Date posted: 2/4/2002 9:58:31 PM
What can I say? This fic made me seriously doubt who really is the Chosen One. Anakin or Luke? To do that to me a fic has to be incrediably good, just like this one was. This is your best piece of work Em! Wonderful!
Author: Jedi Master Swelstad
Date posted: 2/5/2002 10:45:23 AM
Jedi Master Swelstad's Comments:
very interesting story. at work all day and couldn't stop reading it.
a lttle disapointed that the jedi treasure was taken away, but I do understand the explaination given. My only wish is that more fan fics of this quality will be written...
Date posted: 2/5/2002 3:53:33 PM
I thought this was really good and it was a very fun fanfic.
Although personally, I've always thought that it was really both of them that were the chosen ones.
Date posted: 2/5/2002 5:36:33 PM
Yes! Mcily, it got put up! Congrats, and it's fabulous, as you know...the history was very well thought out. Creepy at parts, and beautiful at others. I love Luke's flashbacks, too. :-)
Date posted: 2/6/2002 5:39:52 PM
This story is out of date due to [the fact that Star by Star contradicts an element]
EDITED for Star by Star spoilers -- FW
Date posted: 2/6/2002 8:46:27 PM
First of all, I loved this story! Bravo!!Secondly, in response to the comment above, FanFiction is *never* out of date.
We, as FanFic writers, are under no obligation to follow either the chronology or the events that take place in other forms of Star Wars literature. These stories are intended to be read and accepted as independent works of fiction.
On a more personal note, I think most of the fanfic here is far better than the vast majority of published SW literature. (Especially the travesty that is the NJO!) Because these stories are written by fans for the pure love of the series, not as a money-making endeavor.
Date posted: 2/8/2002 2:40:04 AM
man!! what a story I was really starting to doubt who really wasw the chosen one anakin or luke from the beginning to the end the story had me captured I really enjoyed reading it especially the end! (not because it was the end but because the end was beautifully written)
Author: Josh Matos
Date posted: 2/12/2002 10:39:27 AM
Josh Matos's Comments:
this story was incredibly well done. there are some points that are dated, (Star by Star, NJO) but other than that, it made me have second thoughts on who is the chosen one. Congratulations on a job well done.
Date posted: 2/14/2002 2:49:27 PM
That Star by Star thing may be true... but i for one refuse to belive that it happened
Date posted: 2/15/2002 10:47:07 AM
A very wonderfully written story but I don't think that Anakin would have named his son Luke.
And I don't think Tahiri would have let him name their kid Luke either. To bad [SbS spoiler], we could have seen if Tahiri and Anakin got together and had a kid a long time after they kicked the Yuuzhan Vongs butts.
Author: Mcily Nochi
Date posted: 2/20/2002 6:48:56 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:
Could people please stop posting Star By Star spoilers? I've already had to contact the editors, and would appreciate it if you would stop.
Otherwise, thank you for all the comments!
Date posted: 2/22/2002 1:06:09 PM
This story was good, but to far fetched for me. I believe that Anakin Skywalker IS the chosen one because he is after all, the one who killed Palpatine, ridding the universe of the Dark Side. Plus if you look at it from a different prespective, he brought balance to the Force by bringing Luke in the universe, so it was unnecessary that he be trained, so u could say the purge was for nothing.
Date posted: 2/24/2002 12:54:39 PM
This was so wonderful Em! I can't really describe it. Brilliant, wonderful, detailed, insightful!
(ok, so I tried ;))
Date posted: 2/27/2002 4:26:48 PM
Awesome I loved It! I really think Luke is the chosen one and Anakin Skywalker blew it when he went over to the dark side! Over all I'm very impressed! I loved it! Please write a sequal!
~May the force be with you!~
Author: Joanna Xux
Date posted: 3/5/2002 9:19:00 PM
Joanna Xux's Comments:
Their is one teenie, tiny, little problem with this story. The orginal Anikan had no father, Shmi herself stated this. Thank you. *Deep dramatic bow*
Date posted: 3/6/2002 7:44:18 PM
This was a really great story and I thouroughly enjoyed it. However, there were a couple of minor problems. These are only my views and they relate to comments that have been made, as well as with your story. First of all, lay off the SbS stuff! The story is independant of all that, and how does anybody know what Anakin Solo would have named his kid? I think having the boy named Luke was a great tribute to the great Skywalker. Anyways, there were a couple of typos in the text, which is really no big deal. I enjoyed the flashbacks, but thought they were too in depth. I felt like half of the story was a re-write of the original movies. Other than that, it was really great. Thanks for sharing.
Date posted: 3/31/2002 9:24:22 AM
Hey straight up this story kicked ass! It was great incorporating the old and the new. I am just really glad that someone took the time and effort to put this much detail into a fan fic. Keep up the GREAT work!!!
Date posted: 5/4/2002 9:32:08 AM
This fic gave me chills as I read it, I really hope the author continues the saga.
Author: Lady Cregga
Date posted: 5/20/2002 9:40:33 PM
Lady Cregga's Comments:
Great work! I loved your fanfic- the memories from Episode 1 really fitted into the story! The best bit was about what happened to Mace WIndu- I've always wanted to know...
Date posted: 6/18/2002 4:19:46 PM
All I can say is w o w. I've discovered fan fiction today, originally looking up stuff about Mara Jade, and the outcome of my search became something I had hoped someone would write about as an alternate ending. Anakin is my favorite character and it was really nice to read this story. On an offnote, Anakin Skywalker was the Chosen One. Without him, we wouldn't have had the Star Wars world.
Date posted: 8/20/2002 8:52:06 PM
I really enjoyed your story! You could easily expand on it, and I hope you do. Great job!
Author: Jeff 42
Date posted: 9/10/2002 9:40:28 PM
Jeff 42's Comments:
Overall this was a good story. The idea of Luke discovering the past was great, and the flashbacks were done well, but the writing could have been better in parts and a few elements seemed kind of cheesy (especially Lowie being Chief of State). From this and other stories of yours I can tell that you have some very creative ideas, and if you keep writing I'm sure you will produce some great stories in the future.
Date posted: 9/18/2002 12:29:22 AM
I like the story, having Luke see memories of the past to see what happened.
Date posted: 3/11/2003 10:05:58 PM
(In response to previous comment)
Ah, but the Dark Side has not been eradicated. It grows and thrives on the spectres of the Light. As long as there is Death, hate, and fear, there will always be the Dark.
Hmmm... I should write that down somewhere.
WONDERFUL STORY, MWA HA!
Date posted: 3/27/2003 1:31:09 AM
I was just wondering if you could tell me how many books of the NJO are there? Have you read them all
cause you seem to know alot about the NJO. Seems pretty cool. I've read fanfic's about it, but never
actually read any of the actual books.
Doesn't Anakin Solo die in one of them though? Can't remember how though.
On the fic; very good. I like how Luke S, was remembering things, how it helped him train his Padawan.
Very cool that they found that part of the temple and how they learned things, heard things.
And when Mara said Luke fell to the dark side once... was that it? No.. more soon!
I can't believe that the NJO don't know what gives them the force! Or about midi-chlorons.
Author: Jedi Dax Jentor
Date posted: 4/4/2003 1:23:49 PM
Jedi Dax Jentor's Comments:
The most amazing FanFic I have ever read. I think I might of shed some tears. What an amazing way to connect the past with the future, to fill the those gaps that the Prequels have created. Extremely convincing and not unbelievable as some FanFic authors have made it.
This was well written and handled the characters expertly.
I think I might read it again right now.
Date posted: 5/25/2003 9:46:35 AM
I have read a lot of fanfiction, and this is definitely one of the best. Great job!
Author: Master Garion
Date posted: 11/5/2003 12:21:12 PM
Master Garion's Comments:
Wow. I have just discovered this section of the site, and I have been reading everything in site for a couple days, but this is one of the best I have read. It really ties things together. Thanks for a new vision..
Author: The Stormtrooper Shrink
Date posted: 2/1/2004 8:34:05 PM
The Stormtrooper Shrink's Comments:
Hmm...rather contraversial in some respects. But yeah - I guess it's believable. Nice thinking outside the box.
Date posted: 7/13/2004 1:08:38 AM
It was a great story. I especially loved that you wrote a beautiful ending for Mace Windu, and that his death was not in vain.
I am also sorry that the Jedi artifactes were lost, though.
As to who the Chosen One is, I think this story does not state that Luke is, but instead lets us decide between Luke and Anakin.
Date posted: 4/6/2005 7:11:31 PM
Amazing! I also am begining to doubt who the real chosen one is. Anakin Skywalker and his son Luke have bothe done great things for the universe. And they are both very powerful. Meditate on this, I will.
Date posted: 4/11/2006 3:02:07 PM
anakins son will bring balance to the force
anakins son has brought balance to the force
let me see if i can translate this
anakin solos son will bring balance to the force
anakin skywalkers son has brought balance to the force
Date posted: 6/21/2006 7:01:01 PM
This is the greatest FANfic every. It is like a real book. Do more!
Date posted: 2/26/2007 8:56:17 PM
hmmmm,well done just doesnt cut it on this one.....great story.....again who is the chosen one....hmmm well done
Date posted: 11/3/2007 11:36:03 PM
That's wrong. The Chosen One is ANAKIN SKYWALKER!!! In ROTJ, HE was the one who destroyed the Sith by redeeming himself(destroying Darth Vader) and throwing Sidious into the reactor thingy, thus destroying the REST of the Sith and fullfilling the prophesy. LUKE DIDN'T do it. He didn't force Vader to redeem himself, Anakin made the choice HIMSELF to do it. He WAS influenced by Luke though. He just felt bad cuz he couldn't save Padme or his mom so he wanted to save his son. Did Luke kill Vader or Sidious? No. Anakin Skywalker did. So there.