 11:13:56 PM
SugarBant Jinn's Comments:
totally awesome!! this trilogy is in my top 5 fave. AU!! wonderful characterization and story line!
Date posted: 11/2/2007 9:25:39 PM
GREAT! I totally LOVED the scene where Ani levitates to the Music Spire. And the aftermath w/Obi and Qui-GOn... ;)