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Author: Rogue 8
Date posted: 5/29/2002 9:29:42 PM
Rogue 8's Comments:

The yong jedi seems more like Luke than like Anikan. He can control his anger, but the anger still exsists. Also, he says many of the things Luke siad, under the same mision. The name another is brilliant. It shows that vader is used to this. It shows what a horible rutine he lives in. I probably should go queit now, and write a rave review.

Author: Raggo
Date posted: 5/29/2002 10:14:56 PM
Raggo's Comments:

This was a well-written tale. It had strong characterization in its short format and we were allowed to feel very strongly about who the characters were, and what they were involved in. This work is really more of a metaphor or microcosm as its name implies. It is not a specific clash between two named and known characters. It is more of Vader versus the Jedi Order and Ideal, than a fight between two guys with light sabres. The young Jedi is merely a representation of "just ANOTHER Jedi." The story is also particularly well-crafted in that you feel like you are almost reading a confrontation between Luke and Vader years before it happens. It helps reinforce George Lucas's original ideal that the son would redeem the father. Even though this young Jedi could not redeem him using the same technique’s. Vaders inability to kill his own son makes what Luke has to say much more significant

Author: Othello9
Date posted: 5/29/2002 10:15:24 PM
Othello9's Comments:

Unfortunately, "Another" does little to acomplish
what "Star Wars" is all about: exciting the imagination.
The young nameless Jedi is as flat as Captain Typho,
and Vader is a pale shadow of his Feature Film self.
This bit of fanboy indulgence doesn't explore or examine
any of Vader's psychology or personality. It is simply
a quick lightsaber duel among millions. If creativity and
imagination are what we all love about "Star Wars," why
does most fanfiction have so little of them?

Author: C-dog
Date posted: 5/29/2002 11:25:18 PM
C-dog's Comments:

Nice story. A good 'glimpse' at the jedi purge. I don't believe, however, that the average jedi will know that Vader was Skywalker. They will think that Skywalker is dead. But that's just my understanding. I guess we'll find out in Ep 3.

Author: Garathor Riod
Date posted: 5/29/2002 11:59:37 PM
Garathor Riod's Comments:

I thought that this story was extreamly well written. I've always imagined the way that Vader would hunt down Jedi Knights and i think that you have summed it up very well. But i can't help think that Vader would much rather choke his victims then put a lightsaber through their head. I would think that he would like them to suffer.

Author: Jordan
Date posted: 5/30/2002 1:13:45 PM
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Author: Darth Lothi
Date posted: 5/31/2002 10:14:48 AM
Darth Lothi's Comments:

Nice job, Mar. I like the way you kept the young Jedi anonymous, and Vader's attitude that it was "just another Jedi" to be exterminated.

Author: Ceraih Fett
Date posted: 5/31/2002 12:25:51 PM
Ceraih Fett's Comments:

short, but sweet. man, how can u people write shoet stories! My outlines r like novels. man...

Author: Master Syfo-Dyas
Date posted: 6/4/2002 11:13:52 PM
Master Syfo-Dyas's Comments:

Nice short story. Many people never realized that Vader hunted the jedi...very expanded universe...

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 6/5/2002 5:45:41 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Very nice, Mar! *hugs* I love the glimpse of the Jedi purges. Not many fics are written about them, perhaps because we know very little about that time. The purges are barely mentioned in the Original Trilogy, and hardly expanded beyond that in the books. Very cool.

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 6/5/2002 5:47:12 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Very nice, Mar! *hugs* I love the glimpse of the Jedi purges. Not many fics are written about them, perhaps because we know very little about that time. The purges are barely mentioned in the Original Trilogy, and hardly expanded beyond that in the books. Very cool.

Author: Kenya Starflight  (signed)
Date posted: 6/5/2002 6:47:00 PM
Kenya Starflight's Comments:

Excellent job! I loved this! Though it's short, it's to the point and kept my attention better than a long fic would. Hope to see more of these.

Author: Nikkos Tyris  (signed)
Date posted: 6/11/2002 1:34:05 PM
Nikkos Tyris's Comments:

Yeah, most people I submitted my novel to hated it! :( *sniff* not that I blame em. I guess my plot didn't hold anyone for very long. I tried.

Author: Lina Skye
Date posted: 6/11/2002 1:48:10 PM
Lina Skye's Comments:

In the words of Darth Vader: "impressive, most impressive..."

This is a magnificent portrayal of the Jedi purge! I used to have a little difficulty imagining it, but all of the fog is cleared!!! THANK YOU!!!!

beautiful job! keep up the good work!

Author: Mar17swgirl  (signed)
Date posted: 6/11/2002 2:19:58 PM
Mar17swgirl's Comments:

Thanks a lot for all your comments! :) This is my first story I submitted to the archives and I'm very happy that it got accepted (because English is not my first language and it's sometimes difficult for me to express myself well in English). And I'm very glad that you liked it. Thanks again! :)

Author: Alastor Zim
Date posted: 6/11/2002 3:14:59 PM
Alastor Zim's Comments:

Although a vingette, there wasn't much to it in terms of plot. But I thought the actual text was good. Your narrative was written well, especially for Vader's thoughts. I gave it an eight.

Author: Ceriah Fett
Date posted: 6/11/2002 4:36:14 PM
Ceriah Fett's Comments:

i forgot to mention how cool the ending was. i like endings the don't end completly happy. makes the story intrusting and leaves space for a sequle! Good Job man!

Author: A-Karenda
Date posted: 6/18/2002 10:56:04 AM
A-Karenda's Comments:

This is a thoughtful story (usually i find really short stories a bit pointless - sorry!) this is interesting and the characterisation of Vader seems perfect to me! I love the cover, its really great and matches the theme of the story (just another jedi) perfectly - thats what made me read the story.

Author: Xizor
Date posted: 6/20/2002 8:08:19 AM
Xizor's Comments:

Well, this is a nice little story. It is interesting, yes but you could have created a trilogy on this. I really (mean REALLY) liked the way Vader killed the poor fellow.

Author: Liqiud Rhapsody
Date posted: 6/30/2002 7:41:51 PM
Liqiud Rhapsody's Comments:


Author: Darth Fanatic
Date posted: 6/30/2002 10:30:32 PM
Darth Fanatic's Comments:

Well done!! I enjoyed reading "Another". The movies Tell about Vader's past and Death but nothing really in Between. "Another" well expresses how Vader spent his time and how deeply
Anakin Fallen into the darkside.
There should be stories like it!!

Author: Nad-To Ann
Date posted: 8/4/2002 12:21:54 PM
Nad-To Ann's Comments:

I loved the story, even though the Jedi died. Very creative. Unlike mine. Is there any chance that you could give me writing lessons?

Author: jedimaster
Date posted: 3/27/2003 7:26:52 PM
jedimaster's Comments:

VERY COOL! I always wanted to hear some stuff about the Jedi Purge. I can't wait until ep 3. It is too long! I think more of us should start to try stories like this. I might want to make one of my own. Once again, AWESOME!

Author: Chickenman_Unlimited  (signed)
Date posted: 4/5/2003 7:40:32 AM
Chickenman_Unlimited's Comments:

Very good short story. It had a good storyline. I think the art goes very well with the story and I like the name. It really makes you realize that during the purges, this is what Vader did all the time. It was a daily task. I think the actual battle should have been drawn out more. I think you could have done more in the battle. I still give it an eight.

Author: Jake DUnlap
Date posted: 4/14/2004 5:46:37 PM
Jake DUnlap's Comments:

WOW! That was amazing...

I really felt the anger and darkness of this story and just...WOW! I could really see this taking place during the jedi purges...

Excellent Work friend!

Author: Darth_Sion  (signed)
Date posted: 8/7/2004 7:50:44 PM
Darth_Sion's Comments:

Another is, unfortunetly just what its name implies another story among millions which doesn't stand out. It's a fight between a nameless Jedi and Darth Vader. It's just nott what I hoped. The characters are not explored so at the time of death i couldn't care less if the jedi dies. 6 out of 10.

Author: ChaoticJedi
Date posted: 11/12/2004 8:22:06 AM
ChaoticJedi's Comments:

This was written really well. I like how you had the Jedi toy with Vader, easily being able to read his emotions and thoughts about his past. Good job.

Author: SithLord13
Date posted: 7/8/2005 9:52:52 PM
SithLord13's Comments:

I enjoyed it. Well Done!

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