Date posted: 5/30/2002 1:59:53 PM
Wow, what an enjoyable story and interesting ending! Good work, Embra!
Author: jade gold
Date posted: 5/30/2002 2:36:14 PM
jade gold's Comments:
A very good read! I thoroughly enjoyed it!!
Date posted: 6/2/2002 8:51:48 PM
A very good story I enjoyed.
Author: Mcily Nochi
Date posted: 6/7/2002 1:09:44 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:
Wow, I was not expecting that ending . . . Poor guy. Very interesting story.
Author: Lau-ra Anu
Date posted: 6/12/2002 4:40:49 PM
Lau-ra Anu's Comments:
Wait, I don't get it! Why did he die????? I'm confused....someone please email me!
Other than that, I thought it was brilliant. I'll probably think it's better when I figure it out....
Author: Rori Firehawk
Date posted: 6/14/2002 6:38:05 PM
Rori Firehawk's Comments:
Whoa, what an ending, LOL! How'd he keel over, though? :-P Had a heart attack?
Date posted: 8/15/2002 7:40:26 AM
i enjoyed this story, but
why did he die
for that matter, how did he die
is there a link to the trilogy that i am missing
Date posted: 1/17/2003 5:33:32 AM
I liked this! Great pace on the writing, some good descriptive work, and a nice twist at the end.
Could have been easy to miss the "by a growing tightness in his chest" comment if you rush through the story.
Date posted: 2/28/2003 4:37:20 PM
I loved the LU-1E reference. If they made this into a movie, maybe Danny Devito could do the voice.
Date posted: 9/4/2003 12:17:25 PM
Great end to the story. I enjoyed Down and Out beter but this was one was entertaining.