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Reader Comments on "The Other Half, Part 2: Dying Of The Light"

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Author: csenosiain
Date posted: 1/7/2002 5:34:59 PM
csenosiain's Comments:

Is this the second part of Burden of Choice??????????????????????????????????

Author: DarthIshtar
Date posted: 1/7/2002 7:59:52 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

Sorry, I probably didn't explain that. TOH is a trilogy, which started with "Burden of Choice." This is "Dying of the Light" and the last part is called "When Morning Comes." So, yes, it is connected to BOC, but it is not Burden of Choice, but The Other Half.

Author: audacius
Date posted: 1/10/2002 3:36:50 AM
audacius's Comments:

Wow, this was even greater than the first part. Can't wait to read the next one. Please don't keep us waiting to long!

Author: Mara*Jade*Skywalker
Date posted: 1/11/2002 3:26:47 PM
Mara*Jade*Skywalker's Comments:

Awesome I loved It can't wait for the next one. You are a wonderful writer Keep up the good work!:)

Author: fakehandluke
Date posted: 1/21/2002 8:21:23 PM
fakehandluke's Comments:

I was quite excited when I saw you had finished the second part I read it straight through till about one in the morning and was really engrossed. Can't wait for part three. Keep up the good work

Author: csenosiain
Date posted: 1/30/2002 6:54:27 AM
csenosiain's Comments:

This is the best fanfic i have read! it conbines suspense,romance,and the star wars universe I can't wait till the third part.
READ IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author: Skyla Doragono  (signed)
Date posted: 1/31/2002 8:47:11 AM
Skyla Doragono's Comments:

I really love this series, though it took me a moment to realize that "Burden of Choice" was the first part. I'm anxious to print/read the third part. :)

Author: Pitdroid
Date posted: 2/2/2002 11:10:41 PM
Pitdroid's Comments:

Outstanding story!!!!! I'm totally hooked, and have been since reading "Burdens of Choice". After finishing Part 2, my patience is going to be sorely tested waiting for Part 3. I have no idea what will happen, and am afraid to think what might. Please keep writing!

Author: FolorJH
Date posted: 2/11/2002 9:34:16 AM
FolorJH's Comments:

One of the best stories I've ever read. Definitely the boldest 'What If?' story I've read.
I'm hooked, and can't wait for Part 3.
I also like the Yoda/Leia interaction.
Yes, I have no patience...

Author: Jedi Tincri  (signed)
Date posted: 6/26/2002 6:46:16 PM
Jedi Tincri's Comments:

Excellent, wow and amazing, I couldn't get my eyes of the paper...
Keep on writing!!

Author: anakinchosenone
Date posted: 7/5/2002 6:11:06 PM
anakinchosenone's Comments:

awesome!keep up the good work!

Author: starwarsgurl
Date posted: 7/18/2002 11:39:45 AM
starwarsgurl's Comments:

This was the greatest I cannot wait until #3 I loved the Leia/Yoda interaction

Author: Mizhnari Windu
Date posted: 7/21/2002 2:53:53 PM
Mizhnari Windu's Comments:

DAMN GOOD!! We need the final part, NOW!! LoL I could be angry with you because this EPIC-type story, although an alt-universe, held my my attention for hours on end, while I was at work. Several times my supervisor caught me and questioned what I was doing. Of course being a JEDI MASTER with Legendary Lineage I used a mind trick on him and got out of work for a few hours more. Anyway, this fic rates among the elite. Try an not keep us in suspense for too much longer. <--JEDI SALUTE

Master Windu

Author: Deanna
Date posted: 8/12/2002 3:50:25 PM
Deanna's Comments:

I'm halfway through this installment, and though I like the story, you've MAJORLY contradicted yourself in it. Sometimes, Leia refers to having had a "peculiar friendship" with Vader as a child, and having known him before the factory on Laazum (or however you spell that). Other times, she says that she new nothing of him but stories and didn't meet him until she became a Senator. The first scenario is from Fernwithy's stories, isn't it? Been a while since I read those, but I can see this scenario being an outcome of those.

The other problem I have is in part one. The twins had to be hidden from Vader. Padme knew this. Sache and Bail knew this. Yet when Padme died, Sache sent Vader a trunk containing things like holos of her daughter and journals which talk about her children? Quoi? We can assume he never opened them, but if he had, the jig would have been up.

Author: Tony-Wan
Date posted: 8/29/2002 11:45:36 AM
Tony-Wan's Comments:

This story rocks! especially the part when it was brother(Luke)versus sister(Leia)Could you please make more stories like this?

Author: Lady Skywalker
Date posted: 1/21/2003 1:18:48 PM
Lady Skywalker's Comments:

So powerful!! Must read Burden of Choice to really get the full impact of this story. Wow and wow! You once again approve why I am in awe of your talent!!

Author: Nemesis
Date posted: 2/23/2003 5:35:59 AM
Nemesis's Comments:

I DON'T BELIEVE IT it's even better than Part 1. I love the scenes with Yoda and Leia - you did them absolutely perfectly. I can't wait for Part 3!

Author: jedilittlebee
Date posted: 4/30/2003 9:55:07 AM
jedilittlebee's Comments:

Loved part 2, now on to 3- It seems strange having Leia in Luke's traditional role, but you handled it very believably. Good work!

Author: han solo fan
Date posted: 4/9/2005 7:48:37 PM
han solo fan's Comments:

suuuuuuuuuuuccccccccccchhhhhhhh a womdahful story! can't wait for part 3! like the way u portray Han as such a dashing, brave guy

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