Date posted: 1/8/2002 9:09:11 AM
This is a great little story! Jane Jinn - always - does a wonderful job with her fan fic. But I dunno -- I think this planet sounds perfect for the Republic LOL.
The foreshadowing of what's to come in TPM always leaves a pang in my heart, but that doesn't stop me from enjoying what the author has done here. Great characterization, fluid pacing -- well done!
Author: Rori Firehawk
Date posted: 1/14/2002 7:32:10 AM
Rori Firehawk's Comments:
Heh, Otoria sounds a bit like the United States in some ways... :-P Great story!!!
Date posted: 1/15/2002 12:07:57 PM
Nice story, Jane. A smooth-flowing narrative that did a wonderful job focusing on the struggle between what we want and what we know to be right.
Date posted: 3/23/2002 7:52:41 AM
Good story! Enjoyed the humor and Obi's struggle between doing what he wanted to do and what the Force wanted him to do.
Date posted: 5/22/2002 5:55:15 AM
I really liked this story. Greatly written, very in-character. The story itself was entertaining, and I agree with Rori Firehawk that Otoria sounds like the US... lol. Good work!
Date posted: 7/7/2002 1:18:48 PM
awesome fanfic! your stories are so well written. and they always make me laugh! keep writing. it inspires the rest of us!
Date posted: 9/25/2002 10:54:57 AM
I give this a ten. It was very well written.
Date posted: 12/30/2002 7:07:37 PM
great story with Obi Wan's humor.
Author: obi-wan rox
Date posted: 4/11/2003 5:53:29 PM
obi-wan rox's Comments:
Dude this story is cool. ilove the way jane jinn wrote it nice job with obi-wan's humor at the end!
Author: Senator Leia
Date posted: 6/15/2003 8:45:19 PM
Senator Leia's Comments:
Two words great job! Keep up the good work.
Author: Darth Slaya
Date posted: 8/30/2005 3:46:46 PM
Darth Slaya's Comments:
I always love your stories Jane keep writing!!!
Date posted: 11/1/2005 10:06:46 PM
I liked this story, it was very cute and sweet. It has good morals even though it definately reminds me of how Qui Gon dies which is of course really sad...Qui Gon's the best! He and Obi Wan rock! It's even better because it has great characters. I liked the parts about the Tahl girl, but I always find it sad when force-sensitives aren't Jedis.