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Author: Jenowa
Date posted: 9/24/2002 5:58:40 PM
Jenowa's Comments:

I really loved this.

To me it was excellent. In a lot of the other stories I never feel like reading the whole thing, but with this, it kept me interest till the end

Author: Silverfirexz
Date posted: 9/24/2002 6:04:10 PM
Silverfirexz's Comments:

Oooh....I like this story. It's really interesting, and I like how you gave Luke a memory.

Good work! Keep it up

Author: galadrielskywalker
Date posted: 9/24/2002 8:54:19 PM
galadrielskywalker's Comments:

I've read a lot of fanfics and this is one of the better ones. I really,really liked it.

Author: Jenos  (signed)
Date posted: 9/24/2002 8:55:20 PM
Jenos's Comments:

I really like the way that you gave Luke the memory of his mother...a great fic!

Author: jacen200015  (signed)
Date posted: 9/25/2002 9:40:59 AM
jacen200015's Comments:

Wow, great fic. wonderful. :) A ten for you. :) :)

Author: Skippy
Date posted: 9/25/2002 10:31:39 AM
Skippy's Comments:

This was an excellent story. I love the premise of two Skywalker women interacting through time. You captured Padme` beautifully, her elegance and regal behavior as well as her humanity. It was nice to see a lighter side to Mara, and her reactions were perfect. The whole Sabe`/Obi-Wan thing I didn't like at first, but seeing how it played out made it worth it. Unfortunately, Obi-Wan won't get a love interest in the films. And I really like that Luke gets the memory he deserves. You captured his reaction just as I would imagine: completely devastated by such joy. Fantastic job!

Author: ObiWanGirl
Date posted: 9/25/2002 2:26:45 PM
ObiWanGirl's Comments:

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! I want to see Yoda babysit!!!!! I started cracking up as soon as I read that!

Author: Jedi_Kara  (signed)
Date posted: 9/25/2002 2:38:12 PM
Jedi_Kara's Comments:

I really liked the idea behind this story. I'm glad Luke & Mara get to learn something about their families!

Author: Master Redog
Date posted: 9/25/2002 3:43:39 PM
Master Redog's Comments:

WOW!! I think that this is most definitely one of the 2 best fanfics that I have ever read (the other being "Of Dreams and Destiny"). It brought me to tears and gave some wonderful background that is absolutely believeable. The words of praise that would do this story justice have yet to be uttered by anyone. Thank you so much for this wonderful work!

Author: Lady Padme
Date posted: 9/26/2002 6:06:35 AM
Lady Padme's Comments:

I really liked how you had Mara and Padme meet each other through the mirror...it was a very effective and compelling plot device, and I think you used Mara's native skepticism well when she first meets Padme. I wasn't so crazy about the Obi-Wan/Sabe subplot, but otherwise, I really enjoyed your story.

Author: Tahiri*Solo
Date posted: 9/27/2002 1:31:21 PM
Tahiri*Solo's Comments:

Awesome story!

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 9/27/2002 5:07:02 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Wow . . .

That was amazing, RebelMom! What an intriguing idea. It's always bugged me that Luke and Leia have no way to find out who their mother was, though I've often wondered why they didn't ask Mon Mothma or someone. What a beautiful wedding gift, too.

As always, you write Luke and Mara perfectly.

Author: Jaina Fel
Date posted: 9/28/2002 7:46:11 AM
Jaina Fel's Comments:

Wow!! This fanfic was great! I like how it told the story of the Skywalker women, instead of just concentrating on the men like in the movies. Keep up the good work, Rebelmom!!!

Author: Kindred
Date posted: 9/29/2002 4:58:13 PM
Kindred's Comments:

Loved it!

Author: Sebulba2179
Date posted: 9/30/2002 3:36:39 PM
Sebulba2179's Comments:

Aww... *sniff* I'm so glad this is archived, so I don't have to go hacking through the Fanfic forum to find it again. It's just such a beautiful story, one could read it a dozen times and always be touched by something. Just the right balance of drama, romance, sorrow and joy. You handled Padmé's emotions without a hitch.

Author: Christy
Date posted: 10/1/2002 6:15:46 PM
Christy's Comments:

Interesting story but I totally dislike the whole Sabe in love with Obi-Wan theme it is truelly insane.

Author: Viari Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 10/2/2002 12:35:20 PM
Viari Skywalker's Comments:

This is awesome, RebelMom!!! I loved the Padmé/Mara interaction, and the way the honeymoons paralleled one another. You really caught each woman's personality dead on. While the Sabé/Obi-Wan thing was a little jolting, I like the way you tied it into the story. Nice job!

Author: queen yoda
Date posted: 10/2/2002 2:24:56 PM
queen yoda's Comments:

What an excellent story!! I literally was in tears!! I'm so glad that Luke found out about his mom. And how Mara found out stuff is great too. A big A+++ to this story!!

Author: Barissa
Date posted: 10/2/2002 7:26:52 PM
Barissa's Comments:

Wow, Sabe and Obi Wan hook up??? Holy Crap! Mara Jade's dad, Obi Wan?? Wait a minute!!!! Thats like, wrong here!!!!!! Anyway, very well writen, makes me wanna know more about Mara!

Author: RebelPrincessPadme
Date posted: 10/4/2002 2:20:37 PM
RebelPrincessPadme's Comments:

Let me just start by saying, OH MY LAND THIS IS THE GREATEST FAN FICTION I HAVE EVER READ. And I have read alot of fan fictions. You captured your audience right from the beginning and kept us glued to our seat to the very end. I liked how you gave Luke a memory and added that last part about Mara's history. I thought it was so cool that Obi-Wan and Sabe had Mara. I liked how that sort of tied to Luke early on in life. It made me feel that Mara and Luke were meant to be since Sabe was Padme's handmadein and Obi-Wan started Luke's training and protected Padme. Really good job. I just can't say enough about this wonderful fan fiction. I can't wait to see other works by you. Wow. Keep up the fantastic work and you'll go far!

Author: Star Warz Nerd  (signed)
Date posted: 10/5/2002 7:41:39 AM
Star Warz Nerd's Comments:

This story was pretty good. I really liked. And yes, the Yoda baby sitting part was funny. Keep up the good work :)

Author: axle_007
Date posted: 10/7/2002 7:48:23 AM
axle_007's Comments:

A beutifully don story. Well written and captivating. I absolutly loved it!!

<>< Axle
Rom 12:2a, MTFBWY

Author: Qwi_Xux  (signed)
Date posted: 10/7/2002 3:11:29 PM
Qwi_Xux's Comments:

*grabs for a tissue again* Awww, Mom, this is still one of the most touching stories I've read. The angst of Padme, the joy of marriage, the gift that Luke got at the end (and Mara, for that matter) is absolutely astounding. I'm so glad it was archived; it really deserved a place here. :-)

Author: Jedi_Alea
Date posted: 10/7/2002 6:27:55 PM
Jedi_Alea's Comments:

This is one of the most wonderful fanfics I have ever read! It adds such a wonderful "what if" twist to the stories of my most fav characters. If only Mara could have had the family alluded to...but I would wonder how the Emperor would manage to pull her away from Obi-wan and train her as his Hand. I think it is truly wonderful that Luke received the gift of a memory of Padme'...if only he and Leia could learn of her in the EU! This is a story I will always remember! Well-written to the very end!

Author: Jedi Knight Leia
Date posted: 10/9/2002 11:09:33 AM
Jedi Knight Leia's Comments:

Awww.. This is now one of my fav stories. I loved the entire story. You did a great job writing it!

Author: Mizhnari Windu
Date posted: 10/11/2002 7:17:02 AM
Mizhnari Windu's Comments:

Good work Mom. I'm sure Dad is very proud of his lady. I like the way you show Mara in a different light. I enjoyed it very much. Don't put too much stock in any of the comments about the Obi/Sabe twist not working, it fits perfectly. There are some plot-holes but that's why this is called FANfiction. We do what we want. Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your work. JEDI SALUTE

Author: TellAndrade  (signed)
Date posted: 10/14/2002 6:52:13 AM
TellAndrade's Comments:

I really enjoyed this, I liked how you gave Luke a memory of his parents and how you tied Mara's as well( which was especially cool since we really don't know who Mara's parents are)

Author: Yodiss
Date posted: 10/16/2002 4:12:08 PM
Yodiss's Comments:

mom, you RULE at writing fanfic. you took advantage of the holes in the sw history (such as mara's parents) and made them very believable. there are still a lot of things we don't know about (hehe check out han solo's family tree...)
i loved the part about yoda's babysitting!
keep up the awesome work! i hope to read more of your stories.

Author: ShaydremMoon
Date posted: 10/20/2002 10:47:57 AM
ShaydremMoon's Comments:

Great job, I really liked your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author: rangerkom
Date posted: 10/22/2002 11:28:41 AM
rangerkom's Comments:

I liked this story, i only didn't like the part with Sabe/Obi-wan(a jedi shall not know...hate nor love). I like how the memory was put, so it still fit that he didn't remember in ROTJ.

Author: jedi Aarronn
Date posted: 10/22/2002 5:13:13 PM
jedi Aarronn's Comments:

what a great tie in and this story would make a great novel .
I hope this information is added to mara and lukes histories

P.S jedi must have get married other wise where did all the jedi come from?
and all our hero's who have jedi for fathers,mother, etc.

Author: JediDad
Date posted: 10/22/2002 7:05:05 PM
JediDad's Comments:

A Fantastic piece of SW fiction. Masterfully written. It would make an excellant paperback.
My compliments.

Author: Jedi-Jae
Date posted: 10/27/2002 4:29:01 PM
Jedi-Jae's Comments:

Wow, RebelMom, that was fantastic! I never thought much about Mara and Padme as kindred spirits, but after reading this, I can definitely see them that way. I love the thought of Mara persuading Padme to leave Luke a memory.

Author: Mike Frost
Date posted: 10/31/2002 4:46:46 PM
Mike Frost's Comments:

In one word AWESOME!!!!!!!! I really like the way it ended. Thank you for a very enjoyable read. Good luck with future stories.

Author: The Brain
Date posted: 11/1/2002 4:55:23 PM
The Brain's Comments:

Awesome. pure and simple.
I kinda liked the idea that Obi-Wan also broke the jedi code of marraige. Kinda shows that almost everything he said to anakin was a lie,(ie. you will be a jedi... your peception is not that clear...)
N E way
great story, i printed it out and showed the few SW fans at school, they all liked it.
KEEP IT UP REBEL MOM!!

Author: karma k
Date posted: 11/30/2002 9:34:47 AM
karma k's Comments:

Gosh... I really need to comment on this. WoW! this was a very excellent story. The characters were captured very well. And even though this was the first time I ever heard of an Sabe/Obi-wan romance, It played out well. I must say this is one of the best stories I have read, and one of my favorites.

Author: JediSkywalker13
Date posted: 12/9/2002 1:22:32 PM
JediSkywalker13's Comments:

WOW! You made an awesome story, linking all the characters together wow! You made the whole point just make sence with Mara looking like Sabe, and Padme looking like Leia. Great Job!

Author: Ayse Naberrie
Date posted: 1/4/2003 2:34:55 PM
Ayse Naberrie's Comments:

EXCELLENT!!!!!

Author: Nova
Date posted: 1/14/2003 7:37:17 PM
Nova's Comments:

Really well-written story. Some interesting ideas. I'm not sure about the Obi-Wan/Sabe thing (Sabe and some other Force-sensitive guy would have been better, I think), but it is an interesting concept that Mara and Luke were somehow linked by parentage.

Author: Lans
Date posted: 2/3/2003 8:29:25 AM
Lans's Comments:

Very good story. I especialy like the Idea that Mara could be Obi-wan's daughter. Was that your Idea or was it in soem book?

Author: RebelMom  (signed)
Date posted: 2/3/2003 9:14:34 PM
RebelMom's Comments:

Thanks for all the nice comments. They are greatly appreciated. I thought I'd address the Obi/Sabe issue. I originally wrote this in 2000, well before EP2. I'd picked up the Obi/Sabe pairing in several fanfics and decided to use it. Even though I updated after EP2, I left Obi/Sabe alone because I liked how it worked in the story.

Thanks again. :)
RM

Author: Obi Anne
Date posted: 2/19/2003 9:35:15 AM
Obi Anne's Comments:

This was a wonderful story, one of the best I've ever read. I feel so sad for Padme, but still so happy that Luke will have a memory of her. I also thought that the Obi/Sabé issue was handled well, I usually don't like those kinds of stories, but here it was just so natural.

Author: jedi_anakin_lover  (signed)
Date posted: 3/11/2003 9:22:23 PM
jedi_anakin_lover's Comments:

This fanfic is excellent. I always thought it was terrible that Luke and Leia never found out what their parents were like before Anakin changed, and this did an excellent job doing it. *Applause*

Author: Valiowk  (signed)
Date posted: 4/8/2003 9:42:23 AM
Valiowk's Comments:

Oooh. This is cool. The idea of both meeting in the mirror is fantastic, especially that the both of them could "meet" once again, when it had been so long for Amidala, but only a while for Mara.

Author: Siri Ruane
Date posted: 4/14/2003 3:34:31 PM
Siri Ruane's Comments:

How'd this get up here?

Neat story, but Obi and Sache???

Author: DaRk_ShErV  (signed)
Date posted: 4/14/2003 5:23:01 PM
DaRk_ShErV's Comments:

Wow, wonderful! Wow! I am just blown away! Great fic.

Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 4/15/2003 7:58:45 AM
Quiller's Comments:

An interesting plot, nicely written. Thanks for an enjoyable read.

Author: Kaitu
Date posted: 4/15/2003 11:26:51 AM
Kaitu's Comments:

Excellent! A really neat "woman in the mirror" tale. Well done!

Author: Rona
Date posted: 4/22/2003 5:42:48 PM
Rona's Comments:

This was wonderfull, i had just been looking around for Star Wars fic in which the kids (Luke + Leia) find out about their parentage(help). what i didn't look up was Mara and Padme.

this is an excellent fic. it was written very well.it really flowed. it had the right about of Love (scenes) and exposition.

the Mirror communication was an excellent devise to use. ( i might use it in some form)

Author: Tiresia Darksaber
Date posted: 4/25/2003 3:44:45 PM
Tiresia Darksaber's Comments:

oh wow. This was great. I absolutely loved it. Didn't have much action in it, like I usually enjoy- but it just makes you smile. You did an excellent job. This is VERY GOOD. (times ten)

Author: KitKatSolo  (signed)
Date posted: 4/25/2003 4:43:52 PM
KitKatSolo's Comments:

Really cool story. Love it!

Author: Amethyst
Date posted: 5/4/2003 2:16:04 AM
Amethyst's Comments:

It's gorgeous! I love it very much! But the relationship between Obi Wan and Sabe is kind of strange for me. Better you search for somebody else than a handmaiden for his spouse. I love that Luke has a memory of his mother, and Mara with Obi Wan. Could you make a story about Obi Wan's wife??

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 5/14/2003 7:40:10 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

Great story! The whole idea of the mirror was brilliant and you pulled it off well! Thanks for giving Luke some memory of his Mom...that was such a nice touch!

Author: nicole
Date posted: 7/9/2003 8:12:45 AM
nicole's Comments:

Oh god, this is a great story. I love any story about Luke and Mara. I liked how you gave Luke and Mara the memories of their parents.

nicole

Author: DarKnight
Date posted: 8/30/2003 2:45:51 PM
DarKnight's Comments:

great story. loved every word of it. the obi-wan sabe thing was kinda wierd, but i thought it was a good twist. it leaves me with question on how the emperor got mara from obi-wan. you should do a story on how that happened, and how obi-wan and sabe connect.
two thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it

Author: dedegordon
Date posted: 9/8/2003 6:56:07 PM
dedegordon's Comments:

This is a wonderful story. I couldn't pull my eyes off the screen until I had finished.

Author: The Stormtrooper Shrink
Date posted: 1/18/2004 12:29:04 AM
The Stormtrooper Shrink's Comments:

Nice...nice. I liked it - it rocked! Mara/Luke stuff always gets me.

Author: jeeves
Date posted: 2/2/2004 1:13:51 AM
jeeves's Comments:

hmm...that was rather interesting... a tad bit weird, if only because the idea of such a conversation is rather...original? i dunno.. good job.

Author: tahiriina
Date posted: 5/31/2004 5:14:55 AM
tahiriina's Comments:

What an interesting way to give Luke a memory of his mother! I love Luke and Mara in this as well as in "Shackled Past". They're absolutely fantastic together!

Author: kehleyr
Date posted: 7/9/2004 3:39:41 AM
kehleyr's Comments:

Lovely story. But the part about Mara being Obi-Wan's daughter was a little too farfetched, like a Mexican "telenovela" where everybody is somebody's sister, brother or lost lover. Obi-Wan lived to a long age, so how come Mara never met her father? You should have left it at Mara telling Padme that everything turns out OK in the end.
Still, it was beautifully written and an original idea.

Author: Red5
Date posted: 8/20/2004 11:27:46 PM
Red5's Comments:

Iam very touched by this as i write it i have tears in my eyes thank you for a beautiful piece

Author: Im Mara
Date posted: 11/24/2004 2:49:29 PM
Im Mara's Comments:

I absolutly Love this story every time I read it, it brings a smile to my face. Right before I read this story for the first time I started a story where Obi-wan & one of Padme's handmaidens were Mara's parents. I really enjoy your story.

Author: doesntmatter
Date posted: 12/27/2004 3:17:57 PM
doesntmatter's Comments:

this is the 15th or 16th time i have read this and i still cry a little a big man at 35 this is a well thought well writen story thank you

Author: Darth Nos Rom
Date posted: 2/1/2005 6:21:39 PM
Darth Nos Rom's Comments:

I love the story, it makes an amazing connection between all of the movies and books... very well done...

Author: Imag
Date posted: 4/20/2005 5:40:39 PM
Imag's Comments:

*gasp* I could've sworn I'd left a comment already. This is like the 10th time I've read this fic, it's just too good!

Author: vortagespermanenz roulette
Date posted: 5/7/2005 3:45:47 PM
vortagespermanenz roulette's Comments:

Spam removed.

Author: ObiWanGreatestJedi2688
Date posted: 6/23/2005 2:01:26 AM
ObiWanGreatestJedi2688's Comments:

I don't really bother reading anything that involves any of the original trilogy anymore, sadly, but I read this story, and I love it. In that one paragraph where it tells us how PAdme was playing with Luke. If only George Lucas did it that way. Making Anakin think she had died, when she didn't. And then killing her after she spent some time with the children. That paragraph touched me deeply. It is a very good story. Thanks for writing it.

Author: Mara_Kenobi
Date posted: 7/11/2005 10:12:43 PM
Mara_Kenobi's Comments:

I loved this fanfic. it was soo awesome! the way you potrayed every1 was excellent!
P.S. this was the first fanfic i ever read so thats what my alias is ;)

Author: darthmatrix101
Date posted: 10/9/2008 10:10:17 PM
darthmatrix101's Comments:

AWWWW how cute
obi-wan and sabe was it??
funny
sabe and saba (saba the barabel)


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