Author: JediShampoo  (signed)
Date posted: 8/5/2002 5:05:50 PM
JediShampoo's Comments:

Nice. I think Padme resembles a young Leia very much, and you brought this out well without being too forceful about it.

Author: Viari Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 8/5/2002 5:33:34 PM
Viari Skywalker's Comments:

Wow, I really liked this work! I love anything with Vader and his children in it...I am a Skywalker family fan through and through! You did an excellant job! Just one question...you mentioned "women" and losing them one after the other. Call me stupid for asking, but did you mean Shmi and then Padmé? Sorry if that was a dumb or obvious question. Anyway, it was a great story!

Author: Leif
Date posted: 8/7/2002 8:49:43 AM
Leif's Comments:

very touching. i loved the fact that vader blames this girl on allowing the emotions to resurface in him...

Author: Bant428  (signed)
Date posted: 8/7/2002 3:19:46 PM
Bant428's Comments:

Nice. The only thing I didn't understand was the plural "women." I mean, I would expect Vader to stay faithful to Padme's memory. I liked how subtle, short and sweet it is.

Author: PhantomSith
Date posted: 8/8/2002 11:45:56 AM
PhantomSith's Comments:

I think the author is definitely referring to Shmi and Padme. Personally, I think Leia bears a stronger resemblance to her grandmother, Shmi, than to her mother, but the resembalnce is there on both sides, nonetheless.

I think this story would've been better had it used dialogue from the film. I love the story as is, but I personally find these types of tales to be more effective when using a familiar setting, and then filling in the gaps with internal monologue and emotional insight.

Excellent work, overall. I'd love to see more like this!

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 8/25/2002 1:33:55 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Very interesting, if short, vignette. I especially liked the last line, about destroying her father. Little does he know who her father really is . . .

Author: Jenowa
Date posted: 9/2/2002 8:16:58 PM
Jenowa's Comments:

I thought it was excellent!! It kept my attention, and it was entertaining

Author: SailorStarz  (signed)
Date posted: 9/8/2002 4:57:31 PM
SailorStarz's Comments:

I really liked the way you wrote this scene. I could actually see how this could be apart of the real screenplay! Great-Job!
SailorStarz

Author: Shadow69
Date posted: 10/25/2002 3:26:39 PM
Shadow69's Comments:

well..in a sense it was almost a prediction through the Force.
He technically destroys himself when he throws Palpy down the reactor shaft and gets electrocuted by the Sith Lightning..maybe the author intended it that way

Author: Helen Vader
Date posted: 11/19/2002 1:35:59 AM
Helen Vader's Comments:

This is easily one of my favourite SW vignettes. You manage to do much on such a very small space. Great atmosphere, good character interaction, fabulous last line. ;)

Author: tom
Date posted: 11/20/2002 9:28:19 PM
tom's Comments:

could have gone on a bit longer, this is good but leaves you hanging.

Author: RebelPrincessPadme
Date posted: 11/24/2002 5:41:00 AM
RebelPrincessPadme's Comments:

I thought that this fanfiction was great! We always wonder what Vader must have thought when he captured and interrogated Leia. You've done a superb job of telling us the conflict within Vader. It was that same conflict that brought Anakin back. Excellent! Keep up the great work. I know I'll be looking forward to your next fanfictions.

Author: RebelPrincessPadme
Date posted: 11/24/2002 5:41:05 AM
RebelPrincessPadme's Comments:

I thought that this fanfiction was great! We always wonder what Vader must have thought when he captured and interrogated Leia. You've done a superb job of telling us the conflict within Vader. It was that same conflict that brought Anakin back. Excellent! Keep up the great work. I know I'll be looking forward to your next fanfictions.

Author: reader
Date posted: 8/10/2010 12:30:50 AM
reader's Comments:

as far as i could tell, Anakin was referring to Shmi, as well as Padme, and her handmaidens, who were his friends and co-conspirators