Author: Naboos_Princess  (signed)
Date posted: 5/30/2002 1:59:53 PM
Naboos_Princess's Comments:

Wow, what an enjoyable story and interesting ending! Good work, Embra!

Author: jade gold  (signed)
Date posted: 5/30/2002 2:36:14 PM
jade gold's Comments:

A very good read! I thoroughly enjoyed it!!

Author: linda
Date posted: 6/2/2002 8:51:48 PM
linda's Comments:

A very good story I enjoyed.

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 6/7/2002 1:09:44 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Wow, I was not expecting that ending . . . Poor guy. Very interesting story.

Author: Lau-ra Anu
Date posted: 6/12/2002 4:40:49 PM
Lau-ra Anu's Comments:

Wait, I don't get it! Why did he die????? I'm confused....someone please email me!

Other than that, I thought it was brilliant. I'll probably think it's better when I figure it out....

Author: Rori Firehawk  (signed)
Date posted: 6/14/2002 6:38:05 PM
Rori Firehawk's Comments:

Whoa, what an ending, LOL! How'd he keel over, though? :-P Had a heart attack?

Author: ivanhoho
Date posted: 8/15/2002 7:40:26 AM
ivanhoho's Comments:

i enjoyed this story, but
why did he die

for that matter, how did he die

is there a link to the trilogy that i am missing

Author: Jairen  (signed)
Date posted: 1/17/2003 5:33:32 AM
Jairen's Comments:

I liked this! Great pace on the writing, some good descriptive work, and a nice twist at the end.

Could have been easy to miss the "by a growing tightness in his chest" comment if you rush through the story.

Nice twist.

Author: Marsh
Date posted: 2/28/2003 4:37:20 PM
Marsh's Comments:

I loved the LU-1E reference. If they made this into a movie, maybe Danny Devito could do the voice.

Author: L-Klure
Date posted: 9/4/2003 12:17:25 PM
L-Klure's Comments:

Great end to the story. I enjoyed Down and Out beter but this was one was entertaining.